VIRMAN ff*my love is not a LIE*NW UPDATE*LAST PART - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
its wonderful... loved it...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
MANVI AS VIRAT'S COUSIN!!!!! Nahiii ...
Next Chapter will be again a shocking one!!!! Dont tell me Manvi is really Virat's long lost LITTLE cousin!!! 😲🤢
Now enough of my melodrama but the update was just fantastic... Totally unexpected twist...You are AWESOME ShilpašŸ‘ā­ļø... Loved the entry of Karan and his dialogues... Sonia is pretty... Nishi is very sweet.. But where is Pappu bhaiya ?? I missed him in this onešŸ˜†.. Cant wait to read the next one.. Please please update soon... Thank you so much for the pm.. Take care..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic...
Looking forward fr the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago

karans entry is completely different.. u did it in a very unexpected nd in unique way.. see i guessed correct abt karan's entry šŸ˜‰

awee virat himself aproached manvi fr help.. this gonna be superb if manvi agrees to that deal.. 😊

(obviously she agrees ) nd thanks fr amazing update nd PM

Edited by sreshta90 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey as a twist its a nice idea but as a fan i cant see virman as cousins pleaseee 😲
Edited by deepika03 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice and lovely update yr .


loved reading it and its very interesting .


waiting to see what happens next .

continue soon dear and thanks for the pm .
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Posted: 12 years ago
guys...i m updating next part now...
its just a filler part...so pm's for this part will b send tommorow...😊
and my buddies...who were waiting 4 pappu bhai...get ready to meet him in this part...šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†šŸ˜³
enjoy reading:):):)😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

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hey guys...i m back early this time...

so enjoy reading next part...

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Part 5

Virat:- u have to be my cousin…my little cousin…..

Manvi was shocked beyond limits…..she felt as if all her senses vanished in thin air. She thought it might be a dream, But his breathes lingering on her face broke her last hope too….They both stood still for a moment looking each other thinking any word would come from other….Virat broke their never ending silence…

Virat: - (moving back) please manvi….say something!!!!

Manvi: - (stammering) r u joking???!!!!

Virat:- no….I really mean it…..my Dadu is really ill and wants to see his granddaughter for once , and only u can save him now….u mostly resemble my aunty in looks…it won't be hard to believe him, u as my real cousin.

Manvi: - u want me pretend to be granddaughter of a person who is about to die…!!!!

It's against my conscience…..I won't do it…I m sorry…..

She turned to leave….but stopped listening Virat speak….

Virat:- don't u always go against ur conscience and love to lie???

Manvi: - (facing him) I m sorry that I often go against my conscience and lie…

But u asked me not to appear in front of u, if I feel sorry…..so from now on I'll definitely do it….

And she again turns and starts walking…..

Virat: - manvi….stay there and listen….

Manvi:- no…I won't….(still walking)

Virat: - I won't care about Ur past….

I'll even repay all debts of Ur family…

I REALLY NEED U…… (in loud voice)

Manvi stopped. She thought for a moment and then again throwing away all thoughts she kept walking…. Virat ran towards her and blocked her way…..

Virat:- (holding her shoulder) please….I m begging u….cant u help me once….(looking in her eyes)

Manvi was stunned, seeing Virat begging in front of her. She was in big dilemma….

Manvi:- I'll think about it…..

Virat:- please let me know ur answer till morning….

Manvi:- k…..

And they walked on their own opposite directions…….

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Manvi was walking through the streets towards home thinking…

Manvi:- why I m thinking so much about it…

There's nothing much to consider…I should just do it!!!!

(After a pause) no…no..no…manvi….it's just the invitation for more troubles….

I can't do it….no… never…..

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Virat reached hospital to meet his Dadu….but he was sleeping. Virat came near him…

Virat:- (holding his hand) Dadu…. wait a little…..I'll bring her soon…

Just fight till then…. Soon she will be in front of Ur eyes…. (smiling)

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Manvi reached home…..

Nishi:- hey mannu….hi….how was ur first day at work….

Manvi:- pretty exhausting……I'll just go and sleep… good night….

Nishi:- wait…..Rishi called me while ago….he wants to talk to u…..on something important….

Manvi:- really….let me call him…..

And she took Nishi's phone and called Rishi….

Manvi:- hello…Rishi, what's the matter???

Rishi:- di….there are two news for u….first one……uncle called me morning. He is safe in Mumbai and told me to tell u that soon he will be back….

Manvi:- that's great!!!!...and what is second news???

Rishi:- di…..I think Pappu got to know about u staying in Shimla!!!!! He left for Shimla with his dozens of people, yesterday by train….

Manvi:- what!!!!!

Rishi:- yes….di…..but I don't know how did they get to know about u…

Just be careful……

Manvi:- do they know about nishi????

Rishi:- no……I don't think so….as no one here know about nishi di…..but still they will try to find u out in Shimla….so please be careful…..and take care…..

Manvi: - thnx Rishi…..good night …bye….

Rishi: - bye!!!!

Manvi was scared. She didn't expect Pappu bhai to be so smart and quick. She ran towards her room and locked inside. Nishi thought of leaving her alone for a while…

Manvi thought whole night. She was unable to sleep even for a moment. Her life was totally in mess. She was hell confused thinking which way she would be taking now.

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Virat got a call from his secretary Sonia in morning….

