Originally posted by: zaira_virman
It's an awesome story dear and u r a wonderful writer...can't wait dear...plz cont soon
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Originally posted by: zaira_virman
It's an awesome story dear and u r a wonderful writer...can't wait dear...plz cont soon
Originally posted by: nishal310
wow kajal what a superhit fantastic and mindblowing update yaar.i enjoyed the every bit of it. you wrote very well yaar👏👏👏 i am feeling like jumping and dancing when virat yelled at that bitcha for manvi virat's outburst on bitcha was just muahhh❤️😳😳 and his dialogue was fantastic i loved it when he described manvi's beauty in his own words
"How dare you say that!? Manvi is drop-dead gorgeous, okay! I'm sorry that your jealous of her beauty since you don't even have any but I will not allow you to say that! Your right about one thing though, she doesn't even make a effort and she still looks like the most beautiful girl in the world!
Wanna know the best part? It's natural beauty, something I'm sure you never heard of! Beauty on the outside AND on the inside. You will never be half as beautiful as Manvi."
haye his dialogue won my heart. aww when virat saw manvi he can't takes his eyes off from her haye😳😳
and virman kissed in rain😲😲 now eagerly waiting for the next part. plz plz plz plz update soon
thanks for the pm😊
take care🤗
Originally posted by: Geminimanna
Hey Kajal,
Thanx for saving me bcz I felt like going through a nervous breakdown after reading the previous updates. I wasn't able to comment bcz of some problem with my IF account and it was very disturbing for me.As for the the update it was marvelous. Finally Virat stood up for Manvi and backfired to Christa. That was my first relief breath after so many days. Then he saved Manvi but tried to escape one last time from the magical love by denying her truth. But who could,ve survived the enchantment of love? They did, as they have to surrender to love. They kissed...and Manvi responded, now I can at least see a ray of hope for their future.Thanx for pm and such beautiful and fast updates.
Originally posted by: copypaste
Wen r u updating
Originally posted by: yaminnthida
Superb update kajal...👏👏👏...really loved it...😊...tat christa...i m gonaa kill her...😡...how dare she like about manvi..😡...loved the virat outbrust on tat bitch christa...😃...loved the jeeman moments...😳...i m loving karan a lot...he is so adorable...😳...i was smiling thorughout the whole update...hayee...virat can't take his eyes off manvi......n the ending ...awwn...romantic yaar...😳...virman kissed under pouring rain...eeks... ...kya scene tha...juz loved it...can't wait for the next update kajal...plz continue soon if possible...will be eagerly waiting...thank u so much for the pm...😊
Chapter-13(B)
*Manvi's POV*
I was in the middle of screaming at Virat when it happened. I remembered at that time I was so incredibly furious... how can he accuse me of being jealous!? I mean sure I didn't like Christa but I'm not the jealous type. I was arguing with him about it and in the middle of my screaming the most unexpected thing happened. Virat grabbed my face and kissed me. I was so in shock that I staggered back a bit.
I didn't know why I did it since I was so mad at him but the taste of his lips made me realize how helplessly in love with him I am. When I realized what was happening, I began kissing back. Virat seemed surprised as he moved his hands down to my waist. I placed my arms gently around his neck, tugging at his hair. Before I knew it, I was pushed to the wall with Virat passionately kissing me.
Words can't describe what I felt in that kiss. Fireworks. Sparks. Butterflies. And mostimportantly... love. I felt Virat grin widely into the kiss and my heart almost burst out of my chest. The kiss began to get a little more heated. Virat's hands traveled up and down my body. He licked my bottom lip, desperately asking for an entrance.
I decided to tease him so I kept my mouth shut. Virat smirked into the kiss and his hand traveled down to my bum. He grabbed it and I opened my mouth, in shock. Virat took that as his chance and immediately slid his tongue in my mouth. I didn't know how long we stood there, snogging in the pouring rain but when we finally pulled away we were breathless.
We gazed into each others eyes for a while and a dazed smile appeared on Virat's face. He had a bright twinkle in his eyes that I've never seen before. My heart squeezed, knowing I caused that.
"Do you believe me now?" I finally broke the silence.
Virat nodded, still in daze. He finally blurted out, "I don't even care."
I tried hard not to show the surprise on my face but I guess it did because Virat chuckled. "Well, I'm not sure about you but technically when a girl cheats on a boy, he tends to care." I teased.
"God, I missed you." Virat breathed out.
I cracked a smile but it instantly changed into a frown, "Well, you're the one who randomly went out of my life without an explanation."
Virat frowned and I knew that hurt him as much as it hurt me. "You will never know just how sorry I am, Manvi. I have an explanation...an explanation for everything actually. For walking out of your life. For being mean and distant. For going out with Christa..."
"Well than please, enlighten me!" I snapped.
Virat took a deep breath, looking down. "Um...I...well..."
"There you go! You don't have an explanation...I knew it." I said beginning to walk away.
"Manvi!" Virat exclaimed, grabbing my hand and twirling me around to him again.
