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Hello guys I am not really new but yes I always keep posting things related to this show...Most of the time about Kushal aka Virat and Manvi...Well today I want to say that I am a silent reader and had read lots of stories as OS,SS,FF and many more about Virman and Virika...But today thought of trying myself on Virman as they are my favourite couple and I am crazy in love with Kushal and Really hope I meet them one day!!


Back to the important point I am writting this new story on NISHAL/ VIRMAN so called ...
❤️Kehdo ke tum mere dil mein rahoge❤️

Prologues

Virat Vadhera: A handsome guy who is very talented and lives in Chandigarh. He studied in UK and also had an ex-girlfriend and loves playing music. He is HOT and SEXY Boy of the COLLAGE. He is very naughty.

Manvi Choudhary: A girl full of life and lives to fullest and is very cute and bubbly. Makes people laugh and keeps her surrounding happy and lifely. Lives in Chandigarh and goes to the same collage as Virat Vadhera but she hates him. Girls are jealous because Virat always trys to impress Manvi as he wants to be with her.

Precap:

Manvi walking on the Road in the rain and is lost in her own world. A car comes from behind and is about to hit her and someone saves her.


Important Note: Guys do bare with me as this is gona b my life first story and have never wrote before but I wana try this. And yes do comment and if you don't like it just let me know..So if it is good then I will continue and if not I will stop there...!! Comments and Likes are really important for me, so do let me know your view and thanx.


I will be updating soon!! Part-1 will be here till tonight :)

Love you all >3
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will b waitin nd plz do pm me
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nice start...
pls pm me when u update...
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Plzzz pm me wn uupdate, great intro
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good nice keep udating me n pm me plz
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continue soon it seems interesting
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Great sounds good please update soon and pleaded do pm me
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❤️Kehdo ke tum mere dil mein rahoge❤️
PART-1

Chandigarh is the city where people come to study from different place as it has some good quality of teachers and collages to study. Yes, Manvi; you made it clearly that now you can study more future without the disturbance of BEEJI!! Manvi was talking to herself until she remembered that she forgot to call her best friend JEEVIKA.

Manvi: Ahh I completely forgot to call my friend Jeevi that I am safe and sound to the house that she gave her as her birthday gift. First she said no but still Jeevi was her best and close friend she could not refuse so she had to take it. (Jeevika is Manvi best friend but now she is married to Viren Vadhera and has gone out of Chandigarh to Goa for Honeymoon.) She snapped out of her thoughts and started to dail her number...

Jeevika: Hello Mannu

Manvi: Hello Jeevi, how is jiju and my darling friend your health?

Jeevika: I am completely fine and your jiju is also having fun. How about you and your health? Most importantly did you live the house and hope you are safe there alone. ??

Manvi: Yes Darling I am fine and thats what I have called you to say that I am loving this house and so your balcony. It's lovely!! Thanks again for such an wonderful and expensive surprise.

Jeevika: Ohh Come on, stop saying thanks and you know in our friend ship no thanks and no SORRY!! So yes well enjoy I have to go check on VirenJi. He is calling me so see you and take Care..See you soon there!! Xx

Manvi: Ermmm..I understand have fun with !JIJU! hahhaah..Sorry..Ok will see you soon then and be safe there and take care.

After the conversation between her and Jeevi...Manvi felt little tired as she had done lot of work in her new house..sifting things from here and there and the main reason is that she is all alone to do all the work. She thought that I need some food and so she left to the kitchen to check out if any food was there for her.

Manvi: Ohh shit! Damn! I don't have food to eat and am damn hungry...Ermmm thinking to herself she said...Hmmm good idea Manvi..I can go out and have some food from outside may be a DHABA... Okkk kool I will get ready and go now.

She put on her salwar kurti suit of Green and Red mix colour suit and left for the Dhaba..As she was walking near the road she asked some auto for lift and also some taxis but no one stop. She is really frusted by this time and started to speak to herself...on the way...

Manvi: Haiii sare kaminey hai yeh Rikshaw wale aur yeah rukte bhi nahi hai...Samjhte kya hai apne app ko...Mein Manvi Choudhary hoo!! Ha par in logo ko kaise pata k mein manvi Choudhary hoo...Khair chodo I will walk and its only 10 mins away.

As she started walking there came a big storm and it started raining..she is now thinking I should not have came out of the house...but then as the first drop of rain water fall on her face she was all lost in dreaming and getting wet in the rain. She was so lost that one day I will be there standing in the rain and someone will also be there...Ahh not someone...That someone will be my prince charming she thought..She was still lost in the dream for her Prince charming and all those beautiful dream that came at night in her dream about a Prince charming and the rain and all. She walked little future and there a car came running very fast in speed and was about to hit her until someone came and hold her by her waist and pull her away from the road and the car to his hard chest. She felt as if she knows him thought her life as she felt the magic touch of that guy.

She looked up to see who the person was..She was about to look at that guy face until she failed as that guy left her there all alone and went in rush to the other guys who were waiting..She was not able to see him apart from the back part. She felt bad and also angry that how can he leave her alone in this condition atleast she wanted to thanx him and she was lost that why did not he even ask me about was I hurt or not and see who is that guy that made him shiver in this rain by his magic touch...

The rain has stopped and she was home after all that incident she did not have any food and came back home in bad mood and went to her room...and then slowly made her way to the bed but still thinking of that guy and his magic touch...She could not sleep the whole night and was thinking about him...It was not 2:12am in the night when she remembered that tomorrow is her first day at the collage and yes she was not nervous but she was worried of her looks that she will look funny without no sleep and this red eyes. So she slowly went to sleep and started dreaming the same things that came everynight to her about the rain and about his PRINCE CHARMING...

Precap: Meeting of Virat and Manvi in the upcoming part2 ...Will update as soon as possible in 2/3 Days...

Sorry for the Gramitical Mistakes and also remember this is my first ever post on story so plz so give me ur views about it and let me know that should I continue or not!!

Once again THANKS J

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmm so she was unable to see that guy.. that guy was our Virat only😆
nice waiting for the meet
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Awesome start
Excited for the next part!!

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