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Priya

@nobo

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

I Justt love how you pen down endings to your stories...Maybe not too happy but always perfect...

BEAUTIFUL...

The restlessness of Viren & Maanvi for Der respective partners...Was really easy to imagine as u read. As I said earlier what you write is easy to connect with

I especially liked the last part where you RE mentioned those philosophical words from Jeevika's notes...the contrast in her situation & her deleting them...Awesomely penned

Another Fab piece...dude I really love these HOW titles

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*Eva*

@*Eva*

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Neha.K.

Oh teri..Serious comment by Eva My Entertainment Machine😲
I think main neend mein hun... Yeh comment tune ni kiya..haina?🤣

PROFESSOR JI 😍 😎 Arre, main yahaan kaise nataunki karsakti hoon ji?! Only you know ki main pagaal hoon...it's a secret na...*oops, yeh maine kya kaha...ignore me guys* 🤣

THANK GOODNESS KI AAP NEEND MAIN HO 😃 🤣 Ab toh sone mein asaani hoga na...ab toh koi bahana nahin chalega 😎 Sojao ji 😔 Waise yeh comment maine nahin ki...aap toh sapne dekhne shuru kardi 🤣

Let's continue this kahin aur 😍 Pooja will miss all her praises with us in the middle of everything 🤣 I love you professor ji 🤗

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Priya

@nobo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Tell u what Pj...I literally love ur Connection with How...

Coz as I have admitted b4, How Life Goes On Was one of the most wonderful piece I have read here

& by the sound of it...I think this one will also be like that... Okay J's state beautifully penned out ...suspense nicely maintained. & a completely different scenario of things... Awesome start dude.. what made J n M lose contact?? Haha...I know u will tell eventually ...but really it's promising & I Lovved every bit of it

Please continue very very soon..

PS - dude I will catch ur VMs soon, YT sucks at my iPad ...But UR VMs r a hard thing to resist

Edited by nobo - 13 years ago

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urmil

@urmil

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

this time also u have written beautifully...thanks for pm...you r a very talented writer...sorry for giving you unwanted advice bt i really think u shuld chnage ur talent into ur profession

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Priya

@nobo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Nice continuation & flow to the story Pj... Lovely update

Okay...Maanvi so Angry, that too towards her Di...There is still some mist On their Rift

& J's stern reply...& OMG broke the khoon ka rishta... apparently J broke herself too...

What exactly is Troubling J apart of Manvi...& Viren' concern is also Described well... So real...So connecting

Awesome work dude

Well u said it may take long But do try to update soon !!

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preetivr

@preetivr

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

i compare viren here to our sp sketch of him. the ever so tolerant and loving.

but vadheras being this extreme.

there is so much story to be told and am eagerly waiting

thanks for the update and pm

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shabeelaforKT

@shabeelaforKT

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Speechless After Reading This...And i'm too in love with dis bcoz itz only and only about Viren Jeevika...Frm Startind Till Endd..Superbb...u r a Brilliant Writer..Dnt know th Suspense..but whatevr it was written here..I'm just in Love Wth it..Clapps to uu...and Thankss for d PM...

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girl97

@girl97

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

so cute and nice update

thx

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-NightDreamer-

@-NightDreamer-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Lovely update...
Really Awesum one.. Luved viren's character Poor Jeevika...Feeling bad 4 Her...

Waiting 4 ur next Update...!!

-MeHaK-

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Amii

@Amii90

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

This is DAMN good, PJ!! Just read it now at work during my break and always, its brilliant! Waiting to read more to find out about those loopholes to understand the whole story!! Update soon :)

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