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Posted: 12 years ago
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before reading os i just wanna say that i don't know y i wrote but i just wrote what was going on ,y mind maybe it will be crap or whatever so abb itni warning ke baad u r reading then best of luck😆

MY DOG ATE MY HOMEWORK




''bruzo plzzz give me my homework back baby it is very important plz'' ''bruzo plzz'' pleaded maanvi while running after her dog which her boyfriend gifted her on their 3 months dating anniversary
''baby plz'' before maanvi can do anything he just ate half of it and other half was swimming in swimming pool ''wow great!!'' exclaimed maanvi she didn't have enough time to re-write her homework because she had to meet viraat or else he will be upset like an 3 years old baby but he look cute when he gets angry then she loves to specify him in their own way😉 but if she won't submit her hw tomorrow her teacher won't leave her but viraat ufff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she was dam worried and cursing viraat ya it is his fault
3 hour ago
''viraat i can't come today u know na i have to do my homework or else my professor won't leave me already she hates me'' said maanvi in helpess tone but seems like her bf won't let her go and y would he they plan this date 3 weeks ago but due to her work he delayed but today she can't do this to him he is so loving caring and it's secret😉😆😆
after much pleading from viraat she agreed
2 hours later
viraat called her to confirm that she is coming or not
v-baby r u coming
m-yup i m
v-and ur homework
m-ya it is done (with pride in her tone_
v-okay now it's our hw tome😉
maanvi understood his intentions just for teasing him
m-omg viraat i forgot i have one more assingment
v-baby u can't do this to me i m ur bf not assistance who keep on cancelling our date
m-chillax chep i was just joking (and she kept her homework on bed)
v-if u had cancelled i surely had died (he said with evil smirk)
m-okay bye now i have to get ready
v_tayaar hone ki kya zarurt hai😉 waise bhi
m-viraat tum bahut beshram hogaye ho (while blushing)
v-aye haaye itne sharmaaogi toh i will come through phone okay bye i waiting eagerly😉😆
when maanvi got ready and when she was looking for her hw didn't find her hw she saw everywhere and finally she found it in buzoo's mouth and then she never got it back

back to present
when maanvi told viraat about it he came at her house as he know she won't come he saw her depressed
m-viraat it's all ur fault
v-y meri kya galti hai
m-u were the one gifted me this dog
v-toh
m-toh ur doh ate my home work ab mai tumhara work bhi nahi karugi😆 (she turn around and bit her tongue for what she just told)
viraat smirk on it and came close to her and catch her from her waist and move her hair a side and nuzzle he rneck and said) ''meera nahi our hamara work toh tumhe karna hi hai warna mai tumhe punish karuga)...so what u want''

maanvi knew him very well before she could react his lips crashed with her and next moment she knew he was leading her and let him lead😳😉

later in the morning @ school (virman same school but different class)
teacher-maanvi where is ur homework
maanvi-ma'am...woh...i...mean(she stammer alot) my homework i mean my dog ate my homework😆(she said and closed her eyes)
everyone laughed @ her including teacher
suddenly they heard someone calling maanvi
they turn and saw that magical voice of viraat
maanvi thought what was he doing here
viraat-ma'am i m sorry woh actually she forgot her homework @ my place while we were studying (he wink @ her and she blushed)
he went from their giving it back to maanvi and winking @ her
teacher ask her to seat
jeevika(maanvi's bst friend) (wisper to maanvi)-lagta hai dog ne tere hw ke saath saath tujhe bi bite kiya hai
maanvi blushed

okay done small crap and all sorry for mistake and wasting ur time
i wrote in half hour phew i can't belive i took half hour to write this crap
sorry for mistakes
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*unres*
firstly have to say doggies pic is shoo cute same like my riko😆
ok now come to ur os😳awesum superb mindblowing romentic funny n cute
its not at all crap ok!!!!!
loved ur os n virman convo😳aweee cute n romentic😳
n jeevika manvis best frnd😆n what she said
lagta hai dog ne tere hw ke saath saath tujhe bi bite kiya hai 😆
superb duper os👏👏keep it up dear👏


Edited by ashishi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres yaar waited from ages for this 😳
what a os wave 👏
doggy ne hw khaya... uske upar romance aur Virat ne hw bhi kia...
how cute Virat here 😳
aww dog ne hw ke saath saath saccchi mein Manvi ko bhi bite kar liye 😆 😆 😆
Edited by preity_d - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heyy deaar !!

Awsumm OS !! 😃

It was funny and romantic as well 😊

Virat is so naughty in this, I loved his double meaning sentences 😉

You should write more often 😊

PS: it's not a crap at all 😊 It's an awsum Virmanish OS 😉

NaYab
Edited by luv_virman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woowww... fab... amazing... 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
swthrt u call it crap...??? 😕
it is not n if u think it is... then i can very proudly say that i love crap...
i really loved it... n trust me u shuld write more crap like this...
loved the last part...
jeevika(maanvi's bst friend) (wisper to maanvi)-lagta hai dog ne tere hw ke saath saath tujhe bi bite kiya hai 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey this not crap at all.. I loved it.. Fun-filled and romantic also.. I loved the title.. Virat is very naughty...But he actually finished her HW.. Thats so sweet of him.. I loved Virman convo very much.. Thanks for this cute OS.. Take care 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Uzma!! 🤗

This wasn't crap at all!!

It was so Funny,cute and Romantic!

Loveed It!!

A refreshing OS!

It was soo cute!

And I Loved Virat's double meaning dialogues! Haha! 😳😛

And, and,and...I made up for commenting really late on your previous OS!...Sorry about that! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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haaye khabri ...this was such a cute one ,
absolutely loved it .
ps : next time you call your work a crap i will change your nick name to crap .
Edited by __Aarti__ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS!!
Loved it!!
It was funny & romantic!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing os...it was so cute...loved it to the core... 😊

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