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Radharaday thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear loved it a lot
Something new
Continue soon and thx for the pm
Pm me when u do

Kisses 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Love the concept and looking forward to the next update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I. Chapter One

'No!' she shouted, holding the first thing that stood near her. Jeevika stopped walking after her sister to try to explain, when she saw Maanvi holding the expansive vase. In matter of seconds the vase would be shattered on the floor, knowing about Maanvi's temper, if she wasn't careful enough. Which meant her dad would wake up and ask her where they were. Not that he would be mad at Maanvi, he would be happy hearing Maanvi went out. But it was a different story with Jeevika' Since Jeevika came three hours later then promised, because of some boy, he had grounded her. Coming late at night from a party tonight, would worsen her situation.







With her hands up, she sighed, 'Maanvi, please try to understand.' 'No! You actually wanted to arrange a date for me!? Are you mad?' 'Maanvi you know why I did it right? I want you to be happy''Jeevika pleaded. He eyes showing that she hid something, well that wasn't new. Everyone else saw the caring, sweet and always elegant Jeevika. But being her younger sister, Maanvi knew, that Jeevika has always a reason behind everything she did. Mostly for her own benefit. 'She thinking of me!? What a joke!', she thought. 'What do you want?' she said coldly, still holding the vase. Jeevika shuddered, she knew there was no way out of this. She needed to tell Maanvi why she tried to be cupid, bringing Maanvi and Manan together 'without telling anything to her dear sister'-







Jeevika sighed. 'Well, you know you aren't that popular with boys''Jeevika started. Yes, Maanvi was one pretty girl and you would be shocked to hear that no guy made a move, or flirted with her when you saw her picture. Till you saw her in action. It wasn't her looks, no it definitely isn't looks. It is her. The poor guys were terrified, and scared for her. Every guy cursed her under their breath at least trice. Maanvi came back when Jeevika talked a bit louder, asking her attention. 'Dad came with a deal a few weeks ago'' Maanvi looked at her confused. 'He will let me marry the person I love, after you get married', her voice trembling at the last. Maanvi mouth fall slightly, but controlled soon after. She knew what this meant. Jeevika could do anything now'








"I'm just a mixed-up dude." -Bruno Mars

Chapter II, Page Thirteen
Edited by BrunoMars - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Res
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Boys scared of Manvi... That is so Manvi...
And the sisters don't share a great bonding.. mmm.. Sounds different and interesting of course...

without telling anything to her dear sister…
does this mean that Jeevika is not telling the truth...?

Nice update... Thank you 😊
Edited by aysha1989 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Woohooo!! I'd so much expected Manvi to be wid a vase ready to crash it to da floor any moment (lol i've read tat chap 😆) oh so jeevika is gona play cupid i guess to bring virman together bt how she does tat wud be interesting... HaHa i so much luv da sherni Manvi... Boyz gtng scared of her n only my virat trying to tame her... God it'll be so much fun ahead... Thank u sooo much for da pm... Update soon...😃
Edited by shona_virman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
*res*

Edited.

OMG. This is truly hatke.

Our very own Jhansi ki Rani :) throwing the vase and all...classic beauty 😆

i request u to update this fast as u updated the first part 😆... and PM me too

Edited by AngelicDemon - 13 years ago
Radharaday thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it ... continue soon and thx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oops silly me... I reserved a post and re posted again...
Sorry for this post 😳
Edited by aysha1989 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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haha...this is the first ff i saw where jeevika is not really the jeevika we always see...she is actually selfish and care for her more dan anyone else...manan and manvi..hehe.. dont know how the date end up seeing her character..might be total tomboyish or rather allergic to boys...want to know why she is like this...
will be waiting for her soon to be dulha..(of course virat...i hope😳)

coming to the story..its different...i never read the novel ...so dont know the stroy of it..but i m loving it already..wating for more...written so nicely yaar...👏..loved it thoroughly..u know i always do😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: BrunoMars

I love you! I don't know since I know you
-That is since that OS turned SS-, I really like
you! Ahw, I am sure that your help will be
awesome, great to know you are there to help.
AHw that is so shweet! You think I have briljant
creativity? And writing skill? Ahw, you are so shweet!

aww...thnk u...😳
same here yaar(i can never forget how u inspired me to write wen i was soo confused about it..)besides loving you i have so much respect for u😊
yes yaar i m telling whats true and update soon😊..will be waiting for the next pm

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