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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start ... so plz continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely start
plz continue it and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hai guys ,thanks for your lovely comments.

PART 2

Virat:- if u dont mind can u tell me that why r u trying to kill your self?
Girl:-ofcourse i'll tell u. I'm maanvi & iam a orphan. In every evening&night i worked very hard and then i completed my degree course.i have stay in a ladies hostel. I saw a boy named manu and we fall in love. But he cheat me.
Virat:-what u mean by cheat?
Maanvi:-yesterday he told me his family fixed his marriage by an another girl and he cant against his family.my heart really broked when i heard that. I slapped him and run away from thera. Then i reached here. I lost everything in my life.then i decided to kill my self.
Virat:-u r really a fool manvi. Y r u killed yourself for a stupid?
Maanvi:-then what can i do?
Virat:-if u dont mind u can come with me.
Maanvi:-where?
Virat:-dont worry. I will never cheat u.
Maanvi smiled at him. They both go to the road&virat opend the passenger seat of maanvi. Then he get driving seat. He started the car. Maanvi get asleep in virats sholder.virat looks maanvis face.she looks more beautiful in sleep. Then he take his phone &dailed a number.
Some times later
Virat:-maanvi,wake up. V r reached
Maanvi slowely opened her eyes
Maanvi:-where r v?
Both of them getout from the car
Maanvi:-virat,what is this place?
Virat:-dont worry,this is my house
Maanvi:-what?your house?
Virat:-yes,whats d problem?
That time a young man&women come frim the house.
Virat:-bhai,bhabhi
Viren:-virat
They both shared a hug.
Jeevika:-virat, hai maanvi
Maanvi:-how did u know my name?
Jeevika:-my dear devar told us about u.iam jeevika and welcome to vadera house.
Maanvis eyes filled with tears then jeevika hugged her.
Jeevika:-y r u crying?
Maanvi:-nothing.
Jeevika:-hey boys,i think v shuld go to d inside of the house
VVbro:-ok
They all go to the inside of d house
Jeevika:-maa,badee maa this is maanvi
Vanshika:-maanvi beta,virat told us everything about u. U dont worry,u can stay with us
Swamini:-ofcourse maanvi
Vanshika:-jeevika u go &show maanvis room
Jeevika:-ok maa,comeon maanvi
They go upstairs and vvbrothers followed them.
Jeevika:-maanvi, this is ur room.u like it?
Maanvi:-i love it
Jeevika:-u go &fresh. One minute,please wait
Jeevika go out the room&came back in few minutes
Jeevika:-maanvi this is my anarkali churidhar.i know that u dont have any dress to change after bath.u can were it.
Maanvi:- thanx 😊
Jeevika:-maanvi u can call me dee
Viren:-that means u r my saali
Virat:-wow what a relation 😲
Jeevika:-maanvi u go & freash
Maanvi:-ok dee


Here it is. Please tell me that can i continue? Please 4geve my grammer mistakes 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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without any doubt u should continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aussum cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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no need to ask
continoueee :-D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please please continue sounds awesome please pm me when you do thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hai guys, how are u all? [:)] . Thanks 4 ur comments & supports. Please take me as ur friend.

PART 3

Jeevika:-maanvi go & fresh
Maanvi:-ok dee
Then she go to the bathhroom.virat,viren&jeevika sits in maanvis bed room.
After 10minutes later she cameout.
Jeevika:-maanvi u looking so beaytiful
Viren:-yes maanvi, jeevika is right
Virat:-yeah u r looking beautiful
Virat(in his thoughts):-really manu is stupid . Bcoz he missed the girl who have the lovely innocent heart.
That time vanshika enters the room.
Vanshika:-maanvi beta u looking so gorgeous
Maanvi:thank u aunty
Vanshika:-everybody come down,dinner is ready
They all go downstaire. Jeevika sits beside of viren & maanvi sits beside of virat.
Vanshika:-dadaji,its maanvi.i think i told u about her
Dadaji:-s, u told me. Maanvi r u fine?
Maanvi:-s dadaji
They finished their food&go 2 their room.
6 MONTHS LATER
Now virat&maanvi r best friends&they know everything in eachothers
One day
Maanvi:-virat
Virat:-maanvi,y r u looking so sad?
Maanvi:-friend,im so bored.can v go some outsight?
Virat:-y not? Anything for u.
Sometimes later
Maanvi&virat reached a beautiful place.there is no one.only viraat &maanvi
Virat:-maanvi u remember dis place?
Maanvi:-ofcourse virat,this is the place dat i tried to kill my self.
Virat:-yep
Maanvi:-virat if u dont mind can u give me a job in ur office? Is there any empty post?
Thats time a car reached their & a girl getout from d car
Virat:- MAYA
Maya:-virat,my love. how r u?
Virat(in angry voice):-what r u doing here?
Maya:-i love u virat
Virat:-how dare u to say dat?i dont love u &i hate u. Just get out from here.
Maya(pointing towards maanvi):-oh,i know she is the reason u said me that u dont love me.
Virat:-what u mean?
Maya:-she is ur new girlfriend
Then she turned around to maanvi.
Maya:-how dare u to take my virat from me?
Then she trying to slapped maanvi. But virat hold her hand.and slapped her back.
Virat(shouted):-how dare u to tuch maanvi?just get out from here.
Maya:-i'll never leave u
Then she get out from there.
Maanvi:-virat,is that d girl maya who destroyed ur life&happiness?ur old girl friend?I think u tell me about her.
Virat:-yes
Maanvi:-u loved her now?
Virat:-no i hate her
He looks very angry
Maanvi:-but she loves u.and i know that u love her too.u lie to me.
Virat(shouted in angry voice):-maanvi,just leave me alone.
Maanvi get shocked and her eyes filled with tears.she ran away from there.
Sometimes later
Virat(in himself):-oh god,what i have done? Already she was a heart broken and now i broked her heart too. I really want to say sorry to her.
He looked for maanvi. This time maanvi sits on a hills side and crying.
Maanvi(herself):-virat really hates maya. I know that. He is really angry with her and now i increased her angry. I did the wrong. I really want to say sorry to him. She looked for virat. They saw each other.
Virat:-maanvi
Maanvi:-virat
Then maanvi run to him & hugged him &crying
Maanvi:-iam sorry virat. I know that u angry with maya and i increased ur angry. I know that u hate her. Iam sorry
Virat hugged her back.
Virat:-Iam sorry to maanvi. I broke ur heart and shouted with my angry. Iam sorry too.
Maanvi hugged him tightly&he hugged her too. Then they go back to house.
NIGHT
Virat's room
Virat:-what happend to me? Y can't i sleep?
Then he remembered about mayas words
FLASH BACK
Maya:-she is the reason u said me that u don't love me?
Virat:-what u mean?
Maya:-she is ur new girl friend?
FLASH BACK END.
Virat:-oh god what happen to me? Maanvi y r u disturbing me?I think i love her. I really want to meat her now.

