How things change... - SS updated pg 20 - Page 6

Nice update.wud love to read in Whts hindering jeevika,poor viren has to go through so many problems for jeevika,continue soon and pm me

loved, it, thanks for the pm xxx

👏wowww!!! dis z amazing ! ur a damn gud writer! plxxx update soon <3 nd pm me😃

Awww Pj awesomely brilliant 👏⭐️

I loved the story and screenplay ,.. beautifully written..

so you gave a teaser there, with a sneak peak of what went wrong after BB's death why the khoon ka rishta is broken for 13 months - quite intriguing ..Jeevika and Maanvi;s 2 lines of heated arguments were shown and now they are apar for 13 months and Vadhera's and Viren - bad blood -

you have beautifully portrayed the feeling of anger and frustration and pain in Jeevika for the allegations and accusations of vadheras and for her being the reason for Viren staying away from his family... beautiful scene as how Viren tried to know the reason for Jeevika's emotional turbulence within her and the way Jeevika broke down was very well portrayed.. and Viren is just one emotionally strong and sensible husband around

still my mind hovers around who could be the one in the picture which J burnt.. what is the reason for so much of hatred and for whom --

sorry for the long rant .. but loved it so much.. can't wait to read what you have for us

thanks for the PM Pj

Thank you so much for the pm and sorry for the late comment

Res..

wow u updated.. will read and comment

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Ufff let me get my words to comment .. awesomely brilliant 👏⭐️ well the story was quite intriguing and gripping at the same time.. i was holding my breath at certain places...

I know there are still many things to be uncovered.. but love the way u are taking the story .. trying to ramp it up..👏

at the start.,.. even before viren said about the silent killing him.. i felt the same.. indeed the house seemed to be haunted with only 2 people and one voice being heard...beautifully written...⭐️.. her apprehensions weather to call or not.. the way she sent one ring and disconnect is so real.. which we do with a person with whom we had a fight, is the person whom we love the most ..

sooo poor Jeevika..she had an ectopic pregnancy that is really tough...going through tremendous pain and anguish which Viren is not even aware of ...

loved the philosophical bits in the june 5th and 6th notes 👏

so they are going to Hrishikesh ?? will they end up meeting Maanvi,..

ok now enough of my thoughts ..will wait for the next one...

aww..poor jeevika...i hope she comes out from her depression with help of viren...