virman ss pyar aur dosti.. part 29 (LAST) updt - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago

Very good - just right amount of suspense to keep us hooked. Its flowing great.

Many thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update..
The love virman have for each other is awesome.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow really nice update.

Thanx for PM.

PM me when you update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing.thnx fr ua pm n plz pm me wen u updte
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update

Love the fact that virat makes maanvi's day no matter what

Thanks for the pm, please continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely updates.
thnx 4 d pm.
ps- sorry 4 late rply.
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 16

virat: shhh... we dont want this now manna...
mnavi : how could he virat...?? how could he...??? u always treated him like your own brother then how could he...??? how could he be such a spineless man...???
virat : manvi just leave this topic jaana... remember u only told me not to talk about him and now you yourself are talking about him...
manvi : i know but i got scared thinking of what he did to you... i was shattered virat when i heard if your accident... i felt as if someone has pulled out my heart from my body... started crying harder 😭 😭


virat : shh... see i am here manna... with you and in front of your ever beautiful eyes...

manvi : i love you... ❤️
virat : love you too meri madhubala... now stop crying and gimme a manvish smile... 😃
manvi smiles at virat
virat : thats like my manna... then places his hand on manvi's stomach and continues.. sorry mannat what to go baby your mamma is a cry baby... but never mind your loving daddy will not let your mommy to cry...
manvi places her hand on virat's hand and says mumma is sorry my husband's dearest daughter... sorry mannat... love you...
virat : i love you too...
manvi : virat i was talking to the baby not you...
virat (smirking) : so what i was also talking to my baby not a cry baby like you...
manvi : you again called me a cry baby and that too in front of my baby...
virat : first of all yes i called you a cry baby twice.. no thrice and second of all its our baby not only yours
manvi : forget it... its impossible to talk to you these days ... tell me what are you doing here...??? you went to office, right...???
virat : yeah... actually i forgot a very important file so came back to take it...
manvi : which file are you talking about...??
virat : the red one that i left on that chair day before yesterday...
manvi : day before yesterday...!!! and you are asking about it today... amazing mr. vadera...
virat : manvi tell me na where is the file... i am getting late for a meeting...
manvi : its there on the corner table virat... take it yourself baby...
virat starts looking for the file and again says " manna its not here... help me na..."
manvi comes and looks for the file and finds it " are you blind or what chep...??? see it was lying here only..."
virat : oops i didnt notice...
manvi : becuase you are soo busy to notice anything these days... take for example this towel of yours which is still lying on the bed, your guitar lying here on my dressing table...
virat : manvi i am getting late... we will continue this later meri ded futiya...
manvi laughs on seeing the expresion on virat's face and how he ran from the room...
manvi : pagal hai...
virat (leaning to the door) : haan manvi puri paagal hai...
manvi : virattt...
virat : bye... love u...
manvi : i love you too virat... i really do...

manvi smiled for virat's sake but she was still thinking of the day which was no less than a nightmare for her... a nightmare which scared her to hell... a nightmare which shook her from inside... a nightmare doesnt want to think of but today she was thinking about it... she was helpless at the moment... she was not able to brush off the her thoughts or divert her mind from going on that track...

it was a very beautiful day for both manvi and virat... it was their anniversary... they had been dated each other for two years now... two years which seemed as if they met two days back only... two beautiful yera they spent which each other lost in love...

manvi was waiting for virat in the college and was constantly calling him... but to her utter dismayal virta wasnt picking up her call... which was like the strangest thing in the whole universe for manvi... the earth could stop revolving but her virat couldnt reject her call or not revert back... she was now really worried thinking that something might be wrong with virat... she was really numb and didnt know how to recat so she called up viren enquiring about virat's whereabouts... but viren told her that virat left for college 2 hours back and there is no way that he would take sucha long time to reach collge which was only 40 minutes away from their place... viren asked manvi not to worry and relax... manvi replied how can she relax when her virat was missing... how can she relax when she doesnt know where is virat and in what condition... saying this manvi ended the call not in the mood of listening of what viren was going to say... as manvi ended the call, she saw a miss call from virat.. she immediately dialled the number...
manvi : hello... virat where are you...??? why arent you picking up my call...??? what is wrong with you virat...??? are you okk...??? virat say something... plss.. why arent you speaking damn it...???
??? : hello...
manvi : whose dis...??? and where is virat...???
??? : maam i am calling from city hospital... the man to whom this mobile belongs has met with an accident and he is very serious...
manvi : stop... are you serious...??? what the hell are you saying...???
??? : yes maam i am a nurse in this hospital...
manvi : nurse pls take care of my virat... i am just coming...
nurse : sure maam... we will take care of him...

