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smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

heya frnds..

with "problem free viraman n virika luv story", i am going to write one more luv story of viraman.. this story starts when when manvi goes to hrishikes after virat maya patch up.. n she knows abt her cancer also now..but 1 thing is, in my story i dont stretch more on cancer..here manvis cancer is in 1st stage n dr has already assured her dat she vl get cured 99.9% widchemo sessions(again i dnt knw any medical procedure of all this bt its just a story)..

And in my story luv feeling starts 1st from manvi..not from virat..virat will realise later..

Edited by smileysmi - 12 years ago

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please continue soon and pm me... :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

CONTINUE please love it
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smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks for the encouraging comments..😊

i vl start d story now..hope u guys like it..

Manvi reaches hrishikesh after the party in vadera house for virat maya patch up..

manvi : yaar partner ko ek msg tho kardu ki me pahuch gayi hu..waise tho usse abb tak muje ek do baar tho call karna chahie tha..chalo may b busy wid maya..me khud hi call kardeti hu usse..

manvi calls virat bt virat was sleeping so doesnt rcv d call..

m : kya?? virat ne meri call rcv nai kia..?? meri?? yar itni b kya busy ki 1 min mujse baat na kare..then thinks may b he z busy..he vl call me back..

beeji: manvi beta chalo dinner khalo...medicine b tho leni hai na tumhe..aur haan beta kal hume dr manan k yahan jana..tumhara 1st chemo session hai kal..

m: ji beeji..me bas fresh ho k aati hu..

manvi after freshening up checks d cell for any calls or msgs from virat bt unfortunately none were der..ye partner itna kyun muje ignore kar raha hai?? chalo ek msg hi kar deti hu..atlst busy hai bat nahi kar sakta tho reply tho kar hi dega..manvi texts virat "partenr me hrishikesh pahuch gai hu..waise tumne pucha nai aur shayad janna b nahi chahte abb tum bt still...GUD BYE"

After having dinner she comes to her room to sleep bcoz she is not in a mood to talk to any 1 ryt now..she checks d ph agn bt no msgs..she gets angry n agn msgs virat "wah partner mere jaate hi bhul gaye apne partenr ko..kya partnership nibha rahe ho..i know tum busy ho APNE MAYA ke sath bt yar 'ok gn' type karke reply karne me kitna waqt lagta hai tume..bas few secs na?? itna b tym ni?? ok watevr...BYEEE"

she keeps her cell on silent saying that abb muje b tumse koi baat nai karni..ye tho suna tha ke gf/bf milte hi log apne other frnds ko bhool jate hai bt itni jaldi??? bhad me jaye partnership abb muje b kisi se bat nahi karni..me tho chali sone..

after 20 mins she agn checks d ph bt koi msg ya call ni..she feels very sad for the 1st tym kyun ki kisi ne usse jawab nahi dia..manvi was not d kind of person to get hurt on such a small issue..bt today she feels really pissed off..

beeji : manvi beta sogaye kya??

m: nahi beeji bas sone ja rahi thi..q kya bat hai beeji..??

beeji: beta jeevika ka call tha..usne kaha tumne usse call nahi kia yahan pahucte hi..usse laga shayad tum tak gai hogi tho so rahi hogi so she called me to ask abt u..beta sone se pahle ek bar usse bat karlena...gn

m: ji beeji..gn..n thinks arre yaar maine di ko call karna kaise bhool gai?..ye tho 1st tym aise hua hai..wo kitna pareshan horahi hogi..shit yar faltu me iss chep ke chakkar me di ko pareshan kardia maine..chep ab tho me tumse bilkul b baat nahi karungi..

manvi calls jeevika..

j: hello

m:hello di..i m sooo sry di..pata nahi mein kis goong me thi..apko call karna hi bhool gai..i m really sry di..

j: mannu koi bat nai..dats ok..

m: nai di..me na...apko pata hai..nahi..me bahot buri behan hu di jo aapko maine pareshan kia fizool me..muje sach me pata nahi chala di k maine aapko call nahi kia..pata nai kya hua hai aaj muje..bahot badi daffur hu me..

j: bas bas mannu kitna bolti hai..n dats ok..bade bade desho aise choti choti baate hoti rehti hai senorita..

