I am not that easy ;-) {virman}Ch 18 on Pg 108

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Aliyah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

RES (CUZ I WANNA GIVE U A REALLY LOOONG COMMENT ONCE MY EXAMS ARE OVER😉)

AND DO CONTINUE SOON PLZ

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Deepika Asrani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

Lovely update Bitchh. xP
Goodness Gracious! Virat's so desperate. 🤣
He seriously needs to chill it out. xP
Haha! I loved the start. I thought he'll tell him. But.. 😆
And when Jeevika asked about the movie. 🤣
Hilarious and adorable they're. <3
Keep up the great work ;)

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vamps1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

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i still cant believe tht i missed such an awsomeee ss well now im behind u with my hath dho k lol bt honestly amazinggg story and moreover uve written it with soo much effort tht reflects and its obvious 👏 each and evry update was sooo much fun to read... umm ive read soo all the fifteen updated together soo cnt tell about each bt yeahh i think im going to fall for 1D evn i dnt like thm much bt manvi and all the lads bonding is beautifull the way sameer is protective barun is possesive arjun is her eating buddy and karan loves her soo much isss a treat to read ❤️ and not to mention virman are the best and will be foreverrr update asap plz

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..Zainab..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#594

omg omg omg omg omg
yeaaa u updated...
i know i have not commented after a those couple of beginning chapters
but i dint feel like it wen i read ur note
of not continuing it
i was so upset😭
but then yea ur back with a bang just love itt...
but please always stay healthy okayyy
okay back to the updateeesss
okay omg loveddd virat and manvi confession
best thing in the world...
first how manvi came running to him to tell him that christa was cheating on him
and she was shocked instead of finding him upset she sees him smiling
nd then he just pours his heart out to him omg
just loved every bit of it
then how he asked manvi and manvi being manvi told him to break up with christa
okay i couldnt stop laughing wen virat broke up with her and her reaction lmao
i can just see a sl** like her and making that reaction nd being upset and all
lmaooo
okay i just loveee manvis plan about tricking them into thinking that they are friends but not a couple... so manvish!...lmao loved all of their reactions though wen they saw manvi and virat cuddling together and sleeping...
and then going to the restaurant and wait before that loved
virat and manvi making out..uff so hot just loved their scene...
then the waiter starring at manvi and the jealous virat..so cute 😳
lmao and how he grabbed the paper out of manvis hand and yelled
shes not interested...hayyeee mera bachahaaa!!!
okay i dont even know why but i think i have a feeling that the boys know already about them
for some reason nd just are playing around with them like they are or maybe not its probably just my imagination...lmao
okay id remeber who said it but it was one of the boys saying virat manvi are gonna get married and have little kids ..aww so cute...
i just loved the update nd please dont ever again give us a heart attack by saying
u wont update...
update soonnn...
sorry for the long essay

and do pm me wen u update..😳

Edited by littles12 - 12 years ago