manvi was now crying uncontrollably and dialled viren's number and told him about everything...
manvi and viren reached hospital n manvi was numb... she wasnt in her senses... only thing that she could think of was only and only her virat... she felt as if she has dies... she was feeling like she was a corpse; just a piece of flesh and nothing more... she was really scared thinking what if anything happens to her virat... what if virat left her FOREVER...??? she mentally cursed herself and felt like killing herself for even thinking like that... how can she think of virat dying...???
"NO... NO IT CANNOT HAPPEN... NO IT JUST CANT..." said manvi...
viren : hey manvi pls relax... virat will be fine... he has been shifted into the ICU... lets go n meet him...
manvi : virat will be fine... yes he will be fine...
viren : yes for sure...

manvi and viren entered the icu...
as soon as manvi saw virat... she went up to him and hugged him...

virat was now concious and tried wrapping her in his arms but he couldnt... he was injured and the mere movement of his hand was hurting him but it was not hurting him more than what was he feeling on seeing manvi's condition... he just couldnt bear to see manvi in that condition... she was broken, scared and crying... but with all the strength he had, he hugged manvi back and caressed her hair... the pain that virat felt was clearly reflected on his face which was soon replaced by love, care and happiness that virat felt on hugging manvi and soothing her... it didnt went unnoticed by viren and now he was sure that his brother was truly, madly, deeply and completely in love with the girl in his arms... his girlfriend, his manvi... virat saw that viren had noticed it all so he just gave him an assuring smile that he was okay and there was no need to worry... and diverted his whole attention to the crying manvi " manna... " whispered virat... but it wasnt enough... listening to virat's voice full of love and care for her manvi started to sob louder and harder... she felt so lonely in this one hour that she almost felt that she would have died if she hadnt seen virat now... manvi whispered " are.. you.. ok.. virat...??? are you in pain...??? do.. u.. need.. anything...???"
virat : manvi look at me... see i am fine... just a little bruises and they will be cured soon... and now coming to the second question - yes i am in pain on seeing you in pain... it s hurting me a lot manvi... and now the third question - i need your beautiful smile... thats all that i want... will i get all that...??? bolo manna... will i get it alll...?????
manvi : hmm...
virat : so gimme that... dont be lazy...!!
manvi smiled and that smile was enough to ease all the pain virat was feeling... he suddenly felt comforted on seeing his angel smiling...
virat : i love you...
manvi : i love you too...
virat : but i love you more...
viren : ahem ahem...
virat : bhai... come here na...
viren : how are you virat...???
virat : i am the luckiest guy cant u see i have manvi with me in my arms...
manvi blushed listening to this while viren smiled and winked at virat to eat anything...
viren : ya ya... i know...
virat : bhai please take manvi outside... pls make her eat something...
manvi : no way... i am not going anywhere and i dont want to eat something n on the top i am not even hungry virat...
virat : bhookhi sherni and not hungry... hahaha... my ded futiya cracked the joke of the millenium...
manvi : viratt... and she punched him lightly on his chest
virat : ouch...!!!!
manvi : sorry sorry... i didnt intend to hurt you baby... i am really sorry... please forgive me...
virat : so you want me to forgive you... so u have to go outside and eat something...
manvi : is that a order...???
virat : nope... it is a condition...!!
manvi : viren bhaiya lets go...
viren : lets go...!!! take care bro.. we will just be back...
virat : yeah bhai...

Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
*res

edit:

Flashback is a shock ... Virat was hurt ...
Virat's forget-less is cute and their fun and bonding is sweet

Great emotional update, please do continue this lovely story👏
Edited by Kiekeboe - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
happy to comment before a pm.Loved the update.U wrote beautifully the emotions of Manvi that she went through while Virat was in the hospital.Loved it so much.Loved Virat so much.Loved both of them so much.As a whole the update was so awesome .
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was a very lovely update ... finally everything is fine in their life . enjoyed reading it .thanks for the pm .
Edited by __Aarti__ - 12 years ago

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