Virat:- haan bolo Sonia….

Sonia:- Virat, there's a news about that girl manvi, u told our people to keep eye on….

Virat:- what is it????

Sonia:- that goon Pappu is in Shimla….and he is looking for her here…..

Virat:- what!!!!... (After a pause) thanks Sonia…..I'll take care of it now…..

Sonia: - k…bye!!!!!

Virat dialed Pappu's number….

Virat:- hello….I m Virat vadhera speaking….

Pappu:- hello Mr. vadhera…. I m really sorry for threatening u for nothing before…..it was all due to manvi….

Virat:- I m not interested to know about it…….just listen to me…..come to my office now…..

Pappu:- k…..

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Pappu and his gang reached his office….

Virat:- so…u all are here to catch manvi Mehra…..huh????

Pappu:- haan…her dad took loan from me and ran away without returning back….so now we will make his daughter pay back for his mistake….

Virat got really angry….he took a cheque book from table and signed on blank cheque….and threw it on him….

Virat:- fill whatever amount her dad took from u…. but from now on…u better stay away from her or else u won't be able to see next day of ur life…..

Pappu was surprised seeing so concern for manvi in Virat's eyes….he dared to ask a question while leaving…

Pappu:- why r u so concerned for her????

Virat: - (pointing finger on him) that's none of Ur business….just get out and never think of bothering her…..

Pappu smiled and walk out from office.

He dialed Rishi's number….

Pappu: - hello….Rishi….mein Pappu bol raha hoon….

(hello Rishi…its pappu bhai speaking!!!)

Rishi: - (stammering) Pappu…bhai…..aap!!!!!!…..maine kitni baar kaha Aapko ki mujhe nahi pata manvi di kaha hai…..

(paapu bhai…u….i told u many time that I don't know where is manvi di is…..)

Pappu:- aab mujhe uska pata (address) janana bhi nahi hai…..bas usse phone karke bol dena ki mujhe mere saare paise mil gaye hai…..aur woh aab azad hai…..

(now I m not interested to know about her….just inform her that I got my money back…now she is free….)

Rishi:- kya!!!!! Magar kisne diye itne paise appko???

(what!!!!!...but who did repay all loan????)

Pappu:- aur kaun dega…..uska purana aashiq virat vadhera…..

(who else…her lover…Virat vadhera!!!!!)

And he disconnects the call…..

Rishi was surprised. He immediately called manvi on Nishi's phone…..

Rishi: - Nishi di…..please manvi di ko phone do….jaldi…..

(nishi di…I want to talk to manvi di…now…)

Nishi gave her cell to manvi…who was engrossed in eating breakfast….

Nishi:- manvi…Rishi ka phone hai tumhare liye…..

(manvi….rishi wants to talk with u…..)

Manvi:- hello…haan bol Rishi aab kya manhoos khabhar (bad news) hai mere liye!!!!

(Hello..Ya Rishi …. What's the bad news u want to tell me now…..)

Rishi:- di aap believe nahi karengi par ek good news hai aap ke liye…..

(di…u wont believe it…but there's a good news for u!!!!)

Manvi:- kya??...pappu bhai ne mere pheecha karna chod diya kya????

(what??? Pappu bhai is giving up finding me or what???)

Rishi:- u r right di…..aur apka sara loan virat vadhera ne pay kar diya……

(u r right di….and ur all loans r cleared by virat vadhera!!!!)

Manvi:- WHAT!!!!!!!!

Rishi:- haan….but I still can't believe he helped u despite of all trouble u created…..

Manvi:- Rishi….I'll talk to u later….I have some important thing to do now…..so bye…..

Rishi:- k… bye di…..

Manvi got ready and marched to Virat's office fuming in anger…..

She entered his cabin without knocking….

Manvi:- who the hell r u to pay off my all loans…..did I ask u to do any favor on me??...

Virat:- k…then I'll call Pappu bhai and take my money back…..will it make u happy then!!!!

Manvi:- what…..u……

Virat:- if u want to thank me then it's ok…..all u have to do is now help me too…. acting as my cousin….

Manvi:- why can't u understand I can't do it……I m scared…..I will be caught in a second….

Virat:- no u wont…..and it will b just for few hours and then I'll send u back to ur dad and u will have job in our hotel in Mumbai….

Manvi:- but if anyone doubts on me then???

Virat:- don't worry….this will be between u me and Dadu….all u have to do is show ur face to him and speak some words and leave. U will not be bothered again…..

Manvi:- really….

Virat:- yes….so Ms. Manvi Mehra r u ready?????

Manvi:- k…I m ready….

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guys...there will be new entry in story...😳

the details about that character...u will know it in upcoming update...and that character will be really important for story...šŸ˜‰
so keep guessing who will it be????šŸ˜‰
till then good night...saionara...chao:):):) šŸ¤—

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Posted: 12 years ago
Now was this a filler...?? But I did not feel so... Liked this part a lot... Please do continue soon tomorrow... Waiting for the new entry...Just guessing it to be Virat's actual cousin...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey nice update šŸ‘šŸ¼.. So finally Maanvi agreed to play Virat's cousin šŸ¤”..Loved the bonding Virat shares with his grandpa.. But I will miss Pappu bhaiyašŸ˜†šŸ˜†.. New entry??? Sounds great... Please continue soon.. Thank you for this quick update.. 😊

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