VirMan New OS : Manvi a saviour !

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sakshi

@SakshiAngel

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

hey dear luved it very much.. its awesome..
plz continue it.. want to read it further also..
take care

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Shadow_kissed

@Shadow_kissed

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

just awesum

can't express it in words

i thought manvi was alive

but then came to she was dead

and came as an angel to save him

just loved ur story

pls. write more such pieces

nd pm me whenever u write more

pls. its a humble request

and wish u a safe and happy diwali😊

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Aysha

@aysha1989

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Nice OS dear...
Do write more... 😃

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preetipc

@preetipc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Lovely one yaar. Sometimes people don't realise the value of their life.Only People who tried stupid things and later regret realise that.Love the way how u showed that in ur update .Loved Manvi here,she is truly an angel.😊

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divya.g

@virman-fan

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

nice i liked it
awesome wrk

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Delena

@Delena-cious

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

that was brilliantly written! first part i was like whyy is maanvi dead?! she cant die! but the next part was just superb! maanvi came back! yay!

maanvi's possessive words to live life was just really heart touching thank god he listened to her and didnt do anything stupid.

thanks for this OS. really enjoyed reading it 🤗

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littlesmile

@littlesmile

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

ur OS was really heart-touching.i luved it ❤️.do write more OS,SS nd FF's on virmaan.i ll b gald 2 read it 😊

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Virman_Diwani

@Virman_Diwani

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

wow thanks alot guys ...din xpected that much of comments..this means alot to me ...i am definately gonna write more now.. 😊
lovearnavandkhu : thanks alot for liking the os ...ill definately pm you if i update further !! 😊

salmangirl : thankyou ..glad u liked the 2nd part 😊

afreenkansal : thank you 😊

alicemath : aww thanks alot for this comment ..really made my day ..angel in disguise truly..ill definatly pm you ..😊

xoxsweetestgal: thank you so much for loving it 😊

anu1989 : thanks ..ill pm you for sure 😊

SakshiAngel: hey sakshi ..i ended it there only n din thought to wrrite further as it was an os ..but ill surely will not forget to pm you for my next work ...which will be soon ..thanks for liking it 😊

manashu123 : so sweet ! thanks alot for the long comment...this means alot to a writer 😊 n ill definatly write more and will pm you ...happy n safe diwali 😊

riastar : thankyou ...smiley says it all 😉

aysha1989 : thank you so much ..ill do 😊

preetipc : exactly life is a blessing ...we shud never end it by our own ...im glad you liked it preeti ..thanks a ton 😊

..Ankita.. : Thankyou 😊

virman_fan : Thanks alot 😊

Delena-cious : thank you for this butful comment ...a secret i want to tell you ...i am a big fan of your works 😉 ..so i am very glad you liked it 😊

ehmmbhrocks :aww im happy it touched ur heart ...ill write more n will pm you 😊

Thanks guys ...Happy n Safe diwali to all of you from my heart ...enjoy and take care !! 🤗