VirIka FF:Mujhe Kuch Kehna Hai ll Part 6-Page 16 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update!!
Cute & funny!!
Loved it!!
Continue soon & thanks 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update .
Thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
You get A big cupcake from my side!!
This was really good... Loved the haunted house idea...
Loved the virman scene!!
It was so funny...haha.. I could imagine it all...
Great great work..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Awesome part!!..
Last part was hectic!..poor Jeevika..
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chocolate Cupcake from me :*
Loveeed it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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reallh nice ff just love Virman Convo n Virika scenes
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb
continue soon and plz pm me nxt time!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great updates plz pm me next time
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Hey! I'm so sorry for the late comment. Net was down.

Anyway, loved all the 3 updates. Wonderful. :D

I wonder why she calls him Virenji! :/

Can't wait to read more. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Paart 4
Recap:After the haunted house incident...Viren and Jeevika hug...And Viren drops her home...

Jeevika in the room to herself:
Oh My God! What had happened in the mall?!? How did I feel so comfortable with Virenji?? What's happening?? What's happening to me?? I mean,Why am I feeling so strange but secure around him?? Anyway, until I'm done with my studies I have to ignore whatever this feeling is. I have to concentrate and study.

So she goes and starts reading her textbook
In Viren's PG:
What happened to Jeevika today?!? Why was she acting so weird and Why does she call me Virenji it sounds like a 40-year old Buddha...And I thought that the girls from Hrishikesh are very you know Behenji types! Anyway lets forget about all this until she admits or says anything..

Leaving his thoughts...Viren logs onto facebook and begins chatting with Virat :)

Viren:Bhaai,Virat How are you?!/
Virat:I'm gr8!
Viren then narrates his thoughts and the mall trip to Viren..
Virat:Bhai,just stop thinking about her
Viren:That's the point...Ican't stop! She's on my mind like 24/7. I know its not what I've come here for but you know I just cant stop thinking about her..
Virat:Bhaai are you in love?!?
Viren:Love?!? Have you lost it?!?
Virat:I haven't but you have..You're in love..
Viren:Ya right! Chal I have work will speak to you later!
Virat:Okkkaaay!

So with Jeevika after sitting and getting fed up with her books for half an hour:
Jeevika:Why can't I freaking concentrate?! Urgh!!!!!!
She calls up Manvi

Jeevika:Mannnu...Kaisi hai tu??
Manvi:Heelllooo Dii aapka uss chep ke bhaai ke saath kya equation hai??
Jeevika:Mannnu again! English!
Manvi:But you only started it in hindi
Jeevika:Sorry! Anyways, EQUATION??? What do you mean by that we're just friends...You know today what happened??
Manvi"What?!
Jeevika narrates her day!
Manvi:Yaaayyy!! Yipppeee!!
Jeevika:What you yaaayiing...yipping about Mannu??
Manvi:My Di's in love My Di's in loveee
Jeevika:Urghh! You've lost it I guess Virat is affecting you :P
Manvi:I guesss! LOL!
Jeevika:ANyways Mannu..I'm outta credit sooo byeee!
Manvi:Bye Di!

She logs into twitter and so does he..
Viren: @JeevikaJC Aaj Mall mein kya hua?!?
Jeevika: @Viren11 Kya Hua Kuch bhi toh nahi???
Viren: @JeevikaJC Ohhh Kuch bhi nahi hua??
Jeevika: @Viren11 I'm sorry if you felt bad!
Viren: @JeevikaJC It's alright!
Jeevika: @Viren11 Gotta get to bed..Byeee
Viren: @JeevikaJC Aright Angel...Good Night! :)

Both of them logout and go to sleeep...

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