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Preethi

@preethis

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

awww sad but happy ending sort of story... loved it...

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sonika sharma

@sonika_virman

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

elena
It was really a touching story . I truely loved it . A really cute one.
Thanks for the pm .

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Wonderful OS.. Though a sad one but I loved the ending.. You portrayed virat's emotions beautifully.. How everything around him reminds him of maanvi..Very heart touching.. But finally they are together in heaven "to never be apart again".. 👏..once again brilliant work.. ⭐️.. Take care 😊

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Dina

@-DeeNaa-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Awww so sweet Manvi and Viraat in Heaven! <3

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Rabzonedge

@rabzonedge

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

aww read it for first tym...ur writing is awesum..sad but heart touching..👏

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alcantaranjr

@alcantaranjr

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

This is Sucha Heart Touching Story! :'( Had Tears in my eyes reading it :'(

Love the Ending! <3

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nikki1211

@nikki1211

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

loved this to the core...god ...

unbelievable...

i am not a particular crybaby...i dont cry in movies or anything bt this thing made me all teary-eyed...poor poor virat...just loved the way you portrayed his anguish and pain and the sheer sense of absolute loneliness that has engulfed his life...loved the ending...loved the entire thing...ryt from vanshika-virat ' s convo to the end...beautiful , haunting...awesome work

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-Aswathy-

@-Aswathy-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

No words to describe this one...Moved me to tears...U know,whenever u described Virat thinking of Maanvi(yeah who is dead)I could only imagine with her as full of life like always...A beautiful and heart-wrenching OS!The climax and the anti-climax!<3And litsening to the song and reading made it more special...(And it's one of my fav songs:))Loved it<3

Edited by -Aswathy- - 12 years ago

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ndp102

@ndp102

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Wow Elena! I was lliterally crying from start to finish!! It was tragic yet so beautiful I have no words to explain how I felt while reading it. "In the middle, she stood with her arms crossed. Yellow bangles adorned on her small wrists. Not like he had seen her the last time. This time, there was no pain. No hurt. She flashed him a smile as if she was waiting. Anticipating his arrival. "

^ I could picture this scene so vividly in my head...it goes so well with Manvi's character! I really wished they showed some kind of dream sequence similar to this in the show during the cancer track! It is always a pleasure to read your work...this one really tugged at my heart strings! Great work!

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garimaksgian

@garimaksgian

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Best os I ever read..
At last they met... luvd it...

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