m: smiles n says di aap duniya k sabse acche di ho..luv u di..n haan me teek se pahuch gai hu..khana khalia maine..abb sone ja rhi hu..n aap kaise ho?jeeju kaise hai?? aapne khana khalia??

j:uff mannu break mar..aur han me teek hu tumhare jeeju b teek hai n ham sabne khana b khalia hai..

m:hmm..tho di aur kya chal raha hai aapke sasural me..maya memsaab k aane se tho mahol pura ka pura badal hi gaya hoga aapke ghar ka..aur uss chep ki b bhav bad gaya hoga abb tho..

j: smiles..nai mannu aisi koi baat nahi hai..par haan sab khush jarur hai virat k lie..aur thumare partner ka koi bhav nahi bad gaya hai..actually w8...wo tho aaj dinner pe b nahi aaya tha..tarun ne tho kaha wo so raha hai..

m: kya?? dinner nahi kia usne?? i mean dinner pe nai aaya tha?? aur itne odd tym pe q so raha hai??aap logo ne check nai kia??

j: nai mannu wo actually badi ma ne kaha ki shayad wo itne din tension me tha ye maya ko lekar tho aaj tensn free hogaya hai tho aankh lag gai hogi tho hume usse sone dena chahie..tho kisi ne jakar usse check nahi kia..

m: teek hai di..chodo uss chep ko..bye di gn..me b soti hu abb..

j: teek hai mannu..gn..luv u..

m:luv u too di..gn

manvi thinks ye chep so raha hai..ya phir sone k bahane room me bait k maya se baat kar raha hai..nai nai aisa nahi hosakta..jaroor kuch tho gadbad hai..mere partner aise tho behave nahi karta..chalo ek aur baar call karti hu..agar ring hua uthaya nai tho sach me kuch hua hai usse aur agar engage aaya tho me usse kabhi bat nahi karungi..usse mere lie tym nahi hai ab..

manvi calls virat bt he doesnt rcv..

m: ring hua bt rcv ni kia tho he z not avoiding me..par kuch tho gadbad hai..msg karti hu "partner kya hua..?tum teek tho ho na??di bata rahi thi k tum so rahe the aur dinner k lie nahi gaye..kya hua tabiat tho teek hai na??"

m: w8 karti hu dekhti hu shayad uski tabiat teek na ho..

after 15 mins she agn gets worried n texts " viraat kya hua?? tum teek tho ho? yar chep muje darao mat..plz reply me as soon as u get up..plz yar chonta horahi hai abb tho muje..tc"

she waits for his reply for 2 hrs den she starts feeling really sleepy so she sleeps around 11 pm..at around 1 am she gets up to drink water bt b4 drinking water she checks her ph n finds no reply den txts "partner abhi tak nahi uthe ho?? ya phir mujse baat nahi karna chahte abb??yar jo b ho plz ek bar rply kardo..i really worried..w8ng for ur reply.." she agn sleeps..

at around 2.30 am she gets up feeling uncomfortable n checks her ph..smiles widely seeing 3 msgs n that too all of dem from virat..

ok guys done for now..i vl update soon..tell me hows it..😊

Edited by smileysmi - 12 years ago

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Jannat

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow dear very sweet story and nice start...
Good going
And update soon

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smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

[/B]thanks for luvly comments..

Manvi starts opening his msgs 1 by 1..1st come 1st order
Msg1 : partner u r really a solo piece..me so raha tha yar..wo thoda sa feverish lag raha tha evening me aur headache b bht tha tho i took med for both so kab sogaya pata hi nai chala..sryyy...

Msg2 : duffer ye kya bol rahe ho maya ke sath busy, tumse bat nai karna chata n all..hum koi business k partnershp me nai hai jo ghar jate hi bhool jaye ek dusre ko..hamara partnership tho hum dono k persnl life se juda hai..favicol ki tarah hai ye partnershp..todne se b nahi tutega..idiot kabhi dubara aise mat sochna..warna hathoda marke demo dikhaunga..

Msg3 :partner meri neend tho hogayi abb..if u r nt sleeping tho baat karo na plzzz..me bore horaha hu...MANNU DARLING...

Manvi laughs..pagal
(now all bellow conversation are msgs from each other )

M .: mannu darling!?? Aur tabiat ab kaisi hai?? Kuch khalia hai na tumne q ki dinner nahi kie the??

