virman ss pyar aur dosti.. part 29 (LAST) updt

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Nikethana Taran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#631

yeah few more minutes holding my breathe!

ay ay naina 100 PAGES congrats my buddy!👏

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

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PART 28

' knock knock '
virat came out of his thoughts and proceeded towards the door...
virat : yes...
tarun : virat baba... dinner is ready... bauji is calling you and manvi bhabhi...
virat : okk...
virat turned around, looked fondly at his sleeping beauty and woke her up..
virat : manna...
manvi : hmm...
virat : get up sweetheart...
manvi : no...
virat : manvi dadadji is calling us... its already 07:50...
manvi : what time...???
virat : 07:50pm...
manvi : oops... how come i didnt get up...??? cmon hurry up virat...
virat : you know what we can relax a bit and go late...
manvi : why...??? is there any special occasion...???
virat : meri ded futiya dadaji will surely excuse us both taking in account that you are gong to give this house its heir...
manvi : why are talking like some aunty of 6o-65 yrs... khandan n waaris stuff...???
virat : forget it... lets go miss phd. in romance destroyer...
manvi : you... i will kill you...
virat ; i will love you more then...
manvi : your problem...
virat : ohh really...????
manvi : yeah...
virat : lets go... we are getting late...
manvi : i won... you lose... yieeppiieee...
virat : i have lost myself to you long back...
manvi : haaye...!!!

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dinner was like the usual affair... after the dinner, all were in the their rooms...
virman room
manvi : virat...
virat : hmm...
manvi : we will surely go to the party tomorrow na...
virat : yeah baby..
manvi : thanks... love you...
virat : love you three...
manvi : three...??? where has two gone...???
virat : mandbhudhi... two for mannat and three for manna...
manvi : so mannat is now before than manna...
virat : yeah... do you have any problem..???
manvi : no... you will have a problem when you will be on the third number for me...!!! then i will ask you...
virat : what...??? how come third...???
manvi : when i will have my junior chep na... then you will be on number third...
virat : good going... we arent over with the first one and you are already planning a second one... extremely amazing...!!! i always thought you want only one child... anyways its good for me only... bcos i want soo many of them...
manvi : what do you mean by soo many of them...????
virat : i want 4 children two girls like u n bhabhi and two boys like me n bhai...
manvi : what...???? am i a clearance sale or what...??? i am not a shop of kids...
virat : hehe... i knew you would react this way... thats why i didnt tell you...!!!!
manvi : but no way we are gonna have 4 kids... we will have only two... thats final...
virat (sadly); okay
manvi : thats like my chep...
virat ; and thats like a sherni...
manvi : funny...!!!
virat : but less than you...
manvi : why do you always tease me...??? dont you love me any longer the way you used to...???
virat : no i dont love you any longer the way i used to... because i love you more than that now - more deeper and more truly...
manvi : i also love you that way...!!! nothing is more dearer to me other than you and our mannat...!!!
virat : really but are you sure about it manna...??? think once again...!!!
manvi : yes i am sure virat... very sure infact...
virat : so...
manvi : so...????
virat : what about your ek hazaron mein behna...???
manvi : oh... di is not dearer to me the way you n mannat are... but you know why...???
virat : why...???
manvi : because di is the air i breathe, di is my heart and my soul...
virat : hmmm...
manvi : now if your coffe with virat is over, then can we both sleep...
virat : ya ya... you should sleep on time manna... and never disturb your routine jaana...
manvi : my over caring hubby i got it and now please switch off the light...
virat : yeah sure... goodnight...
manvi : good night patidev...
they ciddled up together and entered the beautiful world of dreams of their happy n bright future...

