Manvi- ''VO EK RAAT''... Virman SS..PART13/ PGE 19

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js1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

this so very good. would love to see what happens Virat gets toknow about aayu!

please could include me in your list

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preity_d

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

hey I read the last 2-3 parts wow gr8
virat agreed for marriage? with whom? :O?
plz pm me next time when you update

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shilpa09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

AWESOME UPDATE:)

LOOOVED IT CORE :)

PLS DO CONTINUE SOON:)

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Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

amazinggg plz update soon nd plz pm me...

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priyanka mishra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

M so sorry virmanians i know i take so much time m sorry... so without any buk buk here is the next part,,,,...

PART 8:-

viren and jeevika talk about rendom think...

jeevika- viren ji hum virat ko kya gift karenge uski shadi me...

viren- meri fm ji mene to ye hi pahle hi soch liya hai...

jeevika- acha... hum kya dene wale hai...

viren- honeymoon tickets...

jeevika- oh thts grt,... par kahan ki??????????

viren - shimla... pta hai jeevika virat ne apna colg shimla se complete kiya hai... shimla se uska ek rista hai vo london me rah kar bhi shimla ko nai bhula apne colg ko nai bhula...
jeevika- virat ne kahan se colg kiya hai???/

viren - sit

jeevika- which year?????????

viren _-2004...

jeevika- a teaer drop fall in jeevika's eye and she run on virat's room... and viren follow her...

viren- jeevika what happen ... ruko jeevika

jeevika push the door of virat's room...

virat- bhabhi ... aap thik to hai???????

jeevika (with teary eyes)- virat...

viren- jeevika hua kya ye to btau...

virat - bhabhi aap thik to hai na...

jeevika- virat tum tum kya ma... manvi ko jante the...

virat is in hell sckoked viren now understand jeevika's condition..

jeevika-bolo na virat... vo tumhare colg me thi vo bhi tumhare sath hi...

virat- bhabhi...

now jeevika cried very laudely...

viren console jeevika and ask to virat

viren- han bhai bol na kya tu use janta tha...

virat- han me use janta tha...

jeevika- to kya tum jante ho vo kahan hai kaisi hai...?????/

virat- nai bhabhi hum colg ke bad kabhi nai mile...

jeevika fell down in the floor and viren console har...

virat- but bhai vo to jeevika bhabhi ki behan hai to aap log ye sab ku puch rahe ho...

viren- virat vo 6 years pahle hrishikesh chhod ke ja chuki hai jiska karan kisi ko nai pta...

virat- kya ...

okey now bye bye... next 14 ke bad,,...

but precape bta sakti hu...

precape

virat- i love her bhai... n bhai i promis you me use dhundh kar launga me aapki behan ko dhundh kar aapke pass lounga... i promis...

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sapphhire

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

sweet can't wait for next update.

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Pyaasi Chudail

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

plz plz plz cont soon

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Swati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

cant wait, continue soon n PM me...

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preetipc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Loved the update. Waiting for the update.Continues and pls pm me😊

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priyanka mishra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Part Nine...
Manvi- aayu khana ache se khau...
Aayu- mom m ur bst friend na...
Manvi- aayu u r my only friend...
Aayu- to...
Manvi- to kya aayu...
Dorebell ring...
Manvi open the door...
Manvi- hey rajiv hiii is waqt yahan...
Rajiv is the only friend of manvi... Whose everything knows about d manvi past...
Rajiv- hmmm nai aa sakta kya????
Manvi- are aisa nai hai aau na...
Rajiv- khuch bat karni thi...
Aayu- hey rajiv uncle...
Rajiv- hey champ...
Hows u????
Manvi- aayu tumne khana khtm kar liya to chalo room jau or so jau... No cartoon network okey...
Rajiv- one sec manvi... Mujhe tum dono se bat karni hai...
Manvi- aayu se bhi... Kya rajiv...
Rajiv- manvi I want to marry you... But agar jab tum or aayu chaho tab hi... Me tumhe force nai karunga take your time and think about it...
Manvi- i need some time...
Aayu left the room...
Manvi- aayu...
Rajiv- i just want to say me aayu me kabhi aayu ko uske papa ki kami mahsush nai hone dunga...
Manvi- i know rajiv...
Scene shift...
Virat- bhai kya bol rahe ho aap... Manvi ko gye but kahan... Bhai mujhe pahle... Oh god...
Jeevika- kya manvi ke sath kuch galat...
Virat flashback about the last night all the scenes come one by one in virat eyes...
Virat- nai... Aisa nai ho sakta...
Viren- virat kya tu pta kar sakta hai ki vo kahan hai uske jane ka reasion kuch bhi virat koi bhi hint jisase hum us tak pahuch sake...
Virat also break down... Bcos his love his life his manvi 6 years se kisi ko nai pta kahan hai... Kya meri vajah se vo sab se door hai kya usne kuch... Nai...
Virat open his coubord and start packing...
Viren- virat kahan ja raha hai...
Virat- bhai I love her...
Viren- what... Par...
Virat- puri story sunane ka time nai hai bus me ye shadi nai kar sakta aap bua ko mana lena...
Viren - but virat...
Virat- pls bhai ...
Virat - bhabhi... I promis me use dhundh kar launga... Apne sath... Or use fir kahin nai jane dunga... I promis... Bus tab tak ap apni himat mat hariye... Vo thik mera dil kah raha hai...
Viren- but virat use kahan dhundhega...
Virat- bhai agar duniya ke har ghar ke darwaje ko knock karke bhi use dhundh nikalunga... She is my first love... Jeena sikha hai usase... Use nai har sakta...
Viren proudly hug his brother... And... All the best...
Virat left vadhera hause...
Virat- kahan se start karu... Diya vivek, vicky aisha, ranya, atul , akanksha, sid or cristy... Sabko msg karta ho shayad kisi ko pta ho... Virat send msg to all... Guys I need your help pls meet me on tmorow eveng shimla cafe at shimla... Pls i need your help to complete my love story...
Then all are agree...
Okey...
Aage next part...
Precape- virat in dehradun...
Tab tak ke liye bye bye...
Love
priyanka...

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