V: thank god tumne reply kia..muje tho laga tha madam mhu fula k baiti hogi mujse..n haan yaar teek hu abb..aur wo toda sa khana b khalia hai maine..n haan mannu darling q nai bhula sakta tume?? Partner hai hum acche dost hai tho kuch b bula sakte hai ek dusre ko dosti me..

M...accchhaaa...sweethrt

V: wah manvi..agr meri jagah tumara bf hota na tho tumse kal hi shadi kartta..itni pyaar se bulaoge tho koi b ladka lattu hoga tumpe..

M: chiii...muje kisi ladke pe line nahi marna...me akeli hi teek hu yar..i dnt need any bf..aur waise b i dnt think muje koi jhel payega..lolzz..

V: q?? Tumme kya kharabi hai??apne aapko itna underestimate mat karo yaar..jo b ho jaise b ho parfect ho..ek dam unique..

M: bas bas ..ye kya tp pe bate kar rahe ho..lv it...i m nt interested in all dis luv funda..aur batao tumara maya k sath kaise chal raha hai..??

V: kya kaise chal raha hai??tumhare jate hi i m sick tho wo chale gayi n me sogaya..han uski b 1 miscal n 1 msg hai bt abhi pada nai..mrng me pad k rply kardunga...

M: chep..uske msg abhi tak pada nai tumne??pagal ho kya viraat..wo tumhari gf hai..uska haq banta hai yar tumpe..pehle usse rply karo badme muje rply karna abb..

V: chodo na yar..mrng me kar dunga..waise b usse akele pata tha i m nt feeling wel bt still ek hi mc hai uska..maya concern karne walo me se nai hai..u dnt wry..wo tho kal tk bhul b chuki hogi ki i was sick..

M: paaartner aise nai hota yaar..ab aap dono couple ho..aise stubern mat bano..rply karo abi..mere lie..plzzz

V: hmm done kardia..waise b msg me kuch tha hi nai rply karne ko..she msged me 'gn honey' n rplied 'gn maya' datz it..

M: oye besharam apne gf k msg muje bata rha hai?? Pvt bate pvt rakho chep..hum public ko bata k entertain mat karo.. Dnt mind par kitne unromantic couple ho yar aap..kal hi patch up hui hai tho aise pheeki msgs..aise lagta hai 1 hi din me ek dusre se tang aachuke ho..lolz

V: accha tume bht pata hai romance k bare me jo hume unromantic bol rahe ho..??bf nai chahie, pyar nai chahie tho ye sb kaise pata tume??

M: J??yar me nai karna chahti tho iska ye mtlb nai ki muje kuch pata nai..i knw evrythng..

V: accha..how u knw evrythng??

M: bas pata hai..me b ek normal ladki hu yar..i too hav dreams abt my future tho obviosly sb pata hoga hi na age k sath sath??

V...hmm hmm..wah partner..manvi ki romantic sapney..manna padega..waise tume kaise ladke pasand hai??

M: haha..aisa kuch nahi virat bas future k bare me socthi hu tho kuch kuch ajata hai dimaag me...n to b frank i m nt specific abt kaise ladke chahie..bas muje samje..aur kuch nai chahie muje..

V: hmm manna padega..'samjna chahie' bahot kuch hai ye 1 quality me...sachme har cheez ko bht simple way me express karte ho tum..gr8..

M: chodo na partner..waise viraaat

V: keecho mat..bolo

M: m sry for all those msgs yar..tumne mere call rcv nai kia msgs ka rply nai kia tho i was pissed off..i am sorry

V: lolz..partner haq hai tume.. Aur ye b tho dekho ki me sogaya tha itne odd tym pe fir b mere ghar walon me koi b aake check nai kia muje ke kya hua hai muje, me teek hu ki nai bt tume pata chal gaya..yahi tho splity hai hammari parternrshp me..sab haq ki baat hai boss..dnt b sry

M: hmm..chalo chep muje neend aarahi hai..kal bat karte hai..u tc of urself..

V: hmm sojao..muje neend nai ayegi tho i play video game..gn tc

M: video game??? Pagal ho kya?? Head ache tha na tume?? Med lie the na tumne..?? Bhool gaye?? No video game or watching tv..chaho tho gane suno..samje?

