SS:story of our fateful life ( lastPart in Pg 11)

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Richa Tiwary

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Nyc...luvly
cntinue soon nd thanx 4 d pm

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krithika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Well written dear 👏

It was heart wrenching to read Maanvi's condition and my heart cried with Jeevika.

A very emotional update dear .

Waiting to read positive response from Maanvi's treatment :)

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Priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Kya Hame rulane ka irada hai di ????

Joking, I never cry!!!

But really really heart touching & u brought dabbu too! Jeevika viren relation is also maturely shown. Her concern for manvi... Ufff simply toching

I hope senior doc have a gud news!!!!

Waiting for next,.Part

Okay okay I know u r busy,lol, take ur tym dear@@@@

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Jesmin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

really touchy di...had tears 😭
u wrote it very well 👍🏼
cont soon 😊 thnx 4 d pm 🤗

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NinaArief

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

how cute of jeevika to go to ganga ghat.. pls update soon.

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Anu101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Hey thankuuu for the pm

PLease continue sooon...it's reallly nice to see Dabbu 😆

Just can't get enough of these behena's love

Mwaaah

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-Tinu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Loved du update!! Hope du speacialist give us a good news, please update soon.

Tina

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IPKKND_Pyaar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Loved the update especially the dabbu-jeevika scene👏

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_innocent_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Hey Jess, thanks for the pm:D

J running to GG to talk to her parents, was something i stated yesterday i wanted to see badly in the show, and you made my wish come true in ur SS, so thank you😆

Loved J and Dabuuu's moments. am glad you made Dabuu find J and not Beeji <3...

Overall, a good update, looking forward to the next part.

On grounds of criticism...

There are a few grammatical tweaks that are needed to give the story a better flow, but other than that it was still very good.

Looking forward to your next part.