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next day as virat promised manvi, he took her to arjun's party...
manvi felt so refreshed and happy to back in the company of her FRANDS... (friends) and seeing manvi happy virat was also very happy... but he didnt get out of his avatar of a caring husband and was beside her all the time taking care of things like what she was drinking, what snacks was she having, etc etc...

manvi was getting embarrased of virat's behaviour towards her and everybody was teasing her... but virat wasnt even affected because the only thing that mattered to him was with him and she was happy...
arjun : virat...
virat : yeah bro...
arjun : do u by any chance remember that its my birthday party...??
virat : ofcourse dude...
arjun : ohh really i thought yoyu have on a date with your beloved wife...
virat : what...???
arjun : yeah you are not even leaving her side of a second dude... give her some space...
virat : arjun you cannot understand... manvi is pregnant... okk..
arjun : so whats the big deal...???
manvi : exactly...!!!
arohi : yes virat... manvi is pregnant... she is not ill... she is ok and i promise i will take care of her...
virat : you are sure...???
arohi : if you forgot let me tell you manvi is my childhood friend and i took care of her until you became a part of her life... because after it you took the lead...
virat : yeah yeah... and i trust you my aadhi ghar wali... and i am not a part of manvi's life...
armaan : i know i know... you are her life... right...???
riddhima : yes baby you are right... and we all know that...
misha : why god...??? why am i struck in these boring people...??? god kabir.. i wish you could make it...!!!!
manvi : ohh so ms. misha missing mr, kabir... interesting...!!! but why are you both still on the stage of missing each other...??? do something...!!!
misha : oh cmon manvi dude... i dont have super a sonic speed that you n your hubby have...
arohi : hehe... that is right...!!!
manvi : arohi...???
arohi : i mean she n kabir are a little slow...
arjun : dal badlu... see how diplomatic and manipulative she is...
virat : pange mat le... (dont mess with her) else your engagement will be broken before it actually happens...
arjun : oh yeah... i cannot take that risk until we get married...
arohi : n the pot calls the kettle black...
armaan : arjun dude... lets just stop fighting... come lets have a drink or two...
riddhima : armaan... dont drink too much...
arohi : same applies to you arjun...
misha : speak up manvi... now its your turn to give instuctions cum order to your husband...
manvi : i dont need to... i know virat will not drink... and coming to orders i only get them... i cant give him some...
virat : right in first place but i dont give you orders... infact even if i give, then are you so damn innocent to take them n follow it blindly...
armaan : dont start it again... lets go boys... girlies enjoy yourself...
manvi : thanks armaan...
armaan : anytime sweetheart...
virat : oh hello...???
armaan : i mean thanks manvi bhabhi...
virat : now lets go...
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arohi : i am so happy for you manvi... virat really loves you...
manvi : i know arohi... he really loves me... i am so lucky...
riddhim : so is this kido... (placing her hand on manvi's tummy)
manvi (blushing) : yeah...
arohi : i wish i could ver get that lucky...
manvi : my to be jiju loves you arohi... i can se it in his eyes...
misha : i wish kabir alos officially proposes me...
manvi : he will mish darling... he will surely do...
misha : fingers crossed...
riddhima : you all are so lucky but this armaan is just too far romeo types... he just keeps on flirting thats it...
manvi n arohi : yeah but he loves only you...
misha : you so lucky ridz... look at me situation babes...
manvi : poor misha... never mind i will ask virat to teach something to kabir else they would end up when we all will have kids...
arohi : yeah... actually not only for kabir.. but also for all four of us you n virat are our love guru...
riddhima : because you both have experienced the things that we havent yet...
manvi : you will experience it when you will get married...
riddhima ; have some shame manvi... how can you talk all about these things so openly...????
manvi : because i am married and trust me you all once you get married you will became shameless...
arohi : manvi i wonder if here in a party you are so shamelessly talking about these things.. what have you might done on your honeymoon...???
misha : tell na dude...
manvi : honeymoon...!!! do you all really dont know what happens...??? never mind i will tell you guys on the right time not now... and mish darling why are you being so desperate...??? hehe...
arohi : atleast tell me na manvi... my shona...
manvi : jaana... honeymoon is a secret affair...
arohi : but the result isnt...
manvi : haaww... dont say anything to my baby...
arohi : i was just joking...!!!
riddhima : on a serious note, manvi how does it feel like...???
manvi : how can i tell this thing...??? its so very personal... remember honeymoon secret affair...
riddhima : i am asking about the feeling of a baby growing inside you not the censored one...
manvi : oops... i thought... anyways its just a wonderful feeling... so what i just cant feel anything right now but only the thought is enough to make you feel heavenly...
riddhima : hmm...
arohi : manvi thats impressive...!!! by the way what do you want - a boy or a girl...???
manvi : arohi virat has alreday decided that... he wants a baby girl and have even named her...
arohi : woww...
misha : but whats the name he decided...???
manvi : mannat... mannat vadera...
riddhima : that is soo very cute... virat is really adorable...
manvi : jiju...
riddhima : yeah jiju...
arohi : so god bless you n mannat...
riddhima n misha : we wish the same...
manvi : thanks guys...

