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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Beautiful update loved it the story just keeps getting better
Continue soon and do pm me

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Sarah Ashraf

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

this story is a beauty! loving each chapter more than the last. Thanks for the lovely read.

love

Sarah

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Afshan

@afshanmk093

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

hey ava!
man i m speachless i m dam mesmerizd wid ur writing i really like how u describe every emotion
seriously u hav the art how to make reader cry though tis update wasnt so crying bt the previous one n the curren track u r writing for Perfect Mistakes they r out ov tis world

n yeah cn u plz PM me for ur tis story too as u used to do fr Perfect Mistakes

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Krupaa

@forever_young

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Ava!!!

Once again, just mind blowing!!!!
You have described eveything with such detail, it is amazing!!! <3
I can totally imagine it!!!
Just Fantastic!!! xD

Edited by forever_young - 12 years ago

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--Iqra--

@--Iqra--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Beautiful! 🤗 Very, very well written! 👏 The detail was magnificent! Thanks so much for the PM!

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-Aswathy-

@-Aswathy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Loved the update...As always,you have written everything so beautifully...VirMan flashback was really nice...And thanx for the light-hearted update...And Jeevika is alive!?

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preetipc

@preetipc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Loved the update.Loved the way how she describes her SAM.Love the close bond viren and virat share and how much she loves them.Love how she talks to the air wen she misses her mom.Loved the whole update so much.Thanks for the pm😊

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@say_cheese

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

what do i say bcoz its quiet boring to say the same thing every time ...but BAPU (gandhi) said always speak truth ( even if it get boring )...
so indeed its a fantabulous update..
Ava i cant tell u the extent of beauty in ur writing..
for this update ! so i loved it a lot ..
a big thank u for this lovely chapter...

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MadhuChowdary

@MadhuChowdary

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

hey ...it was a long update...thanks for that...and i really loved it...simply superb...manvi's part and virman's first meeting was nice...as usual nevaeh comments made me laugh...even though it was in flashback virman meeting was funny and good...so jeevika is alive..i said i m confused..that is why i asked u in my previous comment that jeevika is dead...the house u described...i dont know it exists or not(cos i never seen ) but i imagined it and it was really amazing...i cant force u to continue...but if u want to continue then i'd love to read more on this...i m waiting for part 4...u mentioned in the pm that if i m still reading...yes i m still reading...thanks for the pm and take care ava (i like ur name)...