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Niaksharma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nishal310

wow it was beautiful. u are amazing writer dear and plz pm me when u update next


sorry...
Due to my phone i cannot pm any one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I m still saying that i m weak in writing specially in English...due to i m Gujarati medium student...
So sorry if u feel any problem with my writing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaar u r realy a amazing writer...i didt want the seperation track to be pulled more...i liked this...thks u so much for not pulling this track so much...do continue soon...cant wait...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing,Awesome,Mind blowing Update 👏
I loved it ❤️
Cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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VIRAT TALK WITH VIREN JUST THEN HE HEARED MAANVI SHOUTED AND SCREAMING...
''DUR RAHO...DUR RAHO...''
''CHHUNA BHI MAT...''
HE RUNS TOWARDS HER ROOM BUT WORDBOY STOP HIM..
WB-AAP YAHI RUKIYE..PLZ..
VIRAT GAVE HIM ANGRY LOOK..AGAIN HE HEARED HER SCREAMING..HE STEP UP BUT AGAIN WORDBOY STOP HIM..VIRAT PUSSED HIM BACK AND ENTERED IN ROOM..HE SAW MAANVI IN CORNER OF ROOM..HE WAS SHOCKED TO SHE HER..
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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
-DeeNaa- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved ALL the updates!!! PLSSS cont soon! Am lovin it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-41
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Virat take maanvi in hospital..he waited for Dr out of icu..viren came in hospital with inderchachu..virat stood near the window..and his back facing to temple..virat looked out of window..one little girl playing in garden..he just staring at her..he remember maanvis innocence and her childish antics..her style..and now everything change..he cannot remember when last time he saw her like this..he feel helpless..he thought that its just bcz of him..he blaming himself for her condition..
He just about to turned and saw temple behind him..little stachyu of matarani plased in it..he just staring at murti..he come out from with hearing doctors voice..doctor come in front of him..just then viren and chachu also joint him..viren plased his hand on virats solder..he looked at him then Dr...
V-scarely-doctor maanvi ko hosh aa gaya?
Dr looked at him..
Dr-mr vadhera..aapki wife ko hosh to aa gaya hai..lekin
v-lekin kya?
Dr-lekin unki halat thik nahi hai..ek achchi baat hai ki sar ki chot ki vajehse unki memory vapis aa gai hai..
They feel little relief..
Dr-lekin..unhe Jo drugs diye gaye hai unki effect un pr kafi hui hai..woh..
V-dr woh thik to hai?
Dr-Mrs vadhera is waqt apni normal halat me nahi hai..abhi bhi unhe pain maheshus ho raha hai aur ye drug mentali torture karne k liye istemal hota hai..unhe un chijo ka illusion hota hai jisse unhe sabse jyada Dar lagta hai..aur kuch chijo ko dekhte hi unhe Dar lagne lagta hai..
V-matlab...maanvi kabhi inse bahar nahi aa payegi?..he asked with blank expression..
Dr-nahi Mr vadhera..bas waqt aur pyar unhe in sab se bahar la sakte hai..ek ek kar ke unhe ye yakin dilana hoga ki woh Jisse Dar rahi hai woh unka wahem hai..
Virat looked down and tears slip from his eyes..
Vn-thanks Dr..
Doctor nodded..
Dr-vese aap kal unhe ghar le ja sakte hai...mein nurse appoint kar deta hu Jo har waqt unke saath rahe..;
viren nodded..Dr again entered in her room..
Vn-virat..matarani hai na..
Virat look up and saw murti..he smile teasingly..
V-haa..kyu nahi..ye hai..yahi to kaheti thi maanvi..matarani..ganga maiya..hai lekin shayad Hume dekh nahi pa rahe hai..
Vn-virat..
V-kyu bhai?..aap ko nahi lagta ki Jab jab humari life mein khushiya aai maanvi ne har baar pahele inka sukriya kiya aur ye har bar uski khushiya wapis chhin leti hai..kyu bhai?..thak gaya hu..baar baar maanvi ko us hospital bed dekh dekh kar..us pain se karah te hua..jaise taise karke usne abhi apni yaado k bina mere saath chalna suru bhi nahi kiya tha ki..
He closed his eyes..tears floting on his cheek..viren pulled him and hugged him..virat also hugged him tightly..viren and chachu also feel crying..after few minit virat pulls himself away and wipe his tears and looked towards murti angrily..
V-lekin bhai ab nahi..is baar mein inse koi madad nahi magunga..apne pyar aur apne rishte ko mein khud apni jindgi mein pahele ki tarah lotne pr majboor kar dunga..maanvi bilkul pahele ki tarah jiyegi..jisne mujhe jina shikhaya..jab woh cancer k dard ko hara sakti hai to ise bhi harayegi..mere liye..humare liye..
Viren looked at him with worried face..
Vn-virat..tu..
He just about to say but they hear maanvi screaming and shouting..they turned..virat ruse towards room..he about to open door but one wordboy come out and he stop virat out..
Wb-aap yahi rukiye plz
v-worriedly-maanvi ase..
And again he hear her voice..
''dur raho mujse plz..''
''chhodo mujhe...''
''mujhe injection se Dar lagta hai plz...''
virat can't control himself and he opened door and again wordboy try to stop him but virat pussed him back angrily..
V-koshis bhi mat karna..gave angry look and entered in room..
He saw maanvi stood in corner of room and Dr try to convey her for take injection..its not hurt her and its necessary for her treatment..maanvi try to escape from their..virat can saw her scary and painful face..she plased her one hand on her ear and one on her stomoch..she still feel pain..
M-plz..chale jao..plz..mujse sahen nahi hota...plz..dur raho...
his feet froze with floor..even he can not moved from his plase..viren and chachu fallow him..but he gather some courage and called her..
V-maanvi..
Maanvi hear his voice and turned towards him..she looked at him..wisheper..virat..and run towards him..she hugged him tightly..tears fall continuesly from her eyes..virat hugged her back..he tighted his grip..like he want to feel her protective..and try to relax her..
M-crying-virat..kaha the tum...plz mujhe ghar le chalo..mujhe jana hai yaha se..plz..mujhe..saath le chalo..
Virat control himself..not broken in front of her..
V-maanvi..relax..mein yahi tumhare pass..bas shant ho jao..
M-nahi virat inse kaho mujse dur rahe...mujhe yaha se lechalo..plz..
V-maanvi plz pahele Rona bandh karo..hum chalenge yaha se..aura koi tumhe nahi chhuaga..mein hu na..plz just trust me..
She nodded..virat indicate Dr that he came after some time..he handle her..he nodded and leave room with nurse..
Vn-hum bahar hi hai..softly..
Virat nodded..and they also leave..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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VIRAT ABOUT TO COVER HER WITH BANQUET THEN HE SAW WOUND ON HER FEET WHICH MADE BY TIGHTLY RIPED THREAD..
THIS TIME TEARS CAN NOT STOP FROM HIS EYES..HE BEND HIS FACE DOWN AND LOOKED AT HER SLEEPING FACE ON HIS CHEST..STILL THE SCARE AND INSECURITY PRESENT ON HER FACE..
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Posted: 12 years ago

fantastic update.. loved the way you described manvi's fear.. plz continue soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovinggg It PLSSS continue soon! :D

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