Virmaan : U hv 2 come bck-idnm : 2 : Part-74 + NOTE - Page 84

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Posted: 12 years ago
Mujhe exams r over today naa...:(...
Way r u looks angry...
I said if i can...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lekharani_2k

Pls dont take risk how did u writing and giving ur exams , we will wait until ur exams are over ab jaldi nahi hai phele exams khatam karo useke baad u write ur stories bahut time hai serial end hone ke so no worry now u can be relaxed and write ur stories after wards


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my exams over now nd i m not in hurry bcz i don't care if serial end up or not.. Of course i like EHMMBH.. Bt i love my work ... Nd i never thought that i want more likes nd comments ... Just happy with one single like or one word of appreciation... My hard work was felt complete with this..
Nd also after my new college starts i m not abt to updated ... Even not in week in one sTory...bcz now i have to maintain long travelling with hard study...
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i also take care of my self.. Pakka...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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UPDATE IN HOUR OR 2WO HOUR...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry guys...
Kuch kam aa gaya hai..
Bt i promis aaj raat tak pakka update kar dungi...
Promis...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yaminnthida

Looking forward.. 😊

sorry for late.. Update in hour... Or in less time..
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Posted: 12 years ago

just going to type...
In some time update was here...
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-72
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All family members nd maanvi looking at him playing guitar..a loving smile crept on her lips..again her hearts going to numb towards him which she held from long time in front of him..she continuesly looking at him..
He playing guitar nd slowly opened his eyes nd looked at her directly..as he looked at her she imigeatly turned her gaze to other side nd looked away..
He smile at her action nd starts his song..
V-sang with full of love nd passion-
''hum tere bin ab rahe nhi sakte
tere bina kya vajood mere..(2)
all members get happy to hear this nd of course maanvi also..as she heard first line in his voice she imigeatly looked at him surprisely..
V-smile to see her again looking at him nd continu..
''tujhse juda agar ho jayenge to
khud se hi ho jayenge juda
kyuki tum hi ho...
Ab tum hi ho...
Zindgi...ab tum hi ho...
Cheen bhi..mera dard bhi..meri ashiqui..ab tum hi ho..
Tum hi ho..
He starts singing this lines with playing guitar passinotly nd with full heart..only looking at her..all noticed their eyes lock nd smiled..even viren also noticed something in maanvi's eyes for virat nd he starts believing on jeevika's nd vm's words..that she also has feelings for virat..
Here maanvi want to believe in her ears that he singing this song for her..with true feelings..it was not sympathy or not his guilt..he mean it..bt her mind stopping her..
Virat with singing expecting that she understand his feeling nd stop her drama..ncz some where he also knew that she has some feelings for her..
V-continue..
''tera mera rishta hai kesa
eke pal duri gavara nhi..
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
tuzko diya mera waqt sabhi
koi lamha mera mera na ho tere bina
har saas pe naam tera..
Kyuki tumhi ho..
Ab tum hi ho..
Zindgi ab tum hi ho..mera dard bhi..meri ashiqui ab tum hi ho...
Tum hi ho..''
with this last line virat closed his eyes nd starts singing last lines with more passion nd more lovingly..which make maanvi more restless..she feel war inside her...believe or not..she closed her eyes also when he starts last lines singing passinotly..
V-...
Kyuki tum hi ho..
Ab tum hi ho..
Zindgi..ab tum hi ho..
Cheen bhi..
Mera dard bhi..
Meri ashiqui ab tum hi ho..
Tum hi ho..
He abt to repeat his last line again..
V-tum hi..bt he stopped as he heard her shouting..
M-shouted-stop it..just stop it..she said with stood up from her chair nd looking at him angrily..truly she was angry on herself for not controlling her own feelings..
All members stood up from their places also..and with her shout virat imigeatly opened his eyes nd stop playing guitar..he put guitar on side nd stood up..all r confused nd shocked..
M-angrily-bas..bahot hua..karna kya chahte ho?..kyu kar rahe ho ye sab?
V-surprisely nd confuse also-walking near to her-maanvi..kya bol rahi ho?
M-vahi Jo tum sun rahe ho..koi jarurat nahi hai ye sab karni ki..koi jarurat nahi hai sab ko ye jatane ki k tum ya main hum abhi bhi eke ho sakte hai..ya tum mere liye kuch feel karte ho..plz..koi jarurat nahi hai..
All r shocked..
V-shocked-bt..main koi drama nahi kar raha..
M-virat plz..
V-nahi maanvi..main kuch bhi..kisi ko bhi nahi dikhana chahta..main sirf aur sirf tumhe..tumhe batana chahta hu ki main yaha sirf tumhare liye aya hu..kisi majboori ki vajehse nahi..
M-virat main janti hu ki tum yaha mere liye aye ho..
Hearing this virat smiled bt before his smiled get wide..his smile vanish with her next sentence..
M-tum mujhe lene aye ho kyuki tum abhi bhi khud ko kashoor var mante ho..meri life ka soch k apni happiness ko chhod rahe ho..jiski koi jarurat nahi hai..she try to make him explain her point of view bt this time her sense less thought nd decision makes virat irritate..
V-bas maanvi..he said irritately bt in low voice..kya bol rahi ho..main apni har ki gai galti k liye guilty hu bt uska mere yaha ane se aur tumhe vapish le jane se koi lena dena nahi..kyuki..main yaha tumhe lene aya hu..apne pyar k liye..
He finally said this..
All r shocked..specially maanvi..pyar..
She cannot believe what he said..pyar..
V-yes..pyar..jo tum ho..
M-shook her head in no.-nahi..
V-nahi?..maanvi ye sach hai..i..
Before he say complete three words she cut his sentence..
M-stop..age kuch bhi mat bolna..aaj suddenly ye pyar kaha se aa gaya?..hum to dost the aur kuch dino se to woh bhi nahi the..phir ye pyar vyar kaha se aa gaya..mujhe convince karne ka eke aur drama?
He shocked to hear this..drama..
M-dekho virat main ab aur kuch nahi janti..pata nahi tum ab aur kya kya kahoge aur karoge..so ab tumhe yaha jyada rukne ki jarurat nahi hai..tum divorce papers sign kardo aur kal hi chale jao yaha se..age jab tumhari jarurat hogi hum inform kardenge..
She said straightly nd walked out from garden angrily..means fake anger..leaving shocked nd broken virat behind her..others also shocked nd surprise..j nd vm follow her in house nd viren nd RK walked towards hall..dabbu saw virat hurts by her words..he come near him nd placed his hand on his solder..
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continue... From here..
Sorry for late..
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Posted: 12 years ago
super update
plzzz plzzz continue soon waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update ...
Bt sorry khushi can I take out my anger on manvi ..
Wats wrng with her yaarkoi isko zara si akkal to de do awei baat ko badhaye jaa rahi hai I know she is being selfless and misunderstanding par this is being tooo much ...
Now she is hurting virat alott by callling his love drama everytime...I just hope she understands soon before its tooo late
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow khushi,tht was beautiful..The song was perfect.. I'm happy that finaly virat confessed his lv for manvi..N as usual manvi refuse to listen him coz she still feels that he do this only 4 his family sake..Yeah,its vry difficult 4 manvi to belive in tht virat also lv her..N i'm scared,jb virat ko manvi ki pregnency k bare me pta chalega to wo manvi ko apne sath chalne k liye force krega,n again manvi yhi sochegi k wo manvi ki halat pe taras kha k ye sb kr raha n then manvi jane se mana kregi. Update soon.

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