Virika ' Ristha Dhard Bhara- part 3'

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hai...guyz...hws the day?

With ur support I am moving to next part...

...Scene 1...Virmaans room...

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..Oh meri kajol ithna bhi math sharmao..thodi der pehle to bahuth sherni ban rahi dhi...ab tum itni jaldi sharmila tagore kaisee ban gayi...

...mannu: pakkavo math viraat,main tumse kuch kehna chahthi hoon...

viraat: acha kahiye..ab se mera poora vakth tumhara hai...

mannu: viraat jab pehli baar mein tumsemili di mein sochthi di are kaisa ladka hai, ise kaise koi dosthi kar sakthi di,par dekhno kismet ka khel,hum dhosth bane ,partners...aur ek doosere ka saath apna saari zindagi bitane jaa raha hai...

muje yakeen nahin ho raha hai...mein mauth ke mooh se ithni jaldi chootke..aa gayi...

Viraat: mmanvi vo sab purani baathein, math socho..bas hum do no ithna kush kismet hain ki hum ram aur sita jaisa bhai,aur bhabi mile.

Bhabi vo gift hai maanvi jo bhagavan ne tumahare liye.bhai ke liye..aur ye pura parivaar ke liye diya ghaya hai...

mannu...she started crying and hugs him.

viraat: are partner suhaag raat mein koi...rota hai...chalo kuch interesting karte hain...

ab to tum muje manna nahin karungi na...hak hai mera...

mannu: she tightens her hug...and said...viraat hum kabhi jagda nahin karenga,kabhi alag nahin honge...ham jheeju ayr di kei jais ek pavithra ristha banayenge...

scene 2

virika's room...

jeevika's crying face and she is ilent..

viren: Muje ais sach mein lag raha hai ki tumahari zindagi mein mera importance bahuth kam hai,isliye tho mujse judaa hone ki phaisala tum ne kar diya...

...tumne us din bottle game, jhooth bola da ki tum mujse juda nahi hona chahthi.Agar vo sach tha ,tho tum ne aisa kyu kiya...

jeev: viren ji aisa math kahiye. Mein maanthi hoon,mein jhasbathi hokar vo phaisla liya dha..par ap ye math sochiye ki aapko chodna aasan dha..

...Viren: muje vo nahi jananna hai...jeevika. mein tumahare phisale mein sawaal kar rahin hoon.muje yakeen abi bhi nahin ho raha hai...

main tume kabhi maaf nahin kar saktha..

jeevi : ji viren ji ,mannu ki kushi ke liye...

viren: bas maanvi,maanvi...tumare zindagi mein aur bi log hai...

aur maanvi apna zindagi aur manzil dhoond liya hai,..maanvi ab baachi nahin hai...

..jeev: viren ji, aap maanvi par gussa nahin hona..

viren: bilkul nahin..galti tumhara hai jevika,nahi maanvi ke..

maanvi tumse samjdhar hai. khudkarz math bano jeevika,maani ke pyaar mein..

maanvi sach kehti hain kisi ko bhi ithna pyaar nahin karna chhaiye ki vo thaklif dene lege, jaisa muje ab takhlif ho raha hai..

tum mere bare mein na socho, maanvi ke baara mein socha agar tum chali gayi,vo kush rahthi, vo khudko kabi maahph nahin kar pati..vo yehi sochti meri vaja se di is parivaar ko chodke chali gayi. To tab maani ki zindagi acha hoti. Phaisla jab karte hai,soch samjakar karlo...

tum ne kaha dana ..hume kal; ki bare mein nahin,aaj kya hone wala hai uske bare mein sochn hai...

mein tumharaa aaj hoon jeevika aur kal bi..tumne dono ke bare mein nahin socha..kyu jeevika?

jeevi: viren ji aap jo keh reh hai..mein samajathi hoon,mein aap se vaada karthi hoon ki...

viren: na koi vaada,nahin..please,it's a request...

jeevi :..aap meri baat ko samjiye na..vo meri nadhani di..

mein aage se aisa kuch bi nahin sochegi...

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viren: aur jhoot math bolo...tum ne ye phaisla achanak se ek pal mein nahin liya dha..soch samjakar bahuth din pehle liya dha.

..manana padeka jeevika phiasla lene ke baath tumne saari rasme aur functions pure man se hamara saath diya...kaise kar liya..apne man ko ithna mazbooth bana diya ki usme mera akelepan jo tumare ye ghar chodne ke baath hoga..vo mehsoos nahin hua...

jeevika..: mein maaphi maangti hoon apni pure man se..please

aap jo sazza degi mein pho apne pure dil se apna lungi

..viren: saaza mein kya doo,jab tum ne mujhe sazza di hai...

jeevi: aisa math kahi ye..mein bardaash nahi kar pavungi..

viren: mein ye situation ko bardaash nahin kar pa rahoon...mein apne aap ko ithna jaldi sambal nahin paayenge..

jeev: please..viren ji...

please...{she cried and fell into his palms...}

viren: he cant handle tht situation...

he moved back,suddenly jeevika hold his hands and stop him...

jeevi: aap aisa bina kuch kahe math jaayiye...muje sazza to sunake jaayiye...

viren: he lifts jeevika up and wipe her tears...

[jeevika looks eagerly to his face...{kaash ki vo muje maaf kar de}

jeevika..: .tume patha mein hamesha tume sazza dethi di vo bhi sazza ke saath jhurmaana mangake...thakki hamare beech pyaar bade aur tan man se hum aur kharib a jaaye...

