Virmaan : U hv 2 come bck-idnm : 2 : Part-74 + NOTE - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: susmita12

Plz plz update soon.i am waiting for ur update


i m updating in sometime...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updt soon dear...i really cant wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow.. im totally speechless after da update... it was jst superb!!!!
khushi really da update was fabulous.. da angry virat is very nice.. nd poor manvi cz of his family she cudn't shout... hpe virat realises his mistake after he gets up...
omg da precap is awesome... plzz plzz cont soon nd im sry dat im commenting so late...
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-57
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After that unpredictable nd unbearable night finally sun comes out in sky..
In morning..its almost 10 a.m..
In virmaan room..sorry virat's room..
Virat wake up with starching his body..he feel his eyes heavy nd hammer headache paining..he hold his head in his hand nd try to opened his eyes..he rubbed his eyes nd opened with feeling pain in his head..he pulled himself up nd sit on bed with resting his back on bed..he looked around..
V-aahh..my head..yaar ye itna kyu dard ho raha hai..?..he make face..just then he heared voice come out from door site..he looked at direction..
D-woh is liye kyuki janab ne raat ko had se jayada pi li thi..nd he walked towards bed with tray in his hand..
V-lookin at him-dabbu..yaar bahot dard ho raha hai..
D-woh to dikh raha hai..isiliye nimbupani laya hu..jaldi se ise pi lo aur ready ho jao..aaj ghar me puja hai..
V-yeah..nd he looked around in room for maanvi..
D-kise dhundh raha hai?
V-taking limewater-kisi ko nahi..he said rudly
D-maanvi ko?
V-imigeatly looked at him angrily-mujhe uske bare me koi baat nahi karni hai..nd he put glass on table nd stood from bed..
D-virat..akhir hua kya hai?..kal se dekh raha hu..kya ho gaya hai tujhe?..dekh agar maanvi se koi galti ho gai hai to baat karke sulzale is tarah use aur khudko kyu saza de raha Hai?
V-dabbu Maine kaha na mujhe uske bare me baat nahi karni hai..nd he walked towards washroom angrily..but suddenly stop..aur vaise bhi ab baat karne k liye kuch nahi bacha hai..bas ye baki k 8 weeks beet jaye aur dadu ka promis pura ho jaye uske baad humare raste alag hai..
D-confusing-virat..tu to usse pyar karta hai na..phir kyu?
V-dabbu woh ek bhool thi..aur plz ab mujhe ready hona hai..tu chal niche main aa raha hu..
Nd he angrily entered in washroom..
D-worriedly-asa kya ho gaya hai ki virat maanvi se nafrat karne laga hai..
Nd he left the room..
Virat in bad mood take shower nd come out from washroom..he still thinkin abt her lies nd her meetings with karan which he saw..he didn't remember abt last night after his heavy drink..he just thinking abt last night maanvi nd karan nd try to remember abt last night..
He angrily threw towel on nd bring his kurta from cupboard nd wear..he come in front of mirror nd start bttoning his Kurta's button when he noticed some brushes near his neck nd chest..he come close to mirror..
V-narrowed his eyes-ye..kaise hua aur kab..he try to remember when he saw something on bed through mirror..he turned nd walked towards bed nd bring some pisec of glass Bengles on bed..he get confuse..he remember its same with maanvi's..which she wearing yesterday..
He getting worried nd feel something wrong nd negative feeling from his inside..he holding bengle pisec in one hand nd one hand touching his brushes on his skin..
He looked here nd there nd try to collects all things..he feel like his head spins in high rotting speed..
V-confusingly-maanvi ki chudi yaha kya kar rahi hai?...aur main to kal hall tha aur..
Nd one he slowly slowly remembering all moments..sorry bad moments one by one..he remembering how he take his car nd drove to house then hall..falling..yelling on her..his room..her entry..their fight..his words..her protection..her anger..his reaction nd..nd his bad words..
He imigeatly sit on bed..he feel guilty nd shocked..now he remembering that moments when he make her life destroyed..her purity nd her soul crushed at last night..
Bengle pisec fall from his hand nd tears slips from his eyes..his guilt make him feel worse person on earth..he closed his eyes tightly nd held his head in his hand nd cries his heart out..
He starts hating himself nd feel criminal of her..
After some time..
V-in between his cries-maine ye kaise kar diya..Maine maanvi k saath..god..nd he looks hear nd there angrily..just then he remembered abt her..
V-maanvi..maanvi kaha hai..nd he got up from bed nd come out from room worriedly..he rush towards hall nd looks around nd saw everyone busy in preparation of today's pooja..he wiped his tears nd searches her in whole house but she was not in house..he got more worried..after searching her in whole house he stood in one side nd moved his hand around his face nd hairs..worriedly nd he feels fear inside him..just then he was sunder his servant passed from there..
He imigeatly called him..
V-sunder..
Su-turned towards him-ji virat baba..
V-tumne maanvi ko kahi dekha hai?
Su-maanvi bhabhi?
V-haa..desperately
su-ji..woh kuch Der pahele ghar se bahar ja rahi thi..uske baad Maine unhe ghar me nahi dekha..
V-slowly whisper-chali gai?..shocked nd worriedly..
Su-aap abhi jage ho..aap k liye kuch lau?
No reply..
Su-virat baba?
V-blank expression-ha..looked at him..nahi kuch nahi..Tu ja..
Sunder nodded nd left..
Virat bit his lip nd stood liked drumsticks with placing his hand on his hip..
He try to thinking but he cannot concentrat abt his next step..he again feel his eyes getting wet nd his soul yelling from inside him..nd crussed his heart...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Updt soon dear...i really cant wait


i updated...
Plz check...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthi13

wow.. im totally speechless after da update... it was jst superb!!!!

khushi really da update was fabulous.. da angry virat is very nice.. nd poor manvi cz of his family she cudn't shout... hpe virat realises his mistake after he gets up...
omg da precap is awesome... plzz plzz cont soon nd im sry dat im commenting so late...


its okey...
Nd
thank u...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks for comments...
Nd sorry for late updating...
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precap after some time...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updt...thnk god at least he remember abt last night...i hope manvi is ok...but i dont want manvi to forgive virat easily...he hv to punish...i must understand her pain...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz update soon waiting waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊 amazing amazing amazing update plzzz jaldi update kerna is bar

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