Virman OS : Designed to be together

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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was the time when whole Vadera clan was against Virman relationship except for Manvi's life and soul, her one and only sister, her Jeevika Dee and her world best Jeeju,Viren.

"Manvi ..tum ye kyar kar rahi thi apni hi Dee kar zindagi bigar rahi hai" Manvi took the photo frame which stood behind her bed. Looking down at the photo "Dee .. I am a bad girl nar". She closed her eyes and tears streamed down from her eyes. "Dee I am so cruel right? For my good .. I made your life hard to live because of me you have to face the hatred of Vadera family especially Bua" .Then she wiped them away "But no more ' I won't be the thorns in your life". "Dee you lit up my candle and I blow it away leaving both of us in the darkness". More tears very flowing down from her fatigued eyes which were tired of crying days and nights. "I am feeling totally appalling for awful things I had done in your life. I don't think my final decision would lead me to a wrong place. It time to go. Bye Dee" she kissed her Dee's image.
"Forgive me, di!", she sobbed, but still controlling herself so that she would not be broken down completely to carry out her plan which shouldn't be postponed.
She peeped from the window, everyone was sleeping. She jumped silently from the window, grabbed her bag and turned away without looking at her house.

SIX YEARS PASSED!!!
Manvi who was settling in London for the past few years. Her cancer was vanished away from her life about 3 years ago and she had become a big business woman. Now she had to come to India for business trip. She was nervous to approach to her home town but she tried to manage it. She came with her team. After their business meeting, she and her best friend, Vishal, visited some shopping malls. However, but suprisingly, she espied Virat who seemed to be hanging out with a girl. All the love they felt for each other can't be ceased. She was coming closer to Virat and Virat was taking a step forward to his lady love but Virat was stopped by a small boy who was calling him, "Papa, papa", came running towards him and compelling to buy ice-cream. Manvi stopped right away and wandered who was the mother of that small boy. As Virat disapproved him to buy for him, the little boy went near a girl who was standing beside Virat. Calling her "Mama, mama". Manvi's heartache to hear that. Her world broken down right in front of her. Vishal hold Manvi's hand tightly and retuned back. Virat couldn't stop her either. Even though, destiny was right in front of them, they couldn't handle it.

SEVEN YEARS PASSED!!!
The little boy, Karthik, was at the age of 15, a time of experiencing a high-school life. Virat visited London for Karthik's admission. The day before Virat returned, both father and son, want a remembrance memory so they visited the beach that evening. The destitute doesn't diminish. Manvi was there with her friends. They didn't take a minute to recognize their partners. This time she was strong, she did not turn around. She went near him strengthening herself and asked her about her sister. "Virat ..Dee kaisi hai" Manvi asked. Virat looked away from her. "Virat .. Dee kaha hai" Manvi asked shaking Virat's body. Virat eyes filled up. "Manvi .. rahanay doe ' tum apnay life enjoy karoe" Virat answered her without facing her. She became serious. She touched Karthik's shoulder and asked, "Beta, apka chachi kaha hai". Karthik answered that he did not have any aunty. Manvi eyes widened and begged him to tell. Virat's mind went full of sympathy. He gestured Karthik to be busy with other stuffs.

Virat held Manvi's hand and dragged her towards the solitude place. Manvi tried to remove his hand from hers. "Virat .. what are you doing? Your son is watching" she took a deep breath and "He might tell your wife that you were with me" she said trying to be sarcastic.

Virat's grip was loosened. He looked straight through her eyes. Both were lost in their love.

Virat: If you leave me this time again, I wont be able to live. I cannot survive a second more without you.
Manvi was so shocked and told him that he is married and he got a son.
Virat: No... he is not my son actually.
Manvi was confused with everything.
He continued, "Actually it is Jeevika's and Viren's, KATHIK!

Manvi's eyes widened.

Manvi : So why was he calling you papa.

Virat : It is what I made him called papa after he lost his papa.

Manvi : Virat what are you saying?

