Virman-Beyond Control (note pg-151)

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js1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#671

this is so beutifully written - i am amazed how you are developing Virat's charachter and Maanvi's maturity. Beautiful convo between ma / beta!

I am more amazed how quickly you are churning this without impacting quality of work!

Well done

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mika17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#672

wow dat was beautiful, I'm speechless, u portray da emotions so beautifully ur doing a lovely job

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shaimah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#673

awesome update

continue soon and do pm me for your next update

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Shivani Rajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#674

Wow... Girl how can u explain things beautifully yar. Loved it ❤️

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Angeline124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#675

Virat's emotions is wonderfully ortrayed. Hope virat's insecurity nature will gone soon. This is a fabulous update. Continue soon and thnx for the pm.

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Cintila

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Posted: 13 years ago

#676

You updated sooo soon ?? but yyyaaayyy !! Loved this update !! The VirMan scenes in ur ff are making me crazy !! Thanks for the pm too...🤗

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Syed695

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Posted: 13 years ago

#677

Awesome is a very small word for ur update!! ur expalnation on every emotion was WOW!!!!

Continue soon N thanks for the pm!

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abhilasha143

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Posted: 13 years ago

#678

It is brilliant yaar...i will be restless till sunday waiting for ur update. I will compensate by re-reading ur story. Thank u for the pm.

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MadhuChowdary

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Posted: 13 years ago

#679

wow..u r an awesome writer yaar..the way u express every emotion of characters especially virat is mind blowing..i loved it...u made my day..thank u so much for pm..and update next chapter asap..

edit : oh sunday..two days..its ok..it is worth waiting for ur update but update asap...

Edited by madhavichowdary - 13 years ago