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Hello people,
well honestly, I am not good at writing fiction and all,but like quite a few of you,wasn't happy the way bachelorette party turned out,in VirMan aspect, and being a VM fan rest dint matter anyway.
Though in unbiased opinion,I would definitely like to say that the VirIka part of it,was nicely done.Appreciate that.
And I already dont like 'mere haathon mein 9-9 choodiyan song' and not too fond of watching males dancing like females either,even though for fun,so that left me a bit more unsatisfied :P (no offence to the song lovers and the sequence shown in the show)
This is not exactly a OS coz I am not good at explaining emotions and stuff, this is basically a short modified outline of what I think could have been shown in almost the same screen time, without affecting the scenes of any other character or couple.
Like the makers had already said, Virat-Manvi were analogous to Salman-Madhuri of Hum Apke Hain Kaun in the starting,so i wish they had chosen sth from that..
So, basically it starts after Jeevika's answer and Viren's reaction to it. The sitting arrangement is such that Manvi sees the males witnessing their party from the hiding place,and decides to teach Viraat a lesson.
Kadambari Chachi spins the bottle and it stops at Manvi.
Chachi says, "Manvi,since you are going to be the DIL of Vadhera house and Viraat's Would-be wife, I want to test how much you know about your hubby-to-be 's likes and dislikes..
Maanvi gets happy at the question coz she knows what to do now.
(the scene is exactly same as what they showed us, in the show, Viraat also keeps trying to tell his likes from the hiding place) Manvi doesn't answer any of the likes correctly.
In the men section, V is cool about it, but the rest of males start teasing him (in fun) that M doesn't know about V.
V as a reflex gets irritated, and ends up speaking loudly by mistake, which leads to the men getting caught.
On the other side, KC is about to give M her punishment, but suddenly they hear Viraat's voice and all the attention shifts to uninvited guests..
The males come over to the place females are sitting and
While rest of the ladies are busy quarelling with the Vadhera men, Viraat makes an angry face towards Manvi, cause she doesn't even know about his basic likes..
(you know naa, how M and V used to talk through expressions silently, during Virika wedding)
So basically Viraat makes a hurt and angry face at M,and turns to walk out,while everyone else is busy quarrelling and driving the males away, and Pinky chachi and Madan chachu arguing about Akash(dialogues from the show could be edited
suddenly, the music starts and Manvi comes forward singing and dancing to 'Maayi ni Maayi '. Viraat also stops in the middle hearing the music.
[ disclaimer : Everyone (from jeevs to vadheras to jeevs and behna fans and everyone believes that Jeevs is like Manvi's mom only, so she is addressing to her in the song(symbolic way) see how sweet of me, I added more for behnas in bacholerette party 😉
Maye ni maye munder pe teree, bol raha hain kaga
Jogan ho gayee teree dularee, man jogee sang laaga... (2)
Chand kee tarah chamak rahee thee us jogee kee kaya
Mere dwaare aakar usane pyar kaa alakh jagaya
Apne tan par bhasma ramaake, saari rain woh jaga
Jogan ho gayee teree dularee, mann jogee sang laga
Mannat mangee thee tune, ek roj mai jayo bihayee
Us jogee ke sang meree too karde abb kudmayee
Inn hathon me laga de mehendee, bandh shagun kaa dhaga
Jogan ho gayee teree dularee, mann jogee sang laga
(the expressions and stuff can be made VMish further)
Jogan ho gayee teree dularee, man jogee sang laaga... (2)
Chand kee tarah chamak rahee thee us jogee kee kaya
Mere dwaare aakar usane pyar kaa alakh jagaya
Apne tan par bhasma ramaake, saari rain woh jaga
Jogan ho gayee teree dularee, mann jogee sang laga
Mannat mangee thee tune, ek roj mai jayo bihayee
Us jogee ke sang meree too karde abb kudmayee
Inn hathon me laga de mehendee, bandh shagun kaa dhaga
Jogan ho gayee teree dularee, mann jogee sang laga
(the expressions and stuff can be made VMish further)
all the ladies join in between.The sequence ends.
Everyone teases the couple-to-be.
Viraat feels elated in the heart and mind.❤️
Then, VirMan scene,
Manvi complains in the same way, Viraat says that she doesn't even know about his likes,( he doesn't tell the answers though unlike in the show).and says that it doesn't matter to him cause their relation is above all this, and he was just 'faking' anger to tease her, and escape from the punishment coz they got caught in a bachelorette party.
Manvi goes all aww 😳and says ,
"Phir bhi Viraat, mujhe itna bhi nahi pata ki tumhara favourite colour WHITE(or red, whatever, I prefer white though, coz it gives NiShal feel U know ;) :P) hai, fav ice cream flavour 'chocolate with vanilla' and favourite food pasta hai."😛😉
Viraat gets a bit shocked,
Manvi says, "maine tumhe dekh liya tha."
Viraat realises that Manvi lied just to tease him and pull his leg and feels happy and they huggg ❤️
Virika scene continues, like it does in the show..
P.S. I know its a bachelorette party, and Manvi is instead requesting Jeevika to get her married to her love,asap 😛, but i think it fits well with Manvi.Only a girl like her can sing about rushing the marriage,on her own bachelorette party.Best part-no elders,so shying away can be forgotten for a while.
She is not a girl who will do things the conventional way, she is bindaas , and follows her heart,even if its totally opposite,so I think it suits the old Manvi..
And considering what VirMan have been through, faced all the odds and got united after so many difficulties,her urgency to get married gels with their story in a fun way.
(Viraat's part in cancer track-in first Para,
Manvi,a young grown up girl, irrevocably in love with this guy,- second Para) ..
this would have taken almost the same time or may be, just two minutes extra,if you include both Para..
Ok, so opinions and comments,please !!!
Ignore typos and errors.
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