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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: uzmasable

jeevika was unfair towards maanvi hope virman meet soon

Those little things that make us react in a kind of way, and the reactions that
follow...
Well patience gets rewarded...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Delena-cious

wonderful update...poor jeevika craved for some attention and love when she needed it the most. hope both jeevika and manvi set aside their differences and unite soon.😊

oh ho...it seems our virenji have entered!😳 cant wait to see how the story progresses. continue soon😃

I hadn't thought about that! Shit! I really need to find a way to make
them understand eachother...
Well, as far I see that won't happen any soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu101

Thank you so much for the pm

I loved the update. I guess what Jeevika went through so many elder sisters have gone through it. Though many of us don't feel it much as we grow up. I really love to read this as the bond between the sisters are completely the opposite. Eagerly waiting to see how the story develops.😃

Welcome!
Thank You! True True, I went through what Jeevika went through,
but in some way we -big sisters- are able to move that aside and
go further, move on. Sometimes people aren't that strong, or just
needed that lil bit of love they just did not get.
Even I am eager to know with what I will come up...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Jes...

interesting 👍🏼
cont soon 🤗

Thanx!😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: girl_rocks

this is interesting...different jeevika...

continue soon

Thank You!
Will try!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anu1989

Loved ur Update. Waiting 4 Virman's Meeting... Pls continue and PM me

Thanx! Uhm that will take a while... I will!
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Posted: 13 years ago

III. Chapter Three

While Jeevika was in confusion, Maanvi tried to control her feelings. Which feelings, she did not know. Everything was so mixed up. She hated feeling like this, confused, about herself. She needed to be strong. She always has been, since her mother died she never bonded with someone anymore. She closed all the door to her heart, and blocked all the ways to come closer to her. She locked her heart safely. Making sure no one would be able to break or steal it. When she lost someone so close, she understood, that anyone could just break all ties and walk away, even if they didn't want to.





She had done so much to keep her distance from everyone. Keeping herself strong, but she felt like breaking down now. 'No! You can't break down. You can't!', she screamed. She pushed all her stuff from her desk. She heard everything fall and glass break. Then she remembered she kept her photo with her mom with her favorite frame on her desk. She rushed to the side of the desk to find all her stuff broken. This was not the first time she broke her own things she loved like anything. Often she broke stuff of others too, but her own things got to endure the worst.





She was picking all the stuff from the ground with a rush without thinking about the splintered glass. She hissed in pain, blood dripping on the floor from the cut in Maanvi's hand. She instantly landed on her knees, exhausted by all the thoughts, the pain, the messed up feelings.





'Of course, well, when you think it can't get any worse'', she whispered, looking at her wound coldy. She may have closed all the doors and blocked all the ways, but technically her heart and brains were connected. And she hated it. Mixing feelings and thoughts, if your mind knows the best, why do you need a weak point like your heart? She hated that she couldn't protect herself from herself' She was the one that hurts her the most. And she can't do a. Damn. Thing. about it!





She heard her sweet sister moving in her room, for moment Maanvi thought that her sister would come and open the door with the first aid box in her hand, scolding her for being so clumsy' Till she heard Jeevika stopped walking, the handle of Jeevika's door went back to its place' And footsteps moved back from there to the previous place. A laconic laugh escaped from her, how could she think Jeevika cared for her? 'She never cared.' And she kicked the wall frustrated. At least that did not hurt as much as being left by the ones you need'




My fragil heart's been done so wrong. I wonder if I'd ever heal again. -Bruno Mars

Chapter IV, Page TwentySeven

Edited by BrunoMars - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: BrunoMars

I hadn't thought about that! Shit! I really need to find a way to make
them understand eachother...
Well, as far I see that won't happen any soon...


haha dare relax...u just started ur story...m sure itl all come to you when the story progresses...ok it seems that u've updated so me off to read it😃

will comment in a while🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Note!

Heey guys,

Wanted to say thank You to everyone who liked the second chapter, though there was -still- no VirMan, You
all gave me extremely sweet comments and Thank You So much!
P.s. This was a fast update, but don't get used to it!
And Of course it is Nia's birthday! Congratz people, today we celebrate
the birth of a very talented, beautiful, mast and sweet girl.
Nia wish you a very happy Birthday!

Edited by BrunoMars - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

poor girl really feel sad for her

hope virman meets soon

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