Virika OS: Still water runs deep! Pg 12

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sara arif

@Saaraa.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

This was so well expressed.

Brilliant update.

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mariarauf48

@mariarauf48

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

the guilt was potrayed perfectly

loved it

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NiraliVirika

@NiraliVirika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Very nice update!!

Yayyy! Jeevika is pregnant

Loved it so much

Continue soon

Thanks for the PM

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HayatM

@HayatM

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Thank u for the pm:)

Love how viren was all tensed about jeevika and straight away hugged her when she came back.
Yey jeevika pregnant:)

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Henna B

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Loved the hug and Viren apologising.

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-Pj-

@-Pj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Just read part two. It was great the attitude from both of them as they are still angry with each other and not caving in. I would love to see that on screen. Yet it can still be seen that they love each other. It's not un- repairable.

Edited by -Pj- - 12 years ago

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

awww...reallyyy cute..loved the way how viren was saying sooryyy for everything...sweet dialoguesss!!!!!

awesomee update as usual...do continueee soon n plsss PM me..thnkuuu

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vishwa patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

awsome update

so happy jeevika is pregnant

n their hug...loved it

thanx for pm...continue soon!!

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Sarah Ashraf

@aa_mnhs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

I like this. Pm me please when you update the last part. Buddied you in case it makes it easier in pm sending. And also if you've written more (especially virika) let me know in a pm.
Love :)
Sarah