"Manvi, the truth is...the reason...IT'S BECAUSE I'M IN LOVE WITH YOU MANVI! Okay...I'm in love with you. I knew you only thought of me as a friend and my heart just couldn't handle being thought of as 'just a friend' so I had to be cold and distant. But trust me, now I know that was the biggest mistake of my life. Manvi, I love you and nothing can change that. I thought maybe avoiding you would help avoid these feelings but they just keep getting stronger everyday. I thought about you literally every second of every single day. You are the most beautiful girl in the world. On the outside and on the inside. I needed you so bad...and I couldn't have you so I decided to get a distraction instead. And that's where Christa comes in. She means nothing to me...I just thought she'd help me get over you. Boy, was I wrong! She only made me realize that there's no other girl out there for me...only you. I love you so much Manvi. That's why I messed everything up..." He rambled with tears glistening his eyes.
My mouth hung open in shock. Virat loves me...he actually loves me. I smiled through the pouring rain and put my hand on his cheek lightly. Virat's hand immediately went over my hand, keeping it in place. I stood on my tippy toes and lightly kissed his lips. He tried to deepen it but I pulled away, giggling.
"I love you too, silly!" I said grinning. The biggest smile in the world overtook Virat's face. He laughed a laugh of joy and picked me up, twirling me around. I giggled uncontrollably clutching to his shoulders. He chuckled and finally placed me down.
"Now what?" I asked, smiling.
"Say it again." Virat demanded.
I giggled, "I love you! But now on to serious businesses." I said putting on my serious face. Virat chuckled, pulling me closer by the waist. "Manvi Choudary, will you please make me the happiest man in the world and be my girlfriend?" Virat asked nervously.
I giggled softly. "No." I said seriously. "No?" Virat asked confused and hurt. I smirked, "Virat, I want to be your girlfriend..." A giant smile overtook his face again.
"But you have a girlfriend!" I said in a 'duh' tone. His smile didn't falter one bit. "I'm breaking up with her! Right now, even!" Virat said excitedly. I smiled warmly at him.
"Okay...but don't hurt her feelings alright? Say it nicely." I said seriously. Virat's eyes were filled with love as he pulled me in a hug. "I'm breaking up with Christa. The girl who's been nothing but mean to you and your friends, and you want me to be nice to her? Your amazing Manvi...and your all mine."
Virat said smiling happily.
I giggled. "Not yet!" I said shooing him.
*Virat's POV*
"Not yet!" Manvi's tinkling giggles filled the air. I gave her a quick peck in the lips. "Be right back! I love you!" I said once more before entering the club.
I smiled to myself. Manvi loves me! She actually loves me back. Today is literally the happiest day of my life. It beats the day I auditioned for X Factor. It beats the day we won our very first award. It even beats the day One Direction was formed. Yeah, that's how happy Manvi makes me.
And she will finally be mine...I just have to break up with Christa. I let my eyes roam around, looking for that similar fake blond. I finally found her snogging some random dude in the middle of the dance floor. How classy...
I chuckled to myself as I walked over to her. I really didn't give a shit, I've been dying to break up with her.
I tapped her shoulder and she finally broke the kiss, turning around.
She wiped some slobber of her lip which made me eternally sick. As soon as she noticed it was me, she looked completely unfazed. "Virat, baby!" She said moving in for a kiss.
I moved away instantly. "So look I was thinking you could pack your bags tonight and leave tomorrow morning or if it's really not a bother, maybe you could leave tonight a-"
I was cut of by Christa's high pitched voice. "What are you talking about baby?" She asked confused.
"Look I know your tiny brain might not be able to process this but I want you to at least try. You and I are over. I don't like you let alone love you, so your either leaving tonight or tomorrow morning, whichever works best." I said slowly.
I began to walk away before she explodes. "Whatever, you were a bore anyway!" She yelled. I chuckled and jogged the way back, eager to get to my Manvi.
When I walked back outside, I saw she was dancing around in the rain, giggling. I chuckled. I loved how care-free she was and how she didn't care about what others thought. She really is the girl for me.
She didn't notice me yet so I sneaked up behind her and grabbed her waist. She squealed as I lifted her up and twirled her around.
Her twinkling giggles filled the air and I smiled into her neck. I finally placed her down and twirled her around to see me.
"I broke up with her." I said smiling widely.
Manvi giggled. "And what did she say?" She asked curiously.
"She said: Whatever, you were a bore anyway!" I said copying Christa's barbie voice.
Manvi burst out laughing and I couldn't help but smile like an idiot. She was truly a goddess. The way she laughs just makes me weak in the knees.
I suddenly grabbed her hand looking her straight in the eye. "Manvi Choudary, I love you with everything in me and more. I want you to be mines forever one day but for now I'm settling on asking you, will you be my girlfriend?" I asked hopefully.
She giggled. "I'm not a s**t, Mr. Vadhera. I'm not gonna kiss you and say no so I suppose it's a yes." I chuckled and my eyes twinkled with happiness. Manvi was sure something.
I crashed my lips with her and she responded immediately. I smiled as I felt everything all over again.
I knew that feeling will never die out