Precap:-virat&maanvis love confession

Here it is guys. Can i continue this? All ur comments r welcome [:P]
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oww they are so sweet , cant wait for their confession,
continoue soon and pm me pleasee...
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Virat:-oh god what happend to me?masnvi y r u distubing me? I think i love her.i really want her now.
He go to maanvis room.
In maanvis room
Maanvi:-what happend to me?y cant i sleep
Then she rememberd the same flashback that what virat remember
Maanvi:-virat y r u disturbing me?i dont know that iam in love with virat
Then she heard a knock in her door.she opend the door&saw virat standing outside.
Maanvi:-virat what r u doing?
Virat:-y r u disturbing me?
Maanvi:-virat i dont understand.what u mean?
Virat enterd the room&lock the door
Maanvi:-virat what r u doing?
Virat:-nothing
Maanvi:-then go to ur room and sleep
Virat:-i cant sleep because of u.
Maanvi:-because of me?
Virat avoid that question.
Virat:-maanvi i remember that today u told me that u want a job&any empty post in my office?
Maanvi:-yes
Virat:-there is a post.but not in my office in my life.
Maanvi:-in ur life?
Virat:-yes a wife post.can u join?
Maanvi:-what u mean?
Then virat went close to her.maanvi then stepback.finally she touched the wall. Virat put his arms around her waist. They had an eyelock for a few minutes. Virat moving more closer&whispered in her ears.
Virat:that means I LOVE U
Maanvi:-what?
Virat:-yes maanvi i really love u
Maanvi:-virat please
Virat:-what happend?u dont love me?
Maanvi:-i cant love u
Virat:-y?
Maanvi:-i have no right to love u.
Virat:-what u mean by right?
Maanvi:-iam a orphan . I dont have any relatives,any money
Virat:-stop maanvi. I love u not ur family.i only want u . I dont want any money. Just tell me that u love me or not?
Maanvi pushed him & runaway to the balcony.virat went her back &wrapped his hands around her waist. Then whispered inher ears.
Virat:-i know that u love me. But i want to hear that from ur mouth.please tell me.maanvi turn towards to virat&looked in his eyes and said
Maanvi:-i love u virat i really love u
Then she hugged virat&virat hugged her back
Virat:-i love u too & i want u in my life
Maanvi:-but virat ur family does not agreed in our marriage.
Virat:-how did u know that? And i think i can manage it.
Ha hugged her very tightly and kissed her forehead.
Maanvi:-now u can go & sleep
Virat:-no
Maanvi:-y?
Virat:-i want something from u
Maanvi:-from me? What is that?
Virat:-i think u know that
Maanvi:-i really dont know virat.
Virat:-ok i'll teach u what is that. Then never 4get that.ok?
Maanvi:-ok.
Virat cupped her face in his hands. They get lost in eachothers eyes. Maanvi runaway to her bedroom.virat followed her. And virat grabbed her from her waist and pull her towards him. Both fell on the bed. Virat was on top.virat slowly started to kissing her neck. Maanvi slowly closed her eyes.then he kissed her forehead. Then her both eyes. Then her both cheeks. He moved his lips to her lips. Thats time maanvi opened her eyes and hugged him tightly. He hugged her back.
Virat:-now i think u understand that what i have want? I want a good nyt kiss from u.
They both getup from the bed. Maanvi moving more closer to virat and kissed his both cheeks.
Virat:-gud nyt maanvi
Maanvi:-gud nyt viraat
Then virat go to his room and they both fell asleep in their own beds happily.

((((((END))))))

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