Virman FF: Tale of two people:*Note pg 140* - Page 33

Originally posted by: naina927

first of all i am sorry anji... alley meli angel mujhse gussa mat ho na... please...!!!!

here goes my sorry gift for u...

part 3

it was fab but there was something that bothered me... the excuse manvi gave for breaking virat's heart... cmon she was being unreasonable... and virat who loves her like anything would never believe it so easily but he did... then i felt like knocking my sense into him n telling him to go n confront manvi... forget confrontation, i wanted virat to go n make manvi tell him the truth herself... ignoring manvi was the only option he felt was right... n i was like cmon dude.. go n win her... but the dinng table scene that followed was nice... i liked it...

ps : hope i didnt sound harsh n rude...

part 4

virat's dream was perfect n it clearly showed the pain n agony one goes through when he separates from his love. i loved these part very much...

Virat: (expressionless face)... Azad kiya tumhe,, apni life se,, apne dil se,, apne pyaar ki dor se... Ab na tum meri kuch aur na me tumhara... Ooh sorry.. me tou tumhara kabhi kuch tha hi nahi... But u know what.. me tumhe kabhi maaf nahi kar paaunga.. Chah kar b nahi..

Virat was standing by the window of his room looking at the stars.. He was in deep thought.. he was thinking that y all this happened always with him...Y no one loves him... He gave his all attention n love to her.. but what she did?? just broke her heart...
Its a truth that when u start to give so much importance to sumone.. u tend to lose your value in their lives.. The same happened with him.. Did a loving soul,, a pure soul deseves this?? The greater ur capacity of love.. the greater your capacity is to feel the pain... Was virat use to of it?? His heart broke into million pieces two times... will he able to over come the same pain second time???

Virat: Pyaar ka gehra samandar jo sirf paani ki ek boond ko tarasta raha.. jise kabhi apni pyaas bujhane ka moqa na mila,, vo badnaseeb hun me.. jis ne chaha apna banaya.. jis ne chaha chor diya...

this was just perfect...!!!!

TO BE CONT...

Originally posted by: shilpa09

first of all...sorry for late reply svty:(

i read it long before but was wasnt able to comment... sorry again...

now coming to update...

what should i say... u really left me speechless... the way u write their feelings...their pain.. its just fantastic... hatt's off to u anji...

ur ff is just fab like u...

u really made me cry again... how do u manage to write such awesomely...

loooved its every bit yaar...

Jeevika: I want my answer virat..

Virat: aap mere liye meri dusri maa ho.. Mom k baad mene aap hi ko apni maa mana hai'

awww...that was one hell awesome line in this part... virat so much repects and love jeevi like his mother... hope viren and jeevi bring them close again...i cant see them crying more...it makes me cry too...

omg!!!!!!!who's call was that? is virat leaving home... or that maya madam is back... u are scaring me now anji... dont do this yaar... i m really dying to know who was at call...

and that manvi's song... wow... that was so fab...i could imagine them both singing with that pain and tears...

and this last few lines... really stole my heart... fantastic lines anji...

Another Love gone wrong'

Another heart to Shattar'

Welcome to Reality'

Where feelings doesn't matters'

thnx 4 pm dear:)will be waiting for next part... :)

Originally posted by: Artii159

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Hey Anjali, m so sorry m late...Thnk u so much 4 dedicating dis update 2 me as well...Thnks a lotz sweety...love u 4 dat, n 4 dis awesome update...r u sure dis is ur 1st tym writing, cuz doesn't seems 2 b dat way, really ur an awesome writer...

Nw cuming 2 de update...it was as usual fantasic...fabulous, amazing...awesome, n wat not...luvd it..VirIka's scene was so emotional, poor Viren, felt really bad 4 him, he is so worried bout his brother..😭luvd da way Jeevika was consoling him, she is also going through a tough tym but still she's consoling him, dats was really very sad yet cute...he was continuously asking her 2 do sumthin, I really felt bad 4 dem,.,😭...

VirMan scene...She actually complimented him, wow, but Viraat, poor him, his comment was filled with so much hurt given by her..."Ooh' tou kam se kam yeh tou tumhe mere bare mein yad hai.. mjhe tou laga k tum meri har baat bhul gae hogi.." n den wen Maanvi replied sumthin other den wat was on her hrt was really hurtful...n den he asked her 2 leave him alone, m sure must've been really hurt saying her 2 leave him..god Anjali, dis is damn emotional..😭

JeeMan scene, god, dat was so sad, felt really very bad 4 Maanvi, she thought dat her Di doesn't understand her pain, but still doesn't mind her bitter words...Poor Jeevika, she was hoping dat her Mannu wud open up 2 her, but she didn't, it must b really har 4 her 2 say all dose things 2 her life...Jeevika's words were indeed vry hurtful, but it was actually needed, i guess...dat was really sad wen Jeevika said to call her Jeevika, not Di ne more...😭it wud b hard 4 her 2 call her Di Jeevika, n m sure it'll b har 4 Jeevika, calling her Mannu Maanvi..

Jiju Saali scene, beautifully written...it was so much emotion in it, he actually understands her more den her Di..(probably)..luvd it wen she said dat she doesn't luv Viraat, but den Viren said..."tumhari aankhon mein saaf nazar aa raha hai k tum virat se kitna pyaar karti ho.." n den his nxt dialogue.."mere liye jese virat hai wese hi tum b ho' me virat ka dukh nahi dekh sakta tou tumhara kese dekh sakta hun' kya tum apna dard mjhse b share nahi karogi????" Aww Viren is such a sweethrt...luvd da way he convinced her...n she was ready 2 tell him evrythin...

Viraat..😭😭😭 m really feeling really bad 4 him..he loves her so much, dat he can't even hurt her,,,haye mera Viru..god da sone Anjali...hamesha kehte hun awesome choice, as usual...n its frm my Salman's movie..☺️(sorry, m a big fan of his,,😃😛) amazing...

KYA SACHA PYAAR PAANE K LIYE DARD SEHNA AUR JUDA HONA ZARURI HAI???? (so true, I wud lyk 2 knw dat answer as well...)

Its really hard to forget sumone'

Who gave u so much to remember'

Absolutely right, u can't 4get da 1 who gve u so much memories...god hw much I luv ur updates Anjali...thnks a ton 4 dis wonderfulll, Awesomeee...Amazing...Fabulous, n Hrt Touching update,,,m so looking 4ward 2 da nxt update, as ur going 2 reveal Maanvi's helplessness...Its probably related 2 Maya or Tanya, or mayb both of em,,,Plz jaldi se update karna Anjali...thnk u so much 4 da pm..continue real soon, n do pm me...Luv ya..😊🤗

U know what i was desperately waiting 4 ur unressing.. when i saw ur comment i was thinking k itna lamba comment hawww kitina time laga hoga of u.. Seriously my feet r not on the earth by reading ur comment... thank u sooo muchhh.. 4 this lovely n beautifull comment... I will try to make it more readable c0z now a days m myself not liking the way m giving updates.. they all r bore i think.. but what to do aaj kal dimagh hi nahi chalta... but i will try my best to make it interesting... I will continue soon 4 sure...