OS:Abortion! updated scene 3 - Page 2

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Scene 2

This scene is after jeevika has aborted and hasnt informed viren or the family yet.However,viren comes to know about this through the docter.He comes home and questions jeevika for her actions.

J:Viren hi,mein manvi ke liye kuch bhi ker sakti hon,wo meri bachi jaisi hai,aik bache ko bachane ke liye agr meine dosre ki qurbani de tou isme kya ghalat kiya meine?

V:kya ghalat hai,jeevika isme sab kuch ghalat hai,wo sirf tumhara bacha nehi tha,us per mera bhi utni hi haq tha jitna ke tumhara.Tumne aisa kaise ker diya jeevika?

J:i m sorry viren ji,mujhe pata hai mujh se bohat bari ghalti hui hai,mujhe apse pochna chahiyeh tha

V:nehi jeevika,tumhari ghalti nehi hai,ghalti meri hai,meine tumse shayad kuch zyaada hi expect ker liya tha.Pagal ho mein,i m sorry jeevika,mujhe tum per aise chilana nehi chahiyeh tha.Jeevika tum ne kuch ghalat nehi kya hai.

J:viren ji,mein janti hon,app bohat hurt ho magr app mujhe samjho,mein manvi ko merte hui kaise dekh sakti thi

V:jeevika,hamesha se tumhe samajhne ki tou koshish ker raha hon,jab hum docter se mil ker aye the,tou mujhe kahin na kahin pata tha,ke shayad tum yeh qadam uthao gi,mein is baat se bilkul surprised nehi hon.Per haan,mujhe kabhi nehi laga tha ke tum mujhe bagir bataye yeh sab karo gi.Jeevika mujh per itni bhi wishwas nehi hai tumhe?

J:viren ji,mein janti thi,app inkar ker dein gey

V:problem tou yeh hai,ke tum mujhe ajj tak jan hi nehi payi.Haan mein object kerta,aur kyun na karon,akhir mere bache ki zindagi ka sawal tha.Jeevika,tum ne ajj mujh se sirf mera bacha nehi chena balke apne apko bhi mujh se bohat dor kerdia hai.Apne app pese mera wishwas,yaqeen uradia hai tumne.Shayad ab mein tum per kabhi bharosa na ker poan,tum is layak hi nehi ho.Meine hamesha tumhe support kia,khud se zyaada tumhe pyaar kia,badle me muje kia mila? Dhoka?

Mujhe apna bacha,khone ka bohat afsoos hai,per use zyaada dukh is baat ka hai ke tumne mujhe dhoka dia,jhoot bola mujh se,itna bara sach per parda dala.Kehta hain na,jeevika,her rishta mein sachai aur bharose ka hona bohat zaroori hai,magr ajj tumne yeh dono cheezein hamare rishte se nikal dein.

Jeevika,age se tumhe jo kerna ho kerna,jo faisla lena ho,le lena,mujhse pochne ki koi zarorat nehi hai tumhe,shayad tumhare ishaab se mein is ke layak nehi hon.

OK,so heres another scene,as i said earlier these scenes have no conectivity to each other. For this one,i will say ke its sort of dramatic.Many of u might think tht viren is over reacting,but i havent written his reaction to abortion,but how he might feel if jeevika hides the news from him.There relation is all abt trust and truth,and if jeevika breaks tht,viren too will be broken. A very random scene,though.

amazing but really i don't want to happen like this in the serial at all...

awesome n lsn i dont think viren was over reacting though i luv d way hereacted n if this actually happens in d show den i ll like to see him react him in d same way n iknow later he ll accept it cz he z d sweetest hubby btw update soon n do pm

nice story whem u will update please pm me

Scene 3

Ok now another scene,this is when jeevika has donated her bone marrow,viren is being cold towards her for not letting him know abt abortion and taking a big decison without informing him.Jeevika is sitting on the bed,she is not well due to the transplantation and abortion,and all the stress.She is sort of weak.

Jeevika was walking towards the bed and viren was working on the some files.Suddenly jeevika felt dizzy and was about to fall,viren immediately rushed to her and held her before she fell.As she opened her eyes,a small smile crept on her lips.Viren had a serious expression on his face.He helped her sit on the bed.

