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Posted: 12 years ago
PART - 30 (b)
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whole day passed..in between maanvi tries many times to talked to him but he ignored her..maanvi feel very sad..virat also want to talk to her but he want to her tell him her problem so he can help her..he was really worried abt her..
At night they reached into pub..they met with gusts and fans..they cut little cake and after it party start in full speed..everyone injoying dance and drinks..virat,viren,karan and maanvi sat on side table..jeevika didn't come due to her health and viren also not want her with him bcz he can't take care of her here..whole time virat can see sadness on maanvis face..she try to tool fake smile on her face..after some time viren go out for receive call and karan go for get drinks..virat looked at her..she looked down..virat sit near to her..he hold her hands..she look up..
V-i m sorry..mujhe itna rude nahi hona chahiye tha..
He said softly..
M-aur mujhe bhi tumse..
She want to tell him but she stopped when he saw karan come back..she pulls her hand away..virat shock with it and looked at karan angrily..here viren also come..
When couple dance start karan asked maanvi to dance with him..she didn't want to dance with him but she has to do..its right way to get keys..she ignore to looked at virat and go on dance Floor..same time viren also go gore get drink..virats gaze only spotted on them..karan tool her hand start dancing..he intensively pulls her close..virat saw this and he feel like he kill him right now..his eyes burn like someone throw asid in it..he just about to snectced out of his chair for get back her from him..but he saw maanvi plased her hand on his solder with smile..he froze on spot..he go near to the bar and in one shot he drink 3 glass of vodka and turned towards them..his face burn with pain and jealousy..
Maanvi looked towards for virat but he was not there..she searches for him..then she saw him stood near the baar..she can saw pain and anger on his face..even she can feel his heart condition..she excused From and go to virat..she saw him looked away when she stood in front of him..maanvi try to hold his hand but he pulls away..she tries many times but he did same thing every time..finally he pussed her back..tears came out from her eyes..
M-virat..plz..ek baar meri baat..
V-sh... Don't...mujhe kuch nahi sunna..just go..go with him... Never trust me..
M-tumne drink ki hai?
V-tumne to nahi ki...phir bhi?
Virat drink but he was all in scence..
Maanvi hurt with his word and ruse towards washroom..here viren come near to karan and put again keys on his jacket..then karan get one call and he come out from party..viren tell him that he handle virat and maanvi he should go..
Here maanvi come out from washroom and sat with viren..some girls come and asked virat fore dance..he looked at maanvi and agree to dance with them..
Maanvi saw virat go on dance floor with girls..which looks like cheap type..maanvi just staring at them..viren also looked it..he about to go for stop him but maanvi told him no..she just looked at them..maanvi also burn in pain..she hurt but she know that she hurt him more..he was going on through more pain then her..she know that somehow its her punishment to looks him with other girls and tolerate it..
Virat noticed that she not react even once..he moved closes to girls..like girls waiting for this..they girls moved their hand around his neck and virat not stop them..he dance with them like he liked it..he want to feel same pain to her as he go through now..
Now maanvi feel more jealous..she saw girls try to close with him and he didn't stop them..viren looked down..maanvi burn like cotton in fire..she stood up with jump and go on the dance floor and hold virats hand..she grabbed him out of dance floor..viren stood up but maanvi indicate him that she handle it..
Maanvi took him out of pub..they reached at parking area..maanvi stopped and leave his hand slowly..her back facing him..he just looked at her with blank expression..she look down and tied her cluch on her dupatta..tears slipe from her eyes continuesly..
Virat moved and come in front of her..he tried to touch her but she throw his hand back..she look up with teary eyes..
V-maa..
He cut by her..
She pussed him back force fully with both hand..
M-jante ho ki mein nahi dekh sakti phir bhi?
Again she pussed him back..this time he hited with middle side of car..
V-to kya mein dekh sakta hu?
Maanvi close her eyes and wipe her tears..and opened eyes
M-i m sorry meine tumhe hurt kiya..ye sab Jo tum ander kar rahe the woh drama tha mujhe jealous karne k liye
Tears again come out
M-tum janna chahte ho mere badle hua behaviour ka raaz pr ek baar meri baat sun lete..aur ye konsa sa tarika hai? Chahte to dat leta yaha tak thappad bhi mar lete..
He looks her with tears
Just then viren come
