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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_virman

Heyy deaar awsum update !!

Virat is the best friend that all girls would love to have 😊
VirMan relation is so niice 😃
Loved that part !! and tfs for the PM 😊

hey thanks ...
this virat is a best frnd i would like to have in my life... the one with whom i can fall yet rise in love... ☺️
anyways will continue after 15 th...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nikeshathana

wow it was a nice update!

i was really msiing virman nokh-jokhs in the serial!
but know i don't anymore and thnx to you!😳
it was superbly written!
i have a question?
what are you?
1) robot
2) magician
3) horse
4)human

what???

how come you manage so many stories at time!
you are awesome blossom man!

it was really nice
continue soon and please pm me and thnx for the pm!😊

ps: continue PYAR THA YA KUCH AUR???

i really love it and i am missing it. It was what which made me a fan of ur writing!😳

plz just take my request under ur notice!

hey nikeshathana... i am 101 % a human... i swear... 😆
thanks a lot for commenting on it...
your request is already accepted long time back dear...
will be continuing it soon...
just cope up with me for sometime more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pleasee continue and PM me too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awssummm...update sooon n pm me...
naina927 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u all for all your good wishes... both for new year and my birthday...!!!!!!
here goes the next part...
enjoy reading...
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PART 10
after few weeks...
virat n manvi's small world was turned upside down... they saw very less of each other in college and also after college hours... the two friends who chatted with each other day and night, now merely had time. manvi spent most of her time with rohan and she thought virat wouldnt never mind it. rohan was happy that manvi chose him over virat. virat was devastated he never thought he would miss manvi that much. he started waiting the whole day and night for her to call him but she never called him. virat would only call her and sometimes she picked it and sometimes she didnt. she not picking the call was ok but why did she never call him back... virat always kept thinking what is wrong with manvi... why is she distancing herself from him... why is she ignoring him... why...??? but he got no answers...

one fine day he decided to talk to manvi, so he went to her hostel at night so no one could see him...
he entered her room n saw her sleeping like a baby cuddling with her favourite teddy...
he went near her and brushed her hair and then slowly whispered " partner..."
manvi was in deep slumber and didnt react.
virat shaked her a little... " partner wake up..." " utho kumbhkaran ki nani..."
manvi woke up instantly and saw virat. she couldnt believe her own eyes and rubbed them...
" virat... "
virat : yeah its me virat... virat vadera... your best friend...
manvi immediately opened her arms to hug him but virat stepped back...
manvi : what...?? come n gimme a hug partner... its been so long...
virat : exactly my point... do you really remember that its been so long we saw of each other ded futiya... i miss you so much but you seem to be busy with someone esle...
manvi : that someone has a name virat... and i do miss you... you are my bets friend...
virat : cool... you have time for rohan but not for me... why...???
manvi : virat...???
virat : did i say something wrong...??? no, i didnt...
manvi : ok... i spend time with rohan
virat : but why...?? why is he more important than me n our friendship...???
manvi : because he is my boyfriend... we love each other...
virat : what...???
manvi : yes... a week ago only he proposed me n i said yes...
virat : are you serious...???
manvi : yes i am... partner now congratulate me na and congrats to u as you are successfully cleared in your assignment... full marks...!!!
virat : if i hadnt come here tonight... i would have never known this and who the bloody hell is supposed to tell me about all this...
manvi : what nonsense are you uttering...?? cmon when i have my boyfriend with me all the time how can i spend time with my friend... he is the first priority for me... virat grow up dude...
virat : i helped you two become friend and now you are least bothered about me n my feelings... i never thought you could be that mean and selfish manvi...
manvi : virat its not like that... listen to me...
virat : bye... take care...
manvi : virat stop...
from that day virat and manvi were like the two parallel lines which were never meant to meet... they were like two tangents, who were together once but then parted forever...
virat spent a number of sleepless nights... he always kept thinking about his life...
virat was never able to forget manvi instead he all day long used to miss her and remember the time when they were together... when there was no one in between them... when they always had time for each other... when rohan was not there... virat literally started hating rohan... for he was the only reason he was away from manvi, he was the reason manvi had no time for him, he was the only reason they were no longer bets friends, he was the only reason which spoiled his friendship with manvi...
virat : i have to do something... i cannot bear all this... i cannot live like this... i cannot stay from manvi... i want her back... i want my partner back... i want my everything back... manvi is only mine... she have to come back to me... i miss her all day and she ignores me... why do you spend so much time with him manvi...?? dont you miss me...?? dont you want to talk to me...?? dont you want to spend time with me...?? dont you like my company any longer...?? come back ded futiya... i cannot survive without listening to your blabbering... i just cannot... i am trying hard to forget to... but how can i...?? manvi i even find it difficult to breath nowadays... i feel like i am no longer alive... but i will get you back because i love you... what...??? what did i say...??? do i love manvi...??? i am in love with her... yes yes... i love her... rohan cant snatch my manvi away... he cannot have the right on manvi... only i have a right on manvi...
manvi was also thinking about the changes in her life. how once everything just revolve around virat and now virat was suddenly replaced by rohan... her dream man.. but still there was something missing... she was with the guy whom she always dreamt of being with... rohan was her raj.. but still she immensely missed her partner.. she missed talking to him... she missed him listening to her calmly... she missed him teasing her all the time.. she missed doing vellapanti with her... she missed chatting with him... she missed playing pranks on others with him... she missed each n everything about virat... but what can she do now...?? her boyfriend doesnt want her to be close to her best friend... rohan didnt like that manvi talk to virat or be with him... and she distanced herself from virat... because she didnt want to spoil her relationship with rohan...
next day
virat : manvi...
manvi: hmm...
virat : i am sorry partner...
manvi : its ok... i am sorry too...
virat : friends...
manvi : forever...
virat : lets go for a cup of coffee...
manvi : i would love to...
virat : lets go partner...
manvi: but i have to with rohan... its his singing competition today n he wants me to be there...
virat : never mind...
manvi : but you can join me...
virat : you carry on manvi... i will see you later...
virat tried many times to be alone with manvi but it never happened... he was disappointed but not hopeless...
PS : WAS IT THAT BORING...??? 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
No dear it wasn't boring I loved it specially how they both
Were thinking about each other finally virat has realised his
Feelings for manvi hope she realises soon awesome update loved
It to the core please do continue this sooner and do pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey its nice...virat understand his feeling for manvi n some how manvi also...pls cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey aftr long tym u updatd.. Wow its super cool.. I lovd virat nd manvi here.. Virat strugling hard to realize hz feelng abt manvi.. Nd manvi evn though she missd him badly jst being away frm virat jst bcz rohan wants.. Poor souls.. Nd u explaind virat realizng his love very wel.. Eagrly waitng fr next part.. Nd thanks fr pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
you updated...it was awesome...now waiting for virat manvi nd their rising up relationship
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice and lovely update dear .
loved it and it was not at all boring .
waiting for the next part .
continue soon .
thanks for the pm dear .

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