V: yes boss..ab tum sojao..mrng me bat karenge..bye tc..gn sd..

M: good baby :p.. Gn

Virat laughs at her last reply..manvi sleeps nw..

Done for nw...hows it?? [B]

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Jannat

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Posted: 12 years ago

good one and cute too
Virman are so cool
Update Soon

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smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks for comments.. 😊 [/B]

Continuation..
Manvi wakes up but for sm reason she doesnt wants to get up from bed n go out of her room so she takes her ph n calls virat..
V: gm partner
M: gm..kaise ho ab?? Fvr hdache tho nai hai na ab??
V: i am perfectly alryt manvi..ab me teek hu..tum batao..lagta hai madam kuch nervous hai..awaj bahot down lag rahi hai..
M thinks wah partner kya pehchana hai muje..: nai yar aisa kuch nai hai..wo bas abhi abhi uthi hoon na tho awaj aise aaraha hoga..
V: hmm chalo accha hai..accha partner me tumse badme call karta hoon bcoz i hav to go smwhr tho ready hona hai muje..
M: kya kaam hai??n thinks kahi virat maya k paas tho nai jaa raha hai..
V: arre yar partner me bas wo maya ko brkfst k lie ghar le ana chahta hu..sabke sath toda adjust hogi wo..n fir usse kuch shoping karni hai tho vl go out..chalo bye i am getting late..n haan tc partner..
M feels bad for no reason: bye..n cuts d call..
M thnks kya yaar aaj muje partner ki itni jarurat hai aur wo busy hai..mera pehla chemo hai aaj..pata nai dr kya bolenge..aur injections..oh god..
Manvi z very upset..she doesnt want to share this wid her di bcoz she vl get tensd n doesnt want 2 share wid jiju bcoz he vl tell it too her di..she thot she can share her fear wid virat bt he z busy..she badly wanted to share abt her cancer wid sm1 so dat she gets sm moral support..unfortunately no1 z available..n dat 'no1' for her iz her partner..she wanted to share wid virat bt he z busy..busy wid HIS MAYA..
manvi thinks ' q mere sath hi aise hota hai?? Jo b mere dil k kareeb hote hai wo muje chodke chale jate hai..pehle mummy papa..fir di..ab virat..di aur virat tho apne life me kush hai n yahi tho me chahti thi tho q aaj bura lag raha hai muje??' tear droped from her eyes..me hamesha akeli q pad jati hu life me..di k paas jiju hai abb n virat k paas maya par mere pas?? Mere pas tho koi nai hai mere dhuk baatne k lie..q?? di k baad tho muje laga tha virat hai mera dost bt wo b chala gaya..me kya karu??kisse apni darr bantu??i m sure aaj hospital muje bahot se bade bade machines dekhna padega..n injectionsss..(she starts crying now)..injections se tho muje kitna darr lagta hai..mummy papa.. Diii muje bachalona plzzz..me ye sab akele face nai kar sakti...(she cries loudly now..could nt stop crying)..
After almost 30-40 mins of crying she decides 'i vl nt cry now..n i vl handle all this myself..i am not weak to lose hopes so easily..' suddenly her ph rings n sees viratz name on d screen..feels very happy n rcvs d call..
M: hello partner..
V: yaar maya ko roses du ya koii perfume??
M.:kya??
V: me maya ko aaj kuch gift dena chahta tha becoz it vl b our 1st day out after patch up tho kya du usse.?? Waise tho usse dono pasand hai red roses n perfume bt soch raha hu roses hi du..tume kya lagta hai??
M in tear now..trying to control hard bt she could nt..so she cuts d call..
V .:hello..cut kardia..aise kaise..?? Shayad network prob hoga..she vl call me back..chalo tab tk me maya ko lene tho jata hu..
M starts crying agan..cursing god 'q?? Q baghwaan?? Aapko accha lagta hai kya muje tadpte hue dekh kar?? Apne aap ko strong bana rahi thi na me fir q ye virat call karke apne lyf ki kushi k din ka yad dilaya muje..sab kush hai apne lyf me sirf muje chod k..she wipes her tears n says abb me b nai tutungi..agar tutungi tho b aapke saamne kabhi nahi jhukungi..dekti hu kitna tod sakte hai app muje bhagwaan..me b manvi chowdary hoon..itni asaani se haar nai mangungi..apne aap ko itna busy kardungi na me ki kisi ki yado ko apne aas paas b bhatkne nai dungi..
Wid dat she gets ready n goes out for d brkfst..

At brkfst table...
M: gm evry1..beeji aaj kitne baje jana hai hume hospital??
Beeji: 11 baje ka appointment hai beta..hum brkfst karke niklenge..waise hume kushi hui ki tum treatment se darr nai rahe ho..
M: koi aur option b tho nai hai na beeji..
Madan chachu: manvi dnt wry beta hum sb tumare sath hai..tume kuch nai hoga..humne 2-3 cancer splist se baat kie hai aur sabka yahi kehna hai ki tum bilkul teek hojaoge..q ki tumari cancer initial stage pe hai abhi..n rahi baat ye chemo session ki tho, bas drops lagayene 6 hrs k lie n monitor karenge bas..
M: chachu me aapse kuch maangu??
Chachu: haan beta bilkul..aise q puch rahe ho..!??

All r confused wid her reaction..
M: chachu ye jo b treatment ya chemo sessions hai me jhel lungi chup chap..jo hona hai hone do..i dnt care nw
Beeji: manvi beta
M: beeji plz meri baat abhi katam nahi hui hai,.tho haan chachu beeji mein bas ye chahti hu ki har waqt ye patient ki tarah apne bimaare k bare me sochte hue baitna nai chahti,..apne aap ko busy rakna chahti hu.. koi chota mota kaam..jo ghar pe bait k kar saku.
chachu: aise halat me kaam??beta tumhare health aur karaab hogi..
Beeji: nai madan..manvi sahi keh rahi hai..aur muje pata hai usse kya karna chahie..
M:kya beeji??
Beeji: painting..ur fav childhood hobby..beta tum apne panters ko painting seeka sakte ho..unke sath pehle jaise waqt b bita paoge aur mann b lag jayega..
M smiles widely: yess beeji gr8 idea..ab me yahi karungi..n chachu bura na mano tho kya me aapke jo shop k computer entries hote hai kya me wo b kardu apne laptop me..bas aap roj nyt uss din k sare details de dijie me nxt day aapke aane tak sb entry kar dungi..plzz chachu..
Chachu: ok beta..as u wish..bt jitna hoga unta hi kaam karna..stress mat lena..
M : jee..

Wid dat dey goes to hospital..n successfully she finishes her chemo session..she ignores virats call during evening..bt at nyt virat txts her which she could nt ignore
V: hey partner..kya hua mere call rcv nai kia sham ko?? Busy??
M: yup..
V: hmm..abhi b busy ho??
M: haan
V.: okay..chalo den me b sone chala..gn tc
M feels bad..thinks 'virat ne muje 1 bar b nai pucha me kis cheez me busy hoon..kya kar rahi hoon..bas gn boldia' n she does bt reply him..

Few days goes like dat..she compltly ignores talking to virat n even talks less wid her di..daily 2-3 hrs spends wid panters teaching dem freestyle painting..n remaining tym she keeps herself busy wid chachu's shop's computer entry work..she starts to hide her emotions from evry1 n keeps her pranks n nok jok at home like b4..

On the other hand virat slowly starts realizing dat maya has not changed..she z d sa,me old selfish maya..n everytym he realises this he starts getting angry on manvi for helping maya to convince him dat maya has changed n she z regretting for wat she did to him few yrs back..so he also slowly stops trying to talk to manvi..

and maya trying hard to become part of vadera family for der power n wealth..so she says to virat 1 day dat after marriage they should settle in london.. Virat asks what he vl do in london..his family z here n in india atleast he can work in his family law firm wid his bhai n chachu..for dat she says y does he hav to work..he can take his part of property n settle in london..after all he z a vadera family son..wid dat virat understands maya's moto of coming back to his life so he broke up wid maya..bt gets angry on manvi..blaming dat she z d reason for all dis messup in his life 1ce agn..

On d otherhand jeevika z worried abt her mannus wiered behavior..how can she avoide talking to her di?? Even beeji tells her dat manvi has become matured n helping her chachu wid his shop work so she z busy all d tym now..

Done for now..i know this z boring update..bt nxt1 vl b interesting..sorry guys..

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