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I'm back Nehaji possible with a longer post. You know what I love about your posts is that you never introduce them, you start straight off the bat leaving me utterly confused if you (Neha) is posting or if your writing in form a character.
Ok- I'm going off on a tangent sorry about that. Coming back to what you have written, you know how hard I find it to follow things written in Hindi, but this was so beautifully written that I had no problems at all. I just kept reading as you wrote Jeevika's views with such passion that her emotions and feelings just poured out. It was as if you dug deep inside her and found all those words and emotions that the writers are not willing to touch.
You etched her story from beginning to end. Her being Maanu's di, to losing their parents and becoming one with both senses of the word - her own child in her womb and Maanvi as well. I loved how you put across her POV, how does trying to be a good sister, place her as a bad wife or DIL to others. Why do they have to be different. And how she can never he right in the eyes of others no matter what she does. If she strict, she too strict, if she is lenient then that is also being too soft. If she reacts, it seems she is overreacting.
I wanted to quote more lines but I'll end up quoting most of it so I left it at these two. There are things she cannot change no matter what and her feelings and reactions to Maanvi are one. Her silence is actually killing me - but she because she doesn't always react and speak, it doesn't mean that she does not have a clue.
Par Kuch cheezein hain mujh mein jo main badal nahin sakti..
Meri chuppi ka galat matlab nikaal liya jaata hai
As you can tell, I loved it and juts had to comment fully. I know I have rambled on and it probably doesn't make much sense at all.
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