V:Jeevika,tume apna khayal rakhna chahiyeh,abhi mein nehi hota tou?

J:tou kuch nehi hota,kyunke mein janti hon,jab bhi mein kisi problem mein hongi,ap hamesha mere sath honge

Viren was abt to go but jeevika held his hand.

J:viren ji,kab tak app aise raho gey,kab tak mujhe khud se dor rakho gey aur mujhse baat nehi karo gey,kab tak..(she was sobbing)

Viren,though was angry but still loved her a lot and as always cudnt see a tear in her eyes.He tried to control his emotions and stop himself but wasnt able to.His hand caressed her face and he wiped off her tears.

V:jeevika,tumhari tabiyaat theek nehi hai,tum araam karo

J:haan mein theek nehi hon,nehi hon theek main.Viren ji ajj apko mujh se baat kerni hogi,plz viren ji

V:jeevika dekho..

J:nehi viren ji,mein aur bardasht nehi ker sakti.Apko yehi lagta hai na,ke mein aik bohat buri maa hon jisne apne bache ko khud mar dala,aik bohat buri patni jo apne pati se bilkul pyaar nehi kerti,aik aisi bahu jisne apne sasuraal walon ka saman nehi kia.Sehi lagta hai apko,mein bohat buri hon,bohat buri.App nehi jante viren ji,per app se zyaada,mein apne app se ghusa hon,nafrat kerti hon apne apse,mera bas chale tou mein abhi apni jaan lelon

V:chup karo,kaisi batein ker rehi ho

J:nehi viren ji,sehi keh rehi hon mein,apne bache ko marne ke booj ke sath jene se tou acha hai ke mein apni zindagi ko khatam ker don.

Viren ji,apko pata hai jab maine pregnancy test kia aor wo positive aya na,tou mein bohat khush thi,wo feeling,mein bata nehi sakti apko.Phir jab apse yeh baat share ki aur apki khushi dekhi,tou mein bohat khush thi,bohat zyaada.Par jab mujhe manvi aur apne bache mein se kisi aik ko chuna para,tou mein manvi ko chunei mein majboor hogayi,meri behen,jo meri baby jaisi hai.Wo decision bohat mushkil tha mere liye,sirf mein janti hon,meine apne apko kaise raazi kia is ke liye.Dil per pathr rakha hua tha.Aisa laga jaise humare sare sapne toot gaye,wo sapne jo humne aik sath dekhe,apne future ke liye,apne bache ke liye,sab khatam ho gaya,sab kuch.Yeh dukh kan tha,ke app bhi mujh se naraaz ho gaye,mun pher liya mujhse,viren ji,mein sab kuch bardasht ker sakti hon,per apki beh rukhi nehi.Mein apse bohat pyaar kerti hon,viren ji,app mere sab kuch ho aur agr app hi mujh se dor ho jao ge,tou mein mar jaon gi.

Jeevika was crying uncontrollably.From all these days,viren hadnt bothered to find abt how she felt,he had acted selfish.He just saw jeevika as a sister to manvi,he forgot tht she was a mother who had lost her first unborn baby,a wife,whose husband wasnt there with her in the most difficult time of her life.He just wanted to take their life in his hands and change everything,make everything perfect but before tht he had to take care of his broken wife.Viren immediately hugged jeevika tighty,jeevika responded by holding him tighty,viren tightened the hug just to reassure her tht he was there with her,now,he was always there.

J:Viren ji,i m sorry,i m very sorry,meine apko bohat takleef di hai,mein bohat buri hon

V:nehi jeevika,tum buri nehi ho,bhol jao sab kuch,sari purani batein,wo batein jo sirf dard deti hain.Lets start our life all over again,i promise,sab theek hojaye ga,sab kuch..

J:viren ji,app mujhe chor ker to nehi jao gey na?

V:kabhi nehi jeevika,kabhi nehi

He kissed her on the fore head and she buried herself in his chest,as they forgot all their worries and prepared themselves for a fresh start,a new life together!!

beautiful update...loved it ...plzz continue soon...

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