She saw viren and told him to take virat home..its not safe to him driving..and she wants to some alone time she took texi and drove towards house..
Viren come near to virat who look her leaving..
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Posted: 12 years ago
PRECAP-
VIREN REVEALED TRUE BEHIND HIS AND MAANVIS ACTION..VIRAT ANGRY WITH VIREN AND MANVI..
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ITS HAS BEEN LONG UPDATES...NOT ONLY FOR ONE PART...PRECAP CONTINUE IN 2 OR 3 PARTS..SOME FLASH BACKS AND ALL OF THEM..
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Posted: 12 years ago
rofl
i know maanvi is doing on some purpose but still i m not liking it
wohooo great maanvi when he does u feel bad and what about him u never think about viraat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update..poor virat..plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
ur story iz kind of drug fr him..
I check evry 1 hr jus to c if u hv update
lovely yar
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry but first i want to closed karans chapter then i put some romance in it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
cotinue fast ...cant wait...its very interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-31
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VIREN LITTLE ANGRY WITH VIRAT FOR HIS BEHAVIOR BUT HE KNOW THAT IT HAS SOMEHOW THEIR FAULT ALSO..HE COME HOME WITH HIM..HERE MAANVI REACHED HOME LATE BCZ SHE SPENT SOME TIME ALONE AT LAKE SIDE WHICH HE GOES WITH VIRAT ON HIS BIRTHDAY..SHE WALKED TOWARDS VIRATS ROOM AND SAW HIM SIT ON BED..ITS MORE THAN HALF NIGHT PASSED..HE TOTALY IN SENSE..HE JUST THOUGHT ABT LAST NIGHT..MANY EXPRESSIONS HITED EACHOTHER..EVEN HE DIDN'T REALIZE WHEN MAANVI COME AND STOOD NEAR WINDOW..AFTER SOME TIME HE LOOK UP AND SAW HER FACING HER BACK TOWARDS HIM..HE WAITED FOR HER FIRST ACTION..HE THOUGHT SHE REALLY MED ON HIM..
AFTER MORE SILENCE..HE HEARED HER VOICE..
M-I M SORRY..mein janti hu meri galti hai..
HER VOICE ALWAYS FEEL HIM RELIEF..BUT THIS TIME IT HAS SOME UNKNOW PAIN IN IT..HE CAN FEEL PAIN IN HER VOICE..SHE CRIED LONG..ITS EFFECTED ON HER VOICE..
HE JUST SIT ON BED AND LOOKED AT HER..
She continu...
M-tumne har pal mujhe sambhala, samja, trust kiya..mere liye sab kiya Jo meine sapne me bhi nahi shocha tha..
Virat stood up and just...
V-maanvi..
She cut him..
M-nahi virat pahele meri baat khatm hone do...plz...
He keep silent..
M-thank u...mein janti hu tum kabhi mujpe shak nahi karoge..aur yakin mano meine Jo kuch bhi kiya woh tumhe chot pahochane k irade se nahi kiya..mein janti hu meine tumhe hurt kiya...bahot...mujhe tumhe sab pahele hi batana chahiye tha lekin mein janti thi ki tum kabhi mujhe ye nahi karane dete... Aur tum to jante hi ho ki mein jab bhi kuch achcha karne jati hu kuch na kuch panga ho hi jata hai..she smiled slightly...
She turned and looked at him..at the moment behind her in sky starts sunrays come out..its magical view...he walked towards her..she looked at him with wet eyes..she hold her ears with her hand and apologies with cute face..
M-plz...i m sorry... Mein tumhari narazgi nahi sahe sakti..plz
He come near to her with smile on his face..his eyes filled with water but he stopped him self not to cry..its tears of joy..some little guilt..
He removed her hand from her ears and wipe her tears..he cupped her face and kissed on her forehead..she closed her eyes and hug him tightly..virat hug her back tightly like no tomorrow..
V-mein kaha ji paunga tumhare bina...i sorry...mujhe bhi ase behave nahi karna chahiye tha..i m sorry..
She pulled away little..and said cutly..
M-nahi meri galti thi i m sorry...
V-haa pr mujse bhi hui na...
M-haa lekin woh meri vajehse..
V-maanvi mein bol raha hu ki..
She said little angry..
M-nahi meine kaha na ki..
V-mein bhi kehi raha hu na..
M-virat jab bol rahi hu ki meri galti hai to maan kyu nahi late...
V-pr..
Maanvi push him little..
M-pr kya virat..tum..
V-are yaar tum to har baat pe ladneko taiyar hoti ho yaar..he teas her..
She again angrily...
M-mein lad rahi hu? Virat isme ladne ki baat kaha se aa gai..tum na chhodo mujhe baat nahi karni hai...
She just about to turned but virat hold her hand and pussed her towards him and plased his another hand back of her head...he pull her close and plased his lips on her...
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sorry for sort update...
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precap-
virat yelling on maanvi and she rush out of room..
Then virat also angry on viren but after viren understood him situation...and virat apologies to viren...
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey great update..comtinue soon..can't wait..plz give us another update tonight...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yaminnthida

Hey great update..comtinue soon..can't wait..plz give us another update tonight...


i will try...

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