virman ss pyar aur dosti.. part 29 (LAST) updt - Page 39

Lovely update yaar. 😊U r one of the best writers in expressing people's emotions and feelings .👏Let it be even feelings of negative characters like Manan , the way u write his feelings,it just stops me from hatin that character rather feel pity for him.He loves her and has become obsessed like a person sufferin from OCD and does not think how he hurts others .Love u so much for writing so beautifully that u make the reader accept even a negative character.

Originally posted by: shaimah

awesome update

continue soon and thanks for the pm!!

Originally posted by: aysha1989

Feeling bad for both of them... I mean they are going through so much even after loving each other deeply...
Nice update...
Thank you so much for the pm 😃

Originally posted by: virumanu

it was fab update ..ad sry i couldt coment on ur last update..do pm next one plzz

Originally posted by: nikeshathana

nice part thank god manvi din't go with that bloody manan and hope everything will be alright soon i am really sorry for not commenting for the previous parts as i was quite busy with my school and projects and what all so sorry but one thing is i have read each and every part but was not able to comment because i had to disable java script in my mobile so i cannot comment through my mobile and i hardly use my laptop so only when i use it i can comment so sorry for that but i always read your all stories😊

and i would rate your story

⭐️

5/5

please continue soon and please pm me...and don't mind if i don't comment because i explained u my problem...please😊

Originally posted by: love_never_dies

Superb dear,, love the way how u explained the feelings of maanvi, manan and virat...
I guess manan may killed himself :-(
update soon like today

great updates.. Loved them.. Manvi and Vira's love is strong. Loved it

Originally posted by: preetipc

Lovely update yaar. 😊U r one of the best writers in expression people's emotions and feelings .👏Let it be even feelings of negative characters like Manan , the way u write his feelings,it just stops me from hatin that character rather feel pity for him.He loves her and has become obsessed like a person sufferin from OCD and does not think how he hurts others .Love u so much for writing so beautifully that u make the reader accept even a negative character.

Coming to Virat ,loved the conversation between Virat and vanshika mom, U have explained the feelings of him and his fear of losin her after he feels his anger and words have affected their relationship so badly.

Coming to Manvi i loved how u described her feelings and how wen a person is emotionally unstable, they tend to doubt that person's love and just a small true gesture or true words are needed to retore that faith on them.

(Hmmm commented so much long which i dont because i will be searching for words thinkin wat to write but could not stop after this update.If u do find anythin Irrelevant sorry yaar.)

Thanks for the pm.

nice update

a big big thnx to u for giving this chapter n calm my nerves down ...
so Manan is gone hun!! love really makes sometime blind that one couldnt differentiate b/w right r wrong ...
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just loved the way Virat shared his insecurity wid his mother...
overall the chapter was awesome n i wish a romantic one nxt time.. 😉
btw thnx 4 the pm ..
waitin 4 nxt