Viren Jeevika SS: Friend Wala Pathi Ch.24 pg187(refer to link on Pg195

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kryanforever

@kryanforever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#621

all d best

awesome update loved it

1 lst thng remainin kiss 😆

loved d huged n ice cream part

loved d update

continue soon

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Surbhi Jain

@surbhi1994

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Posted: 12 years ago

#622

the best part ws dis Viren: One last thing pending?

Jeevika: What's it?

He pulled her closer, kissed her on her lips, she too responded this time!

Viren: [breathing harder] challo! 😆

damn cute n lovely n amazing n awesome

brilliant continue soon

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..Amrita..

@..Amrita..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#623

lovd the whole part...viren's 6 pack haye !!! The pull...the way jeevi said I'M NOT GOING I CANT MISS U...was superb...& the last part the BYE session was awesome...totally WOW update...will wait 4 saturday & ALL THE BEST dil se

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little.angel56

@little.angel56

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Posted: 12 years ago

#624

I wished for so so so so so so more!

And this is by far the best one i guess, i can say that always 😆

Loved the silence turning into stammering turning into a romantic moment finally!

Oh this boy viren can drive me so much crazy, he is so full of love in this,

The best thing is, we can imagine it in real,

Aww, Jeevika 🥱 i really loved this emotional part of hers, and viren touching it like the last time for 2 weeks or so, awwwh!

And he turned back after sometime, that was like the best part ❤️

The hugs, and "Jana padhega" OMG, i loved this update man!!

Continue soon, please please!

All the best for your papers too! 😊

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Shaza (Atma My LifeHeart)

@Saba_Pari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#625

I have no words for this updates you r great writter and best of luck for your boards

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karankrysle

@karankrysle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#626

Wish you all the very best! do brilliantly well! 😃

Brilliant updAte as usual!

i too hv my exams till 22 march!

will wait for your update!

love and regards! 😊

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Grusha ! :)

@Kryan_SanDhir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#627

Brilliant update:) loved how both will miss each other!!
All d best for ur exams :) do well:)

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Krystlektacker

@Krystlektacker

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#628

only because ur story today i have if id i read all updates twice must say super story please update soon long update i cant see virikia missing each other..jeevikas behaviour,way talking and all really cute..and my viren what i should say about him he is really naughty.

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Ayesha

@--Ayesha--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#629

Suprb update👍🏼
There was sooo many wow moments in the story.
Loved it to the core.
Awww viren shirtlesskaash main wahan hoti😆
bt luvd the way he agreed n awww its was cute whn he took her in his arms.
Omg the both the kisss,the kiss of love n seperation😳
Awww virika r upset of seperation,they r gonna miss each othe so much😭just hoping viren gve jeevika sum kind of surprise.
Awww luvd the ending sooo much❤️

Well done dear ur exams r gonna start bt still u gave such awesome update.
All the bst for ur exams👍🏼

Edited by Virika-luv - 12 years ago