Virat : Manvi ' when you were gone Bhabhi life was worse than hell. She couldn't think anything except you. You were the only one on her mind. Sometimes she combined day and night and lived in the memories you left. Bhai was very sad. But one day Karthik was born everyone was hoping that he might light up Bhabhi's life bug it didn't went as it was planned. Bhabhi didn't care about Karthik but only you.

Manvi broke down and started crying.

Virat held Manvi's shoulder "Manvi are you alright?"

Manvi nooded and Virat continued. "If Bhabhi was sad, how can bhai be alright? He was feeling so desperate that nothing was in his mind except for Jeevika's life. He bustled to thousands of places but Manvi you were completely lost. He decompressed and the truck crashed him away. Then what can you expect Bhabhi to be?.

Manvi eyes widened. Manvi "Virat you didn't mean that right?"

Virat's eyes sparkled with the tears filling up. "Her blood pressure began to drop and she became weaker. Unfortunately, Bhabhi was hospitalized and problems grew larger. She was seriously ill. Nevertheless, she had been sent to emergency room. But nothing works. She only wanted you and her love Bhaiya which we couldn't give her. One day, doctors told us they were sorry and we lost her forever.

Manvi "Nahi .. ye nahi hosak thar ..Virat just say you are lying" she asked while hitting him with her fists. He pulled her hands and hugged her. "Manvi .. try to accept the truth". "Ye nahi hosak thar Virat" she again said crying loudly.

Manvi feel like dying. Some thought of suicide was circulating in her brain. She was feeling so meaningless. Finally, when Virat went further, Manvi could not control herself anymore and decided to turn away very far from the world, if possible from the universe too. Virat asked her why did she them. She felt guilty and told him that she did not want to make people suffer because of her but little did she know without her, her love ones' lives would be in danger.

"Virat .. ab mera Jeenay ka Vaja nahi hai" Virat covered her mouth with his hand.

"Vaja hai .. tumhara Chuttku aur main .. Tumhara Chutku ka mama nahi hai kyar tum bana chaho gi "

"Virat ' what about that girl on the shopping mall?"

"She was my secretary and she loved Karthik a lot so she made him called mama".

Manvi hugged Virat and Virat replied her hug. Then they become life partners.

DONE BY Radharaday and stargirl.kiara!!! PAIR WORK!!

I hope u like this OS. Please press like button and comment.

Edited by stargirl.kiara - 13 years ago

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Radharaday thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
Loved it kiara ... such a nice OS but feel sorry for Viren and Jeevika

Finally Virman reunited after many years of separation

Great work 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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gud one...but i had a tear in my eyes when i read these lines

Virat : Manvi ' when you were gone Bhabhi life was worse than hell. She couldn't think anything except you. You were the only one on her mind. Sometimes she combined day and night and lived in the memories you left. Bhai was very sad. But one day Karthik was born everyone was hoping that he might light up Bhabhi's life bug it didn't went as it was planned. Bhabhi didn't care about Karthik but only you.

Manvi broke down and started crying.

Virat held Manvi's shoulder "Manvi are you alright?"

Manvi nooded and Virat continued. "If Bhabhi was sad, how can bhai be alright? He was feeling so desperate that nothing was in his mind except for Jeevika's life. He bustled to thousands of places but Manvi you were completely lost. He decompressed and the truck crashed him away. Then what can you expect Bhabhi to be?.

Manvi eyes widened. Manvi "Virat you didn't mean that right?"

Virat's eyes sparkled with the tears filling up. "Her blood pressure began to drop and she became weaker. Unfortunately, Bhabhi was hospitalized and problems grew larger. She was seriously ill. Nevertheless, she had been sent to emergency room. But nothing works. She only wanted you and her love Bhaiya which we couldn't give her. One day, doctors told us they were sorry and we lost her forever.



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avika26 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
Good one. .pls pm me next tym.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
Loved the story. Really awesome. Touched my heart.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
superb work dear...
aftr many yrs of separation virman united...
do cum up wid more such wonderful works😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
It is so beautiful, and so sad...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8
superb work i was shocked when the boy called viraat papa and the women mama
felt bad for virika but all well when end well
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9
Dat was such a sweet update, sad dat vrika died
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
loved a lot
cute n simple

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