VIRMAN ff:*Journey of life*link of 2nd thread pg 1 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved tis part especially lift scene and coffee scene.thanks for such an cute update.continue soon and reveal the secrets.waiting .pls plsPM me😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😊HEY FRIENDS HOW ARE U ALL. I AM SO HAPPY THAT U ARE LIKING MY SS,FF,OS WHATEVER IT IS. I LOVED ALL OF YOUR COMMENTS. SORRY FOR NOT SENDING PM's. I HOPE U GUYSS ARE NOT ANGRY WITH ME FOR NOT SENDING PM's. AND I W'LL UPDATE TOMORROW OKEY. BYE LOVE U ALLšŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›

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Posted: 12 years ago
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HELLOOS FRIENDS I AM BACK WITH ANOTHER UPDATE.

SO ENJOY IT AND KEEP COMMENTING AND LIKING B'COZ

IT MEANS A LOT TO ME. SO HERE WE GO😊😊

CHAPTER# 6

manvi and arohi went to manvi's cabin and arohi started laughing loudly. manvi was boiling in anger and she gave an angry

look to arohi and she stopped laughing

arohi: sorry,sorry,sorry. but kya karu yaar tum har jagah situation hi aisi create kar deti ho k hasi roke hi nahi rukti

manvi: u know what arohi your brother is totally mad. unko sach mein treatment ki jarurat hai.

jaldi se treatment shuru karwa do wrna wo din door nahi jab unhe mental asylam mein admit karwana padega.

nahi toh dekhna mere hatho se unka murder ho jayega

arohi: arey yaar ab gussa chod bhi de. acha yeh bata kya aaj raat ko mere sath dinner pe chalegi

manvi: aye haye sirf tum aur main ya phir koi aur bhi aa raha hai huh? (teasing)

arohi: (blushed) haan wo arjun bhi ayega

manvi: nahi main nahi ayungi

arohi: lekin kyu?

manvi: yaar main tum laila majnu ke beech kya karungi. plz haan mujhe bore nahi hona

arohi: manvi tum meri baat nahi sunegi. apni best friend ko mana karegi

she said making a cute angry face and how could manvi denny of her best friend's requst.

she can do anything for her. so she playfully hitted her head

manvi: oye drama queen band kar apna drama. theek hai main chalungi ab khush

arohi:(smiled widely and hugged her) sach

manvi: much

arohi:(broke the hug) toh theek hai city hotel plaza mein sharp 8 o'clock main aur arjun tera wait karenge. time pe

pahonch jana ok

manvi: ok aur kuch

arohi: bas ab mein chalti hun bye

manvi: bye

arohi left and manvi sat on her chair and thought"mujhe jaldi se apna kaam finish karna hoga taki woh sadu mujhe jaldi ghar jane de aur koi aur kaam na de" manvi start working on a file which virat gave her to complete it. she was working continously so that she keep her promise which she gave to arohi. manvi finished her work at 6:30 pm

manvi: ho gaya. ab main aram se ghar ja sakti hun aur ready ho sakti hu. par iss se pehle yeh file virat sir ke cabin tak pahunchani hogi

she got up from her chair and stretched her arms in the air and went to virat's cabin. she knocked on the door

virat: come in

manvi came in the cabin and handed him the file

manvi: sir yeh mehra & sons ki file hai iska budget mein bahot gadbad thi bat ab sab kuch theek hai.

maine sara budget phir se tayar kar diya hai and balance sheet bhi bana di hai and usko re-check bhi kar liya hai. aap chahe toh ek baar

isko study kar sakte hai

virat was wathing the file which was she handed him. he was wathing every detail carefully like a perfect business man

virat: hmm perfect good job manvi

manvi smiled at him

manvi: thank u sir. (after a pause) sir ab

virat:(looked at her ) ab kya

manvi; mera matlab hai k ab sara kaam finish ho chuka hai toh main ghar jaldi ja sakti hu

virat: kyu aaj kuch khaas hai kya

manvi: no sir actually mujhe kahi bahar jana hai

virat: ok u can go

manvi surprised to heard it b'coz he did not say no

manvi: what??

