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Hey Ava,
This is the first time I've read something you've written, and I must say it's absolutely brilliant. This is one intense and overwhelming OS. There was tension and a sense of foreboding present right from the beginning; Manvi's fear, Virat's need to protect her at any cost and their timeless, unyielding love for each other were all beautifully felt and visualized through your writing.
Aisha
This is the first time I've read something you've written, and I must say it's absolutely brilliant. This is one intense and overwhelming OS. There was tension and a sense of foreboding present right from the beginning; Manvi's fear, Virat's need to protect her at any cost and their timeless, unyielding love for each other were all beautifully felt and visualized through your writing.
Aisha
