Nothing Like Us:LAST CHAPTER on pg.30

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Jujuk

@Jujuk

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

That was great!

I really feel sorry for Jeevika!

Hope she finds true love😊

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Marzii

@Marzii

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

UNRES

wow what a brilliant update

you do a fabulouse job as always

such beautiful and emotional one

really feel bad for Jeevs,hope she will be fine

continue soon please

want to read more more and more

and thanks for such a long update

please update fastt!! 😛

Edited by jeevi7 - 12 years ago

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BloomingAway

@BloomingAway

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

The update was seriously fabulous and long which is a good thing

The way you emote the characters feeling is really amazing

Coming back to the update felt really sorry for jeevika really wonder how she's gonna cope now

Hope viren always be's there for jeevika and jeevika becomes normal again

Thanks for the long update and thanks for the pm plz continue soon

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..Amrita..

@..Amrita..

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

wow such a superlong & heart wrenching part god u r too brilliant that virat is so ughh !!! Bt viren is as always the perfect man so loving & caring brilliant update plz plz plz continue soon & for ur complain about the people who r nt commenting i would say send pms to those people who r liking or commenting on ur story so that u wont be heart broken agin

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9999P

@9999P

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

it was awesome👏 hats off to u

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Shaza (Atma My LifeHeart)

@Saba_Pari

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Hey kays i like ur all ss and ff and i eagrly wait for next part also this new ss was also amazing,excellent,brillian etc and u r a great writter so i cannot delete u frm my buddy list because i love ur work and how much i appreciate it,it is not enough for u because you deserve more

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HayatM

@HayatM

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Thank you for the pm and long update :D

AMAZING 1st chapter!

You always put in so much effort in your updates.Thank you!

As always,love how you make conversations flow nicely.Love the characterization. Viren being a doctor and not a lawyer hahah and virat being the bad guy.Love how the concept of this ss is different and interesting!

It was really sad and hurtful knowing what virat have done to jeevika and its even more sad as she really loved him. Feel like slapping virat face!

"She finally felt warmth and love after so long! She just wanted to be held by someone and Viren just wanted to hold her."

Smiled when reading this. Its beautiful!

Can't wait to read how viren will handle the situation and bring jeevika back:)