scene shifts
boys convo
armaan : so mr. experienced, hows all been till now...???
virat : what do you wanna know dude...???
armaan : you know what i mean...
virat : shut up... okk...!!!
arjun : bta bhi de... whats there to feel shy...???
virat : shy n me... you gonna be kidding..
armaan : so shoot no...
virat : it was FUN...!!!!
arjun : and...
virat : and what...???
armaan : and... you are such a... i know you wouldnt tell
virat : so why did you ask...???
arjun " okay atleast tell how do you feel proud daddy...???
virat : it feels awesome guys... you wont understand until you go through it... i feel so attached to the baby that i cant explain... we found out about it only a month ago but i am eagerly waiting to hold my princess in my arms...
armaan : it can be a prince also... a stud, dude like us...
arjun : yeah... he will be junior virat
virat : no i want junior manvi only... meri mannat...
arjun : woohooo... good going... name is already decided,,,
armaan : you both so fast in this also... applauding...
virat : i decided the name... only me...
armaan : good luck...
arjun : good luck n my good wishes to both of you...
virat : correction three...
arjun : nope only two... i can explain...
armaan : explain it fast...
arjun : virat n manvi are our virman... right..?? so they both are one only and second one is their sweet little mannat...
virat : bingo... thanks guys...
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Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago

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Nikethana Taran

@..nikki_vijay..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#633

Woohooo first to comment! You know you won't believe but when you told that the update will be in few moments i was not even moving from this page because i wanted to comment first and i am successful!
first of all once again congratulations on reaching hundred pages! 👏 so happy for you!
And next coming to the update..
It was fabulous! Loved each and every bit of the update!
Wow virat has planned for four kids! 😆
haha i was so laughing!
And next in the party armaan saying manvi sweetheart and virat was hehehe
ya it happend with manvi and ridhima tooo!!! 😆
and OMG the girls were too shamelessly speaking!
And the boys were not less but better!
arjuns dialouge was aweome 'virat and manvi are virman and second their cute mannat' something like that. Awww i was litreally like awww.. I loved how virat and manvi fell about their baby!
They will be the best parents ever!
LOL manvi dialouge was funny when she says virat not to speak like a 60 yrs old lady warris and all! 😆
awww feel sad for virat poor one waiting for a romantic moment with his wife!
Dont worry beta woh sab toh iss kahani ki writer naina ji hi tumpar pity kakar de sakti hain LOL!
Now i feel sad that you are ending the story.
Its so nice why do you have to end so soon??
But all good things have to end!
Anyways right now i am not bothered about it because i will enjoy the present update!
I have already read this update two times can't get over it...so nice!
Anyways thnx for pming me continue very soon!!
And as usual don't forget to pm me!

Edited by nikeshathana - 12 years ago

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naina

@naina927

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Posted: 12 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: nikeshathana
yeah few more minutes holding my breathe!
ay ay naina 100 PAGES congrats my buddy!👏

pm kar varna teri khair nahi

hey nikeshathna... thank you soo much...

sent u a pm...

hope u like it...!!!!! 😊

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naina

@naina927

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Posted: 12 years ago

#635

Originally posted by: sapphhire
amazing and sweet update.

thanks sapphhire... 😊

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naina

@naina927

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Posted: 12 years ago

#636

Originally posted by: afreenkansal
awesome
continue soon

thank you...

will surely continue soon...

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cukky

@cukky

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Posted: 12 years ago

#637

congrats on 100 pages naina

the update was so sweet

loved it ❤️

thanks 4 the pm 😊

cont soon dear

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mylovefornishal

@mylovefornishal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#638

i m a new member in IF...i have read your ff...it is reallyyy awesome...

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Aashika_virman

@Aashika_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#639

i so love the update...awesome...

cant wait for next part...

thnks for pm

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preetipc

@preetipc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#640

Loved the update.Virat and manvi with friends are just adorable.Loved their friends too. Virat at the party was so caring.Who would not love him.Such a lovely update.Thanks for the pm😊

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