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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update!!
Loved it!!
Seriously,u r an awesome writer!
The story is beautifully written!
Finally virika are getting closer 😳
Thanks for the pm! Continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 6
It was so cute!
They locked in the same room and the song 😆
Wonder what's gonna happen next!
Thnks for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.
Hawww viren so naughty horrified jeevika 😆
aww d unknowing forehead kiss.
Viren is so adorable he took off his shirt n gve her awww.
Suprb update,thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Guys you are too fast..You people forced me that's why I have to write this update so soon...Thanks everyone for liking the previous update and hope you like this one too.. Guys always feel free to add any suggestion and from today e goanna add Recap with the UPDATE.Next update on +40 likes!
Chapter 7 (part 2)
Recap:-
Viren and jeevika are locked in a room.Jeevika hugs viren gettin terrified of heavy thunder .Her dress tears off from backside and Viren offers his shirt to her.

Jeevika wears Viren's shirt and gives him a pleasureful smile.She loves the way Viren understands her feelings and comfort and eagerly helps her.
Again they both sit quietly on sofa and hush level is maintained.
Jeevika looks at viren narrowing her lips and gives him a bright smile
Viren looks at her investigating that what she is thinking right now :-What ?? he says politely
Jeevika :-Hmm..six packs!😃
Viren with alittle shyness on her face:-I go to gim everyday
Jeevika:-Achi body hai mr! and winks her eye😉
The expression of shyness and happiness together are reflecting on his face:-Oh Thankyou!
Jeevika whispers :-Handsome ho..
Viren :-Kuch kaha! (Have you said anything)
Jeevika increases her pitch of voice and says:-Meine kaha tum handsome ho.
(I said you are handsome)
Viren:-Kafi rat hogyi hai ..ab sona chahiye.
(It's quite late ,should sleep now)
Jeevika face stretches and tension replaces her natkhatt (naughty) face expresssions
What 's the time:- she speaks out in a worried voice
Viren looking at his watch :-11:30
Jeevika :-What! Manvi and maa..They must be getting worried about me.
Viren:- Oh C'mon don't get worried ..We can't do anythin about it ..
mre ghar me bi everybody ..
Jeevika cutting his convo:-Tum ldke ho me tu ldki hun
(you are a boy..em a girl)
Viren:-What do you mean by ldka and ladki..
Jeevika:-Tum ldki hote tu pta hota
(if you would be a girl you would have known)
Viren:-You know you are weirdo...😳
Anyways so jate hain...
Jeevika:-I 'm not feeling sleepy..
Viren:-But mujhe tu nend ari hai
(but i am sleepy)
Jeevika:-Tu sojaoo..(so sleep)
Viren:-Ok!😊
Viren goes to the sofa and starts sleepinnn...soon he falls asleep.
Jeevika walks here and there ...The heavy winds are brushing against and she is a little horrified she remembers the flashback of her childhood (where she was locked alone in a dark room ..winds blowing against here and there and she sitting at the corner terrified of everything)
She is feeling uncomfortable and terror travels her soul and she screams loud..
Viren gets up :-Kya hua??(what happened?)
Jeevika:-Em not sleepy..
Viren:-So mujhe tu sone do..( so do let me sleep)
Jeevika feels a little comfortable when Viren wakes up and the sensation of loneliness has reduced to a great extent..she doesn't want Viren to sleep she says:-Can you dance??
Viren:-Uff..are you alright?
Jeevika:-Please just one step ..iske bad whatever you will say i'll do..
Viren knows he has no other way :-Ok...but iske bad sojana (ok but after this you are gonna sleep)
Viren gives his hand to jeevika puts his hand on Jeevika's back ..Jeevika feeling little better gives her hand to him and puts her hand on his shoulder.They both are looking in each other's eye..
and after sometime jeevika:-Now..i wanna sleep🥱
Viren and they both sit on the same sofa and after sometime they both fall asleep..Viren puts his hand unconsciously on her hand..
Manvi and maa who are extremely worried about Jeevika are tracing for jeevika..
Manvi And virat come to the office,they call the head and he reaches there in no time.
Sir oders the room to get unlocked..
Manvi :let me check this side..Virat you look for another side.
Manvi:-Ek bat ache se sun lo..agr tumhre is bhai ne meri di k sath galat kiya hoga tu me khud bi ni janti k me kya krjaon gi..
(listen on thing carefully..If your brother would have done something wrong with my sister ,even i don't know what i 'll do)
Head:-This is not the time to argue..try finding both of them
Manvi and Virat both start opening different rooms
On opening one room manvi becomes extremly shocked seeing viren and jeevika sleeping together..She cannot believe her eyes and look at them doubtfuly.
Precape :-
Viren comes to know that jeevika has crashed her party...
Manvi and virat are teasing Viren and jeevika and doubt that they both are in relationship.


Edited by Natasha137 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wowie...
such a superb one..
the way she demands to dance with him... how cute...
both sleeping hand in hand... awwiee...
it cant get better...

And yes...
Yeayi yeayi... i'm the first one to comment...
woohooo...
🥳

Please update soon...
waiting... waiting waiting..
Edited by laurenza.carson - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update

The way she just demands for a dance and he gives in and dances with her is amazing

Sleeping hand in hand aaw it can't get any better

Aaw the part where she says nice 6 packs and he has a little shyness on his face and says I go to the gym everyday man that was so cute loved it

Precap
Oh my god!

Wonder what viren's gonna do after he finds out she crashed his party

Thanks for the pm plz continue soon can't wait to know what will happen next
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulousy written kuddos..aww VirMan doubt ..omg i dnt think dat viren will shout at jeevs for trashing d party... haha hand in hand n six pack lmao🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG Such an amazing update Nats

Cont soon

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...aadhi raat ko dance...wah...excited 4 next part...viren will know abt that party...wondering what'll be his reacn
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice update... pls continue it soon and thanku for following my suggestion about recap..

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