;sazza chathi ho na tum...tum ne kiya kya hai...bahuth bada jhuram na hi bahuth bada guna kiya hai...tumne to choti se ek ghalti ki hai...ki ,...

jeevika looks at him...

viren: ki. meri viswaas ko thoda hai, haamari kasamo ko na nibhaye hain...

Jeevika 's eyes is shedding with tears...

sazza chathi ho na..haan tume sazza milni chahiye...iss choti se ghalti ke liye..mein tume ek choti se sazza dungi...

jeevika...looks up to him..

jeevi: mein haqdaar hoon sazza ki aap kahiye..mein vo sazza bhukdungi...

viren: [ he looks at her with teary eyes,..and moves closer to her,,and cups her face and kiss her forehead...

"ek baath mein mantha hoon jeevika ki..tum mujse bahuth pyaar karthi hoon...muje ka;l raat tumahaari aankho mein,vo pyaar dikhayi diya.., aur mein bhi tumse bahuth pyaar kartha hoon..aur hamesha karunga..., par jo dard tum ne muje diya hai,vo shayad hi mera pyaar bhar paayege...
..[ jeevika cried and hugged him...they share the hug for sometime...viren make free her from his hug...and said:
tum vo hissa homera jo mein kabhi apne se alaag karna nahin chatha...aur tum meri aadat ho jeevika.."...
Jeevi smiled at him with tears in her eyes...[ she feels like she is complete with him...]
viren: meri aadat ho tum...aur tumahaara sazza ye jain ki...>
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ab se tum meri aadat na bano jeevika,,,, ki mein phir se thakleef mein aa jaaoo..
Jeevika stunned by hearing by his words...
ab iss bare mein aur kuch kehna nahin chahtha...mein..ye mera phisla hain!
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.he leaves...jeevika remained in her position..and looks at him..
viren: he stops..and turn back and said to jeevika...
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jeevika,kabi bi kisi ke kushi ke liye aisa phaisla mat lena ,ki vo kisi aur ki dukh ki vaja ban jaaye...aur hamesha ye yaad rakhna jab vo dono tumare apne hona...vo dono khush nahin raha payenge..aur saath hi tume zindagi bar ki gham mil jaayenge... "
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."sad version of tu hi tu hi..plays in background"
he leaves...from the room...
jeevi: she fells down in her knees and started crying terribly...She cannot accept that one...
[ab mein viren ji ki saath rehke unse dhoor kaise rah pavungi...].
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Scene ends...
scene 3:
" Virmaan room..
Viraat makes maanvi lie down in bed, he started kissing her eyes,her cheeks...and finally he move to her lips...they share a passionate kiss...
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scene dims with viraat holding her hands her tightly...
Scene 4
Virika's room...
Viren enters and see jeevika sitting down near to bed silently...
He looks at her...and move towards the bed and get to sleep...
jevi: after sometime she...moved to bed...and sleep at the corner of bed.[ she remembers how she used to sleep in his arms usually]
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Scene 5:
Virmaan's room
Viraat started removing manvis jewellery..and untie her dori of her blouse and kiss her neck ..,
Maanvi was not less romantic..she tightens her grip in his hair and kiss him in his cheeks..
Viraaat slightly moved towards top of her and they made their marriage night a heavenly one...
...Scene ends,..
Next morning...
" Viraat wakes up and sees his beautiful wife sleeping in his arms..,He kiss her forehead
Maanvi wakes up...
Viraat: ut jao partner ,,8 bajne ko adha gandha raha hai...nahin to..breakfast bhool jao... tum...
she gets from the bed suddenly...hey bhagvan aisa nahin ho saktha. Mein pehle shower lethi hoon uske baath tum le lena viraat please..., muje time chahiye ,..vo redy hone mein..aaj mera bahu ke roop mein pehla din hain,,tho ha please,,...ha
viraat: kyu maanvi...time kam hain..ham saath letha haina .."shower"..[he said with a sweet smile"]
...maannu...she remained silently and move close to viraat ,leaned down to him...and suddenly push him back and ran to wash room.
viraat: teek hain partner aaj nahin tho ,.kal...tum kaha bhake chalne vali ho...
Scene shifts to virika's room...
Viren gets ready..to office..as usual...
he suddenly turn to ask jeevila for his wallet but he stops himself and go to shelf an collect it by his own.
jeevika watched..and she realized tht his decision is strong...
jeevika leaves the room..for going to kitchen,,
viren: ruko jeevika...,pshe turns back suddenly...}
ghar pe sab khush hai,khaskar maanvi aur viraat...to mein nahin chatha ki jo halaat se hum ghuzar rahi hain..vo unke saamne aaye.
vo logon ki khusiyan kam nahin hona chahiye...ghar valon ki saamne ham jaise pehle de vaisa hi rehna chahiye...
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All gathered in the hall,[ excluding virmaan] and make arrangements for pooja,as this is the first day of maanvi as bahu of vadhera family.
" chacha aur chichi discuss kar rehe ni ki, maanvi ka aaj pehla rasoyi hein tho,kuch bahuth badiya banana ko kahenge...".
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precap...[ jeevika fingers get cut while chopping the vegetables, Viren sees that...and suddenly move to her, but stops himself and say maanvi to give her first aid..[ maanvi pareshaan and goes to jeevika..and thinks why jeejhu didn't help di..]
So guyzz..plese read it...and comment ...4
To continue or not...
Dedicated to all virika and virmaan fans
Gud day...

Edited by perl112 - 12 years ago

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