pyar tujse kiya hai FF virman n virika part 3 pg 3

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hyee guyss howz u all anyways i have read many ss ff os on virman n i love themso i thought 2 write a ff on virika and virman so guyxxx fell free too comment here i go


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THE VADERAS

Dadaji

Swamini kamini bua

Vanshika

Inder chachu

Kadambari

SHLOK

THE VADERA BOYS

Viren singh vadera the eldest son of vanshika handsome he is a succesful lawyer very sweet and shy and single but now his family is searching a bride for him n love his youngest bhai virat very much

Virat singh vadera youngest son of vanshika hot handsome playboy very cheerful smart girls go crazy for him but his not intressing bcoz his ex gf live him so know he dont belive in love in his house there is many rules but he don care abt dont he only do what he wants to and love his older bro viren very much in past he was a singer but he leave singing due 2 his breakup with gf

some information about vaderas they are the riches family in hole india having they live in chandighar

THE CHOUDRY'S

Badi beeji

Beeji

Madan chachu

Pinky chachi

Dabbu he is 2 years older then manvi but call her di bcoz manvi wants it and he is afriad of her ...hahahhaha poor soul

Now the choudry girls who r going to make crazy vadera boyz

Jeevika choudry very beautiful n inteligent she's very silent n shy but a sweet girl she's a teacher and love her sister manu.nd her she never tell to anyone but secretly waiting 4 her prince charming she cook very well she's excillent in cooking

Manvi choudry the youngest peace of his family she's very cute babbly cheerful adventures crazy but very childish girl she's totally pagal she live her life with fullest live every moment of it she's love 2 prank on people everyday she be in some problem bcoz of her mastipan but cant see someone in pain she help people very much everyone loves her vey much bcoz of her antics and helping attiude she dont belive in boyz she things that boyz are dogs but love her di very much nd she love cricket she often play cricket with her frds and she have magic in her hands she paint draw very well.

Some information abt choudry's they live in rishikesh and manvi frds are her panters.



guyss tell me if i continuo or not plzzz comment



INDEX

PART 1 [page 1]

PART 2 [ page 2]

PART 3 [page 3]

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Great intro please do continue and pm me
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Plz continue and pm me amd please make sure tgere is a lot of virika scenes plz
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Hey! It's a really nice intro! Please continue 😊
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Hyee guyss thtxx for the lovely comments and here we go with part one enjoy happy reading😃

Part 1

The day was sunny and the hotty dont know where to go virat like usually had an argument with dadaji and he was tired of all this so he decided to go somewhere and now he was in the back seat with his bhai viren on his black sports car in front there was driver its not like that virat always drive his car but today he was in no mood he dont know what to do or where to go so thats why he wasn't driving after about 15 min driving car the driver finally ask him

While viren was sleeping in the car .hahahaa poor viren tired of the family fights

Driver – saab kaha jana hai

Virat – hmm pata nahi i mean abi hum kaha hai

Driver – saab abi hum haiway par hai

Virat – acha toh yaha se kon sa sheher saab se naazdik hai

Driver – saab masoori aur rishikesh

Virat - masoori aur rishikesh,thinking to himself yaar masoori toh bhot baar dekha hai aaj yeh rishikesh bi dek lete hai to driver rishikesh chalo.

Driver – theek hai saab wese saab apko pata hai yeh rishikesh bhot khoobsurat sheher hai aur bhot shant

Virat – acha chalo hum bi dekte hai ke yeh rishikesh kitna khoobsurat aur shaant hai.

Driver – ji saab

Rishikesh

In choudry's house

A cute girl was sleeping peacefully in her room with hugging her teddybear named softey and then her di entred her room

Jeevika – manu uut jaa manu dek suba hogayi hai ut jaa

Manvi – di kya hai sone do naa kyu meri neend ko upset kar ke uska band baajaa baja rahi ho

Jeevika – acha bachu mai band baajaa baja rahi hu madam koi had hoti hai sone ki apko pata hai kya time hua hai

Manvi – nahii toh in her sleepy voice

Jeevika – toh mai apko bata doon ki 10.30 ho gaye hai

It take some seconds to register what her di has said and hen she jump out of her bed in shock.

Manvi – kya 10.30 hogaye aur mai ab tak so rahi thi

Jeevika – ji aur agar mai tuje utane na ati toh tu aur 4,5 gante soi rehti ab chor in batoon ko aur jaldi se jaa aur fresh hojaa aur niche a kar breakfast karle warna agar beeji ko pata chal gaya ke tu ab tak so rahi toh phir gusssa karegi

Manvi – di plz hah beeji ki toh baat hi maat karoo unee toh wese hii mujpe gussa karne aur chillane ka bahana chaiyee ,manvi said in anger

Jeevika – manu chup kar ek thapad du gi na toh saab hosh tikane aa jaye ge tere baroo ko aese kahtee haii

Manvi – nahi di baroo ko bilkul aise nahi kahte par jab bare ho hi dragon ki tara toh muj jesse nanne munne bache kya kare, she said with a puppy face

Jeevika – acha nanne munne bache abi bata ti hun

With dat she run to catch her \and manvi also run and then after running in hole room they stop and start laughing and hug each other nd then broke hug

Jeevika – manu chal ab jaa or fresh hojaa mai school ja rahi hu paar no masti ok , jeevika orderd like a mother

nodded her head in yes but with fingers crossed

jeevika – acha manu ab bye

manvi – bye di

after her di left manvi took her phone and dail raju's num

raju – hello manvi di

manvi – hello raju sun tum saab muje ade agnte [half an hour] mein ghaat par milo phir hum puraa din gomee gee bhot masti karege

raju – theek hai di paar rangila kaha hai

manvi aree woh rangila kuch kaam se kahi gaya hai shaam [ evening ] tak wapas a jaye gaa rangila is manvi's childhood frd his's totally tapori

raju – ok toh phir mai rakta hun bye

manvi bye she out the phone in bed and went to fresh up.

Thats it for now leave your comment please

Nd i'll make sure that in next part there will be virika and virman meeting😛

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Nice Start! Can't wait for the next part and them to meet. Please continue soon 😃

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Heyy guys a very big thank you for ur lovely comments and here i go with next part happy reading

PART 2

2 hours later

Driver ' saab hum ponch [reach] gaye rishikesh

Virat ' ok so ab hume yaha pe kisi achi jaga par le kar jao jese dicso virat was cut off by viren

Viren ' are mere bhai kya hamesha disco and parties kabhi kuch or bi soch liya kar

Virat ' acha bhai toh ap hi bata do ke hum kaha jaye

Viren ' hmm i dont know yaar ab muje kya pata ki yaha kya hai aur kesa hai

Viren to driver

Viren ' wese tarun tum hi bata do ke yaha kya kya hai

Driver ' saab muje zada toh nahi pata par haa itna pata hai ke yaha paar bhot jane mane mandir hai aur bhot sari pahad [mountians] hai bhot dur dur se log yeh saab dekne atee hai saab

Virat ' toh phir defenetly yaha rehne wale aur yaha visit karne wale log bewakuf [dumb] hai

Viren - kyun tuje yