Originally posted by: niasharma6
I loved it. plzzz update soon.
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Originally posted by: niasharma6
I loved it. plzzz update soon.
Originally posted by: alicemath
Awww...Wot a Holi treat u hav given us Kajal...Luvd it to bits...🤗
Virman Confessed......stil cant blieve wot i read...The whole sequence was simply magical...They kissed in rain ...n the confesssion...everything was jst like a dream ...n u hav penned down their emotions beautifully...n more over nw dat makeup ki dukan z nw totally outta picture...Plzz cont soon...wanna c the boys n jeevz reaction ...Happy Holi dear...Hope u enjoyed well..Luv n huggies-AlicePS: I hav unreserved n commented on the previous update...😊
Originally posted by: Huma0301
Omggg yep ur ryt
Cuz I'm sooo happy
Lol the way he broke up with bitcha was fabulous even though that sounds harsh
Nw they're together again with a deeper relationship lets see hw long n if it will wrk well
Very very very nice update kajal
I wnt be able to read n comment for q month nw pp dnt mind
Bt wen I get bak in May cnt wait to read all the updates I'll miss
Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786
Firstly I am so sorry 4 not commenting on the last 5-6 chapters,
Have been extremely busy, but I have read all of ur updates!!
U are a superb writer, the way u portrayed everything from the characters to their emotions, it is all fab!!
All the chapters were mind blowing!!!
Virat & manvi's confession was amazing, and u portrayed their emotions beautifully!!
Once again I'm extremely sorry 4 not commenting on the last few chapters!!
Plz update soon, will be waiting to read more!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!
Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri
Kajal amazing update ⭐️⭐️.. Wonderful.. Finally Virman confessed.. Yaay!! And Virat broke up with that Christa .. So no more Bitcha from now on 😆 .. Loved the way Virat confessed his feelings.. And Manvi's reaction to it was just perfect.. Their kiss was damn hot Kajal 😳.. The way you have portrayed their feelings is just awesome 👏👏👏.. Really eager to the see the reactions of the Boyz and Jeevs when Virman will tell them about their relationship.. Loved the update 👍🏼.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care and Happy holi 😃
Chapter-14
*Manvi's POV*
"Viiirrraaattt." I whined as he tickled my sides. Today was literally the best day ever. Nothing THAT big really happened though. Just Virat and I admitted our true feelings for each other, Virat broke up with Bitcha, we made out, he asked me to be his girlfriend and now we're here. I can't believe how we ended up here but I can honestly say that
I love Virat with all my heart and I did all long.
So after all those events, Jeevika told me she was staying the night at Viren's house, so I suggested Virat stayed over considering how much we've missed each other's company and he agreed immediately. So now we're laying down on my bed talking about anything and everything, Virat constantly giving me a peck, and tickling each other often.
I've missed him so much and to be able to talk to him again just felt great. Conversation just flowed easily between us, it was kind of like breathing.
"Oh my god and you should've seen her reaction when Karan said that!" Virat said through fits of laughter. I was laughing like a freak too after listening to the story about our crazy Lou. "Shit, that's hilarious!" I said laughing uncontrollably.
Virat held on to me for support as he continued to laugh, "I know! If I wasn't so depressed back than I would've enjoyed it..." I suddenly stopped laughing, all traces of amusement lost from my face.
I sat up straight and Virat did the same, concerned. "What's wrong?" He asked worriedly. "You were depressed?" I asked
Virat looked down, avoiding my gaze. "Well...I-I um...kinda. It's just that... Manvi you're the most thing that keeps me happiest in this world and without you I can't help but feel depressed. I didn't have you and it felt like life wasn't worth living if I didn't have you in my arms." He said sincerely.
My heart squeezed in my chest. There was no doubts about Virat right now. I know that he loves me and that he'll never hurt me. And I feel the exact same way.
I put my hand on his cheek, looking at his eyes that were clouded with love. "Virat, I love you. Nothing will ever change that, remember that now okay? It may have took me a while to realize it but I've always love you."
Virat looked like he just entered heaven, the biggest smile etched across his face. He grabbed my face and passionately kissed me. You know that feeling when someone kisses you with so much love, you actually feel dizzy? As cliche as it sound, that's exactly how I feel right now.
I pulled away and giggled softly, "I love you so much, Manvi Choudary." Virat whispered.
"Your so sappy." I giggled. Virat chuckled and lay back down on the bed. He grabbed my waist making me land on his chest. I giggled and moved slightly so that my head was resting on his chest instead on my stomach.
I leaned into him, taking in his beautiful scent. Virat played with my hair, burying his face in it and kissing it softly every now and than.
"I can't believe your finally mine..." Virat whispered happily in my ear. I giggled softly, "I can't wait to tell the guys!" Virat said excitedly.
"And Jeevika. She's been convinced that we'd get married ever since she's seen us even look at each other."
I said chuckling. "So have the boys!" Virat said excitedly. I giggled once more. Suddenly a master idea popped in my mind.
I sat up straighter, "Virat... they've wanted us to get together for like ever, right?" I asked smirking evilly.
"Yeah." Virat said sitting up too, curiously looking at me. "So how about... we make their suffering a little further. We can say that we're friends again but we're not dating. We'll act all friendly and shit in front of them until it frustrates them so much THEY EXPLODE AND DIE!" I said screaming out the last part.
Virat chuckled and his shined the same way mine did, "That's brilliant... you're brilliant." Virat said smiling sweetly at me. I blushed deeply but quickly hid it, "So you wanna do it?"
"Of course! You know it's gonna be hard to resist kissing you and showing you of to everybody but they're reaction after they find out we'vie been together and very much in love the entire time will be priceless."
Virat said cheekily.
I chuckled. "I know right!" Virat and I fist pumped.
"God, I missed talking to you..." Virat said, his face probably hurting from smiling so hard.
"I've missed it too." I said kissing his cheek. He smiled at me, "So Jeevika's not here tonight..." Virat said cheekily.
I burst out laughing, "Don't get any ideas Vadhera." Virat pouted but soon enough it broke into a cheesy grin.
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"Mm... you're hair smells good." Virat said smiling into my hair. Once again Virat was laying on the bed with his arms tightly around me, our legs tangled together, while my head rested peacefully on his chest. We just lay there in complete and utter happiness.
I giggled, "Tank chuu, Hawwy boo." I said in a baby voice. Virat chuckled and kissed me cheek, "You're adorable." Virat whispered in my ear.
I smiled into his chest, "I love you." I whispered. "I love you more." Virat whispered back instantly with that beautiful smile on his face.
"Baby, can I ask you a question?" Virat whispered into my hair.
"Sure." I ask closing my eyes. "Why was it that from before you were so guarded and so willing for us to just be friends?" Virat asked lovingly, although he had a nervous edge to his tone.
My eyes flew open. I had to tell him... he deserved to know. I can tell him anything after all, he's my boyfriend and I love him. He needs to know that the reason I had incredibly high standards had nothing to do with him. But to tell Virat about that I had to tell him about... Ashish.
Ashish... that's a name I thought I'd never have to remember again. I thought I could avoid every possible way that brought Ashish to mind. I hated him... he's put me through so much pain. I loved him once and he'll always be in my heart but Virat's everything I want and more, he's filled up the empty hole that Ashish left in my heart.
Virat means so much more to me ... and that's exactly why I need to tell him.
"Manvi babe... you don't have to tell me, it's okay." Virat said stroking my hair.
"No it's alright, you have a right to know. It's just... I don't know where to start." I admitted.
Virat stroked my hair gently, "I wont force you to say anything baby but when you're ready to tell me, I'll be right here waiting. I know that you've been hurt before and in all honesty I can't stand it. I want to beat the living shit out of anybody who caused one little tear to fall out of you're beautiful eyes. I need you to know that I will never hurt you. I've waited so long to have you and know that I finally do I will never let you go." He said, his voice filled with love and passion.
A slow smile spread across my face and I knew right than that I was ready for this. Ready to tell him.
"I hope you know that you got yourself into this." I warned playfully. Virat's tinkling laughter filled the air. He kissed my head, "Oh, I know." He said.
My voice suddenly turned serious, and I took a deep breath starting my not so happy story, "Back when I was nine, Jeevika and I use to go to this park all the time in Mumbai. It was a small park and most kids in our neighborhood went to it." I said starting of with the basics.
"Anyways whenever we went to that park, there were always these group of guys that sort of teased us. Jeevika and I usually ignore them and it worked better when we were together. One day Jeevika was sick and she couldn't go there with me so I had to go alone. As soon as I got there the boys started to pull my hair,call me names, and torment me. I was about to cry since I was only twelve and didn't really know
how to handle that situation until he came along ... Ashish..." The flashback rolled in my mind as I explained to Virat how we met.
"Leave me alone." I said as all the boys surrounded me. "Ooh, is the little baby scared?" One of them said.
"I like your hair... mind if I touch it?" Another one of them teased as he pulled on the ends of my pigtails.
"Just leave me alone..." I said, my voice wavering.
The boys continued to tease me and I was close to tears. One of them pushed me and I landed on the ground with a cut knee. "Hey! Leave her alone!" A voice shouted. I looked up to see my savior, and caught sight of a tall boy with messy dark brown hair and deep blue eyes. He wasn't much older, probably my age but he was taller and more built and he looked like he could beat up those boys easily.
The group of boys scurried away, looking scared. A tear slid down my face and my savior hurried to my side. "Hey, are you okay?" He asked softly, removing the hair out of my face.
I looked up and he smiled at me. His smile was so sincere, so contagious that I had to smile back. "I'm... alright." I said.
"Your knee isn't though." He said frowning down at my knee. I looked down as well and caught sight of my bloody knee.
"Come on, my house is right across from here, we can get your knee fixed up." He said attempting to help me up. "Wait, but I don't even know you." I protested.
He smiled again. "I'm Ashish." He said. "I'm Manvi." I whispered.
"That's a pretty name." He complimented before helping me up.
"He was incredibly sweet and I instantly developed a crush on him." I admitted. Virat was listening carefully, his eyes set on me. Often he would stroke my hair or kiss my head when my voice shook a bit.
"He took me back to his house and his mum helped out with my cut. We spent the rest of the day together than, learning everything about each other and playing every possible game we could think of. By the end of the day we became best friends..." I sighed as another flashback came to my mind...
"Manvi darling, your mothers here." Ashish's mum told me. Ashish frowned and I stood up, getting ready.
"Do you have to leave?" Ashish whined. I giggled, "Yes but can you come to the park tomorrow?" I asked hopefully.
He nodded excitedly and I giggled. I turned to leave but before I can I was pulled into a hug. I hugged him back and we pulled away after a while.
"Does this make us best friends now?" I asked tilting my head to the side in childlike innocence. Ashish looked at me for a while but than finally held his pinky out, "Promise me that we'll always be best friends from now on?" I didn't hesitate as I connected our pinkies.
"After that we met up at the park everyday. He even met Jeevika and they became good friends. We always met up there and if one of us didn't come than it was an emergency. We went there literally everyday till we were 15." I explained to Virat. He nodded and grabbed my hand, encouraging me to go on.
"Eventually I started to fall for him...it happened so fast I didn't even notice. Although I do remember the day I realized I was head over heels for him." I said softly, as another memory played in my head.
"Higher, you idiot!" I yelled and Ashish started to push me higher on the swing. I know we were 15 and all but I never get tired from that swing. Ashish laughed like an idiot as I put my hands up. "You're adorable." He shouted.
I giggled but ignored the fluttery feeling I got in the pit of my stomach. Jeevika rolled her eyes at us as she continued to text god knows who on the other swing.
I jumped of the swing and landed on my feet. Ashish gasped and ran to my side. "Manvi, Manvi! Are you okay? Are you hurt?" Ashish said frantically.
I laughed, "I'm fine Ashish, chill." I said. He sighed in relieve.
"Never do that again, you could have got hurt, Manvi." Ashish said concerned. I rolled my eyes and couldn't help but giggle.
"You worry too much." I said giggling.
Ashish suddenly looked serious. He grabbed my hand and looked me straight in the eyes, "Of course I worry Manvi. I don't want you to get hurt because when you hurt...I hurt."
A tear fell from my eyes. All those words he said...lies. Virat immediately kissed the tear away. "It's okay, baby." He whispered.
I shook my head and continued. "Everybody would tell us that we should be a couple. Ashish always blushed and laughed it off but it meant something to me when people said that. Maybe it's because I agreed with them...either way, I really didn't wanna ruin my friendship with Ashish so I just kept my mouth shut. What I didn't know however, was that Ashish actually felt the same way..." I trailed off...here comes the flashback...
"Ashish, where are you taking me?" I asked as Ashish covered my eyes and guided me to his 'surprise'.
"Would you shut up? We're almost there." Ashish said chuckling. I rolled my eyes, mentally.
"You know, my feet are getting ti-" I began to whine again but was interrupted by Ashish.
"We're here." He said. Ashish removed his hands from my face and I almost gasped as I overlooked the scene before me. Ashish had set up a picnic with cute little candles lit up on them and a fancy looking basket on top. The best part was that the moon was shining right before us, looking brighter than ever. "This is...amazing. Why?" I asked turning around to face him. He was so close to me that out noses were touching. I was about to step back but he grabbed my wrists, keeping me in place.
"Because..I love you." He said bluntly. My eyes widened but they slowly went back to their normal size as I quickly realized the many meanings of 'I love you'.
"I love you too, you're like my older brother Ash." I told him smiling. Ashish squeezed his eyes shut, and than reopened them with determination clear in his eyes.
"No, Manvi. I love you...as in more than brotherly love." He said softly. My eyes widened once more and I barley had enough time to say "I love you too." before his lips came crashing down on mine.
"After that we started dating. We we're the 'happy' couple. The ones everyone thought would never fight and die in each others arms. Boy, were they wrong..." I said. Virat stared at me intensely, with protectiveness clear in his beautiful brown eyes.
"We were dating for a whole year. We spent almost everyday together, just enjoying each others company. One day he asked me to come to his house. He said we'd have the house to ourselves and that we can 'hang' out. I thought nothing of it since I always go to his house. Even though it was incredibly late,
I went to his house. As soon as I was there he took me up to his room to...talk. I didn't say anything I just went with him, thinking we'd be playing some video games or something." I closed my eyes and pursed my lips as I told Virat about what happened next.
"Let's go to my room." Ashish said as he led me to his room. "Ookay." I said as he closed the door behind us carefully.
He sat on the bed and patted the spot next to him. I furrowed my eyebrows but sat next to him.
As soon as I sat down, a pair of lips met mine. I gasped slightly and it gave Ashish the chance to slip his tongue into my mouth. I kissed back slowly but I didn't enjoy it.
I didn't like these type of kisses Ashish was giving me. Usually his kisses were soft and sweet but this one was hungry and lustful.
I pulled away and he looked confused as he tried to kiss me again. I moved my head away. "Ashish, what are you doing?" I asked.
"Um...kissing you?" He said it in more of a question. I sighed and let him lean in again to kiss me. His fierce and hungry lips met mine and I tried to make the kiss brief but he kept trying to make it last longer.
His hands roamed my body, and once hand slipped under my shirt. I pulled back instantly as I realized what he was trying to do.
"Ashish stop it. I'm not ready for this...I'm sorry." I said, getting up. His eyes became cold and hard.
"Fine, just leave than." He said icily. I scowled and left without another word.
Virat's hands were clenched so hard, I could see them turning white and his face was turning red from anger.
"That bas***d." Virat said in a dangerously mad voice. I soothed him down immediately. "Its OK Virat, I didn't let him do anything." I told him honestly. He relaxed a bit but his hands remained clenched so I grabbed them and tangled our fingers together. He instantly calmed down and he smiled down at me, encouraging me to go on.
"After that day we remained a couple but he was more distant. More cold... I tried making plans all the time and he would always make up excuses. Nevertheless, I still loved him." I said gulping.
Virat squeezed my hand. "Than what?" He whispered.
"It was our anniversary...the first day we met. He didn't call me or anything so I thought he might have been planning a surprise at his house or something. So I decided to get my gift to his house..." I sighed as I remembered that horrible day.
"Hi Mrs. Sana, is Ashish here?" I asked peeking in.
She smiled her welcoming smile and nodded, "Upstairs sweetie, although he had a friend over...you can go right up there if you'd like."
I nodded, thanked her, and ran upstairs. I was about to enter Ashish's room when I heard moaning. What...?
"Ashish..." A girl voice moaned. I instantly recognized that voice...Maini, the biggest s**t/wh**e in school that constantly bullied me. Ashish use to always defend me and tell me how much he hated her... f**king liar
I gathered all my courage and opened the door. Ashish was on his bed, with his shirt off, while Jamie was on his lap, kissing his neck and half dressed.
I coughed and Ashish looked up wide eyed. He saw it was me and his mouth opened and closed like a fish.
"Having fun?" I asked, glaring at him. Jamie smirked and he frowned.
"Manvi, I-I can explain..." He told me taking a step towards me. I stepped back immediately.
I smiled sarcastically. "Mhm, I'm sure you can." He gulped and tried to say something again but I cut him of..
"We're over. Have fun you too...oh, and don't forget protection." And with that I walked off just in time for the tears to come down.
"And that's why I'm so guarded." I whispered as tears slid down silently on my face. Virat wiped them away with
his thumb and pulled me in for a hug. He buried his face into my hair as I cried silently into his chest.
He pulled away suddenly and looked me straight in the eye with a dead serious expression.
"I would never do that to you Manvi, I love you so f**king much and cheating on you would be like winning the lottery and than throwing it away." I giggled at his description and he smiled at me.
He leaned down slowly and gave me a sweet but passionate kiss on the lips.
I kissed back slowly and we both pulled away at the same time, our eyes burning with love.
"I love you." I whispered.
He smiled, "I love you more."
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