Swamini bua's revenge SS... part 1

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Hey Guys please letme know hows it. Depending on your comments i'll decide if i should continue or not :)

Virman gets married and starts their new happy life.. It is the first day of Manvi as Bahu in Vadhera house..
Manvi gets up in the morning and knows its a bit late..
As she knew that according to the custom of Vadhera house the Bahu will cook something special. She also wanted to cook Kheer like the way her sis did but since she doesnt know how to cook she went to Virika's room and she finds Viren jiju and Virat ji in tension in Virika room..
She comes inside and asks what the matter is.. conversation begin..

Manvi : Good morning Jiju and virat.. why are u both looking so worried and tensed?
(Since Viren and Virat know manvi would be upset bcoz jeevika is her di and it is the first day of her in Vadhera house so they decide to hide the truth and say..)
Viren : nothing manvi we are thinking about virats carrier and your both's future...you tell me what made u come here? Any work?
Manvi : oh ho virat.. u became so serious..gud gud..:) n jiju nothing i want to make kheer so i want to know how to make so i came for my di..
virat : Manvi u dont even know how to make kheer but u got married (in a jovial way)
Manvi : I thought u'll cook for me so i didnt learn anything but here the entire story is different..:p
viren : okay both of u stop fighting atleast after marriage be serious..
manvi : i cant sit widout fighting with virat..
virat also says the same..
Manvi : okay leav all this where is my jeevika di
viren : got scared n says.. she went to mandir..
manvi : okay i'll cal her
viren : noo dont cal her phone is off she forgt to put for charge..n u dont worry na i will give u a recipie book... U can see from it n learn..
Manvi agrees n takes the book..
manvi in kitchen.. cooking

V bros talking here
virat : bhai i think we should go out n check where bhabhi is
Viren : Exactly virat come lets go.

Viren goes to the table to take his phone n he finds a letter
"Dear viren ji,
i m sorry for doing this... Forgive me.. but i m not worth of u.. So i m leaving Vadhera house(my family) as this is my punishment for aborting the child..plz dont search for me.. U promised me before on that day u ll give me anything i ask.. All i wana ask is take care of our family n keep smiling.. love you forever"
viren in tears saying to virat about what is there in the letter

Manvi overhears this while she came to call every1 in the home for bfast n she is shocked...n crying...
Virat stops her tears and tells them before people in the house comes to know about this we need to find bhabhi and bring her back..
Viren says no if we 3 go out swamini bua and dadaji wil get a doubt so u both stay n i ll search outside.. they agree and viren leaves
. Viren searches everywhere but cant find..then he comes to railway station and looks at jeevika..
jeevika with half happy and half crying face goes to viren.. viren also comes near to her...



Guys thats all for now bcoz this is the first story i ever wrote in my life..plz letme know how is it.. :)
Thank u .
n sorry for any gramatical or spelling mistake :P


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: abc123s

Awesome!! Continue soon pls!!



M sooo happy atleast 1 person commented 😆 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start...
continue soon n pm me whenever you continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetdollashita

nice start...

continue soon n pm me whenever you continue...


thank u :) n suree😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ITS REALLY GOOD
CONTINUE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE
AND DO PM ME...👏😛😃
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cont soon dear
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Continue babes!! It's good!! Virika they are sooo cute!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome brilliant superb you so have to continue cannot wait please pm me when you do thanks
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Thank u guys :) wil do soon

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