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Jaya

@screen22

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

WOW what can I say except that it is a pleasure to read your FF

Virat has everything but he is unhappy when Maanvi does not have everything she has to work hard o earn her money but she is happy with life, two different people with two different lives, one is sad where the other is happy. Money is not everything but it helps a lot to have it.

How can dadaji take away Virat life the company that he works so hard to built up over the years

Could you put English translations in for me to understand the story more

Thanks for the pm, please continue the story because I would love to read some more.

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

amazing start

plz continue soon

thanks for pm me

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littlerani

@littlerani

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Hi Anu,

Thanks for the pm. I'm a big fan of your writing. Please do msg me when the new part is up. Also try posting this in the fanfiction forum, you might get more readers.

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Aashika_virman

@Aashika_virman

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

wow another ff from u...so happy.

(aashika dancing).you never know to which extent i am addicted to your ff.

i am loving every thing about this ff from title onwards.

loved virat...tough guy.only manvi can handle him.eagerly waiting for their first meeting.

manvi is such a brave and strong girl.to manvi:just wait manvi your prince charming is on the way

And anu sorry to say that i didn't like this line'Don't worry, from the next part it's not going to be so long.'

oh please anu (manvi style)here i am dying to read your updates and you give me these line(angry pout from aashika)

i am feeling very restless..this is because now that you are having two ff's,will we get late updates?

now i am surprised...i never know i can give this long comment(this is longest one i am giving i think)

uff..

thank you for pm

continue soon and dont forget to pm me

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Sanam

@meant4uonlie

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

omg!!! another FF 😲 where was i?? so sorrry babes for being so late ... i just saw ur PM

But cant wait to read more and more ... honestly i havent read it yet ... but gonna soon ... i cant wait to read it ... i always want more and more from you ... thank you for this one ... 🤗

P.S sorry cant comment longer ... commenting from fone ... thats why i wanna read it peacefully and quietly and then will comment ... 😃

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afreen

@afreenkansal

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

awesome start.
continue soon.
pm me when u update

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mary9053

@mary9053

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

nice concept would be waiting for the next update

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preetipc

@preetipc

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

awesome start .pls continue soon .Thanks for the pm yaar😊

Edited by preetipc - 13 years ago

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Niki

@luvzindagi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Hey Anu, I am SO SORRY for the late reply 😒
My pc had been giving troubles so I couldn't read your PM earlier...
But don't even think that you bothered me because of my late response and Thank you so much for the PM

And about the FF... WOW your 2nd FF...
Great start...😊 Portrayed each character amazingly as always 👏
I loved your VirMan in the story both are strong, tough, yet simple and sensitive... and this new character Aman, I somehow like him even if I don't know much about him... I feel he can become a good friend to his boss... and a very trusty confidant...
AMAZING Anu and I am very excited to read the next part...😊

PS: I hate it when you say that the next part will be shorter😡... Remember I like longer updates😊

Edited by luvzindagi - 13 years ago