virman ss pyar aur dosti.. part 29 (LAST) updt - Page 49

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update. .sorry 4 replyng late. .ws having exms so read all last 5 parts nw...all were amazing. .plz pm me wen u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 22
after long 20 minutes...
manvi : virat...
virat : yes manvi...
manvi : now you can come inside and pls do come fast...
virat : my pleasure...
virat enters the room and unknowingly his jaw opens...
manvi : virat... dont look at me like that...
virat : what am i supposed to do when you are looking stunning... no hot.. no like an eye candy... no you are looking different manna... very different...
manvi : different...??? did i not get ready well...?? let me go and check out...
virat holds her hand and pulls her towards him...
manvi : what...???
virat : where are you going...???
manvi : to check out myself in the mirror...
virat : there is no need to go manvi...
manvi : tum theek to ho na...?? are you having fever...??
virat : manna... shhh... look into my eyes and check out yourself...
manvi : yeah yeah... you are my only mirror...
virat : only mirror...???
manvi : nope my earth, my universe, my world, my sun and my moon...
virat : wooohhhoo... manna in romantic mood... somebody save me...
manvi : no one can save you from me sweetheart...
virat : please leave me manvi... i feel like a chinese platter that you will attack any moment...
manvi : what to do i really love chinese...!!!! you are gone mr. vadera... i will eat you up...
virat : nope... i will eat you up tomorrow baby...
manvi was now blushing and again her thought processs started thinking of what maya said...
but virat was virat, he encircled manvi's waist and nuzzled her neck...
manvi came out of her thoughts when she felt virat's sizzling touch playing havoc with her senses...
manvi : virat please...
virat : oh lemme leave this for tomorrow NIGHT...
manvi immediately hugged virat and said " virat... will you really...???"
virat : really what manna...???
manvi : will you eat me up tomorrow...??
virat : excuse me...???
manvi : i mean today maya said some stuff about the first night and all... i am scared...
virat : first of all who is this maya...??
manvi : di's best friend...
virat : oh so my sherni is scared of any random silly stuff that any random women, whats her name... ya maya tells her... really...???
manvi : she was talking stuff that scared the hell out of me... she said that every wife has to...
virat : shh... i am really not interested in all this... i am only and only interested in you manvi... in you... now lets make a move... we have to come back as soon as possible... tomorrow we are getting married... remember...???
manvi : ofcourse i remember chep... i have been waiting for that day from so long... but the thing is how will we go out...???
virat : pipe...
manvi : how can i go through the pipe wearing this short dress...
virat : climb over my back... i will take you down without falling you down...
manvi : have you lost it...?? what if you get injured or u pull a muscle... i cannot spoil my wedding at any cost...!!!
virat : manna you are light as a feather... dont worry i will manage...!!
manvi : are you sure...???
virat : yes i am sure... dont ever doubt a young punjabi guy...
manvi : i know hatta katta punjabi munda...
after so much of their talks, they finally left for the party...

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in the car...
virat : wo pehli baar jab hum mile...
manvi : haathon mein haath jab hum chale...
virat : ho gaya ye dil deewana...
manvi : hota hai pyar kya isne jaana...
virat : teri aankhon mein jannay basa ke chale, teri zulphon ki chaun mein chalta chala... tere nainon mein chain, tere lab pe khushi, tujhko hi main mohabbat bana ke chala...
manvi : woh pehli baar...
virat : now you start a song...
manvi : wheres the party tonight...???
virat : somewhere down the road...
manvi : i am not singing a song mr. indian idol... i am asking you where is the party held...??
virat : ohhh... i thought... anyways its just 5 minutes far...
manvi : okiiee... then i should do my touch up...
virat : yeah sure... carry on.. open your mini beauty parlour in my car...
manvi : dont be sarcastic... else i will right now go back...
virat : okay okay... i am quiet... my lips are sealed...!!!
manvi : it feels like heaven...!!!
virat : hmm..
manvi : what...???
virat : hmm... hmmm..
manvi : what are you saying virat...??
virat : hmm... signalling at his lips that were " sealed "
manvi : okay... speak up...
virat : get out...( while stopping the car )
manvi : what...??? you are tellingme to get out of the car...
virat : we have reached... kindly get out of the car madam...
manvi : oh that ways...
virat : exactly...
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manvi : are you sure the party is in this farmhouse...???
virat : yepp...
manvi : i thought it would be a disco or something...
virat : here we can create our own disc manna... look at the brighter side...
manvi : yeah... lets go...
manvi started walking when virat pulled her back...
manvi was confused and looked at him for answers
virat : do you really have any idea how should we walk inside...?? we are getting married tomorrow... we are a couple ms. tiny brained... we need to go hand in hand or...
manvi : or...???
virat : or my hand on our waist to show that you are mine...!!! (smirking)
manvi : ohh.. yeah right... but i am not tiny brained... actually i was a little excited for the party...
virat : i know ms manvi and party are just meant for each other... poor me i have literally come between you two...
manvi ; so you regret it...??
virat : i wont regret this ever... ever means ever... i feel proud of myself that i came in between you two...
manvi : you are really smart...
virat : i know that... tell me something that i dont know...
manvi : ok so let me tell you that you area headache sometims and mr. attitude vadera most of the times...
virat : we can continue this nok-jhoks and insults after marriage... wat say...??
manvi : i must say you sometimes say sensible stuff also...
virat : sometimes...??? ohh really...??
manvi : yepp my to be hubby...
virat : i dont want to stand here and talk all night... so lets keep going to-be mrs. vadera... (forwarding his arm to her)
manvi : lets go mr. vadera... (putting her arm in his..)
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as they both entered the farm house... they were shocked...
PRECAP :
manvi : virat... i will kill you... i dont want to marry you... i will call off this marriage as soon as we go back...
virat : so you will go back with me when you on one side want to call of our marriage...?? do i look like a fool...??
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey im first to comment.. dinn read yet... ill read now😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow nainu it was fab . .just read last 4 updates wow it was superb . .virman shaadi. .can't wait 4 next update. . .sry was nt able to comment
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: avika26

Wow nainu it was fab . .just read last 4 updates wow it was superb . .virman shaadi. .can't wait 4 next update. . .sry was nt able to comment

thank you avika and dont be sorry dear... 😊
u dnt have to wait for long... wil update soon...
really missed you n your comments...
welcome back... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927


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<font size="3">thank you avika and dont be sorry dear... 😊</font>

<font size="3">u dnt have to wait for long... wil update soon...</font>

<font size="3">really missed you n your comments...</font>

<font size="3">welcome back... 😊</font>



me too missed u. .
Thanks 4 understanding
waiting 4 next
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Posted: 12 years ago
cool update
the precap is scaring me
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update!!!
Loved it!!!!
Can't wait 4 the next part!!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update...
Continue soon... Damm excited about virmanmarriage...

Thankz for pm... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
continue soon and thanks for the pm!!

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