virat: kya hua tum nahi jana chahti

manvi: nahi sir i mean yes. actually thank u

virat: wlcm but iska matlab yeh nahi ke har roj aisa hoga

manvi: ok sir thank u once again and she left the cabin

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8 pm hotel city plaza

manvi enter in hotel and searching for arjun and arohi. she saw them sitting in the corner table. she went toward them.

manvi: hey arohi, hey arjun bhaiya (she hugged arjun and arohi)

arjun and arohi sat beside each other and manvi sat infront of them on the couch

manvi: kya baat hai laila majnu ki jodi toh pehle se he mojud hai

arohi(blushed) shat up manvi kuch bhi bolti hai

manvi: arey isme sharmane ki kya baat hai. bhai aap hi kuch boliye na

arjun: haan yaar arohi manvi sahi hi toh keh rahi hai. ab pyaar kar liya hai toh sharmana kaisa

arjun and manvi laughed and gave hi 5 to each other and arohi go red like tomato. she threw napkin on manvi

arohi: manvi koi baat nahi jab tujhe pyaar hoga na tab main tumse puchungi

manvi: phir toh tum wait karti karti budhi ho jaogi and ha tab tak toh tumhare chunu munu ki bhi shadi ho jaegi

arohi was boiling in anger now but arjun was confused

arjun: manvi yeh chunu munu kon hai?

manvi hit her head playfully

manvi: arey bhai apke bache aur kon

arjun: oh phir toh arohi hame jald se jald shadi karni hogi na

arohi hit on arjun's arm

arjun: ouch

arohi: arjun tum bhi

manvi: acha ab yeh sab chodo hum yaha dinner karne aye hai ladne nahi so let's order

arohi: waah manvi ji wah khud ladai shuru ki aur khud hi back out kar rahi ho

arjun: arey yaar ab chodo na bahot bhuk lagi hai

arjun called the waiter. arohi saw virat going outside and she called him

arohi: virat bhai

manvi turned around and saw virat her eyes goes widen and she hid her face in menu card. virat came near them

arohi: virat bhau aap yaha kya kar rahe hai

virat: main toh yaha ek meeting attend karne aya tha lekin tum yaha kya kar rahi ho

arohi: actually aaj main apne friends ke sath dinner ke liye ayi hun. bhai yeh hai arjun yeh ab doctor ban chuka hai

virat and arjun shake hands

virat: hi arjun

arjun: hello virat

virat saw manvi who hid her face in menu card. arjun and arohi saw this and then looked at each other and tried to stop their laughter

arohi: bhai isko toh aap jante hi honge

virat was confused that who is this girl

manvi: arohi ki bachi main chodungi nahi tujhe she muttered

virat: confused who

arohi: manvi apki PA

manvi removed menu card from her face and faked a smile at virat

manvi: hello sir and glared at arohi and gave her"i will kill u" look

virat: oh toh ms.manvi apko yaha ane ke liye chutti jaldi chahiye thi

manvi: no..no sir actually main nahi ana chahti thi ar..arohi ne jid ki thi aur main mana nahi kar payi

arohi: bhai chodiye na yeh sab and why don't u join us in dinner

virat: nahi tum log enjoy karo main phir kabhi

arjun: plz virat pata nahi phir aisa moka mile ya na mile

virat: lekin arjun cut off by arohi

arohi: bhai plz for me (making a cute puppy face and virat melted)

virat: ok

arohi: manvi thoda side pe hoja bhai kya jameen par bathenge

manvi shif to side of the couch and virat sat beside her

arjun: toh theek hai main order karta hun. virat manvi tumm log kya khaoge

"palak paneer with rice" they both said togather and looked at each other arjun and arohi looked at them with wide eyes

arjun: kya baat hai gudiya and virat tum dono ki pasand toh ek hi hai

manvi: bhai duniya mein aise bahot se log hote hai jinhe ek jaisi cheeje pasnd hoti hai isme kon si badi baat hai

