How things change... - SS updated pg 20 - Page 13

Originally posted by: urmilsalve

loved the way u ended it...with special mention to ur line"though all those emotions were valid at the time, they have no place in her life"...well said...this is life which make us laugh when we think about the time we cried in past...thanks for pm...i am happy to have a buddy lke u

Thank you liking the ending. I wanted to bring it back full circle. Fitting with the title. Life always changes. So just like that, even if at one point this emotions are completely valid, it doesn't mean that those emotions always stay with us.

Originally posted by: shine123

Awesoem ending...

Luved ur ss...

first the hospital scene then VM anniversary small scene...

the notes one was perfect ...

Brilliant ss ...

Thnk u 4 d pm nd

luking forward to any other story u r thinking to write...😆*greedy me*

Well I know you are greedy. Lol but I did feed into it saying I have another one, up my sleeve. Like I said, not sure about another full SS, like this but small OSs might come your way. Whether it be during Christmas or after.

I'm really glad that you enjoyed the ending of this SS. I thought it might feel slightly disjointed, hopefully it didn't.

Amazing!! Loved the ending!

@Ami

Well at least this time my update did not take as long as the previous one did. Maybe you needed a catch up.
The story was coherent? Well that was a bonus! I didn't really know where I was heading but it did try and relate back to it to how it started. As change is something that should always be round and a journey through s story.

The last part was unreal? is that a good thing?

I thought it might seemed a tad rushed, it wasn't completely on purpose as you don't want to rush and not give the meaning. Yet I wasn't sure in filling in all the gaps. I understand your point on felling something may happen and in actual fact I could have taken that section on a bit and develop it further, but somehow I felt it keeping it sime.

Happy and sadness all fit together, you can't have one without the other so a story without either will be right. It doesn't have to be balance but at least a glimpse.

You know I picked that date at random. As the other dates were in June, I just picked another date. Happy coincidence. :) it just seemed like a good idea, for Jeevika to look back that what she had once written and reflect on them in a different light. People never forget their memories, but mementoes are not always needed especially memory such of those. The point is to try and move on from the part and not to dwell and let it fester.

@Ami

Well at least this time my update did not take as long as the previous one did. Maybe you needed a catch up.
The story was coherent? Well that was a bonus! I didn't really know where I was heading but it did try and relate back to it to how it started. As change is something that should always be round and a journey through s story.

The last part was unreal? is that a good thing?

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loved it...continue soon..

What an absolutely AMAZING start, dude! ❤️ So intriguing and mysterious...eeks, I'm so anxious to read the next part! I always love how you explain Jeevika's POV...I connect instantly! All your fans are thirsty for more...don't know how much longer we can wait 😛

P.S. R.I.P. Badi Beeji 😔

WOW...The Situation Was Superbly Describe...a New story With Ssuch a gr8 Suspense...I Can't Describe in wordss dat how much it Touches My heart...Plz Update Nxt part Soon..Eagerly Waiting..

loved it

superb...loved the way u described everything...jeevika loosing everything...n viren being her support...amazing...continue soon...n thnx 4 d pm...