Taming of the Sherni FF/SS... Page55 NOTE - Page 18

Originally posted by: Anu101

Thank you so much for the pm

I love the way you are developing the story. Nice and slow describing all the emotions. I'm sad for Manvi too as she feels so alone. But what Jeevika is going through is 1000 times worse I guess. 😭 Feel bad for both the sisters. For a moment I'm not bothered as to when Virat will make his entry. So attached to the sister's story. Eagerly waiting for your next update!!!!!

Originally posted by: girl_rocks

feeling sorry for manvi...hmmm

waiting for manvi to be normal...continue soon

Originally posted by: Radharaday

Wonderful update dear

Continue soon and thx for the pm

Originally posted by: Priyamvada

this part was a bit short... But beautiful! I just loved how u described Maanvi's mixed feelings...👏

thnx for the PM... 🤗

And wishing Nia a very happy ek dum mast B'day n hope she keeps entertaining us this way..🥳

God bless all~

Originally posted by: niksidfan

yaar...first of all sorry for the late comment...

yesterday i was soo excited with nishal and deir segments dat i missed it...

now about the story...

i loved the reasons u gave for their attitude...specially manvi's...i can relate t it...

its very realistic..the far of making anyone closer and loosing dem after it is soo painful and mainvi tries to avoid dat only which resulted in this attitude of hers

now i want a long update...😛

i m loving the way the story is shaping up...i love how u write yaar...⭐️

but also the virman fan in me is awaiting for virman...dat is virat and manvi's meeting, soon..

waiting for the next update...

Originally posted by: shona_virman

Awww Manvi is so lonely:( she expects jeevika to luv her bt i guess both sisters hav der ego issues... Sumwer dey miss tat sisterly bond in der lives :( nice update:) thanx for pm!!