arjun; ok don't be angry gudiya i was just kidding

then they order their meal and start eating while kidding and jokking with each other

virat too enjoyed in their company. after they finish their dinner they ordered ice cream and again arjun asked manvi and virat

about their favourite flavour

"chocolate flavour" they again said togather but this time foursome burst into laughter

arjun: dekha phir se matching

just then a bunch of guyss enter in tha hotel. they sat in the front table of them. arjun and arohi's back facing them,

but they could see manvi and giving thier evil smile.while eating ice cream manvi saw those guyss staring at her

and she lowered her face. manvi again saw them and one of those guyss passed her a flying kiss and winked at heršŸ˜‰. now manvi was feelin very uncomfortable.

virat also watched that guy when he gave her a flying kiss and virat clenched her his fist in anger. but before he could do manvi spoke

manvi: arohi, bhai ab hame chalna chahiye. late ho raha hai aur phir subah kaam pe bhi toh jana hai

arohi: lekin manvi thodi der aur ruk jate hai na plz

arjun: haan gudiya bas coffee pekar chalte hai

manvi: lekin

arohi: ab 15 minutes se kya faraq padta hai manvi

manvi getting angry now but she also couldn't tell the reason.so she had no choice. virat knew that she is feeling uncomfortable b'coz of those guyss. when they were having their coffee those guyss started whisling. manvi gave them an angry look. after seein manvi's reaction they gave hi 5 to each other. now manvi was really scared.after having their coffee arjun,arohi and manvi left from there and virat said that he had some work so w''ll come late. when they reach outside of the hotel manvi rememberd that she forgot her phone on the table so she came back in hotel and picked up her phone when she noticed those guyss and virat stood in front of them

virat: kya kar rahe the tum log abhi?

guy; kya kar rahe the ladki dekh rahe the aur kya

virat: dekho, i am warning u door rehna usse. woh ek sharif ghar ki ladki hai(pointing his finger toward them)

guy: toh itni hot lag rahi thi toh kaise na dekhte

virat grabed his collar and going to punch him when manvi hold his hand

manvi: virat sir plz (pleading voice)

virat: manvi tum yaha kya kar rahi ho

manvi: woh main apna phone bhool gayi thi toh wahi lene ayi thi

guy: oh toh manvi hai apka naam. mere sath chalogi kya jitna paisa bolegi utna milega

manvi was shocked to heard this type of wording that how could someone told about her like this

manvi:(in shaking voice pointing her finger toward him) dekho main.. main

that guy hold her wrist and this made virat more angry and he gave a tight punch on his face and he fell on the ground

virat started punching other guyss. security came and caught those guys

guy: yeh acha nahi kiya tune aur iss ladki ko toh hum nahi chodenge

security called the police and they had been arrested. virat turned toward manvi who was shivring in fear

virat: are u okey (in calm voice)

manvi: (nodded) thanks jo apne mer liye kiya

virat:(smiled) tumhari jagah agar aur koi bhi hoti toh uske liye bhi main yahi karta

manvi was touched by his behaviour and gave him her million dollar smile

virat: ab chalo bahar arohi tumhara intzaar kar rahi hogi

manvi nodded and left from their but before exiting the main door she turned back and looked at virat and smiled he smiled back 😊and she left

That's it guyss it was a long update and now my fingers are paining due to regular typing. hope u like it and i'll update next chapter tomorrowšŸ˜›šŸ˜›

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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was awesome
continue soon

Edited by afreenkansal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Loved the update.Loved Virat. Kadoos initially but really a sweet person to be.Loved the whole update.😊
virmanfan013 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
can somebody tell me that how can we create a link of a chapter when we update
sreshta90 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
hey it was awsome.. waiting fr next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
wow nice update
loved it
cont soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Awesome dear...updt soon...but yar pls whenever u updt next chaps...so write in ur title about that...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowowowowowow😃

it is awesome šŸ‘

do continue soon and send me me a pm😊

i am eager for next part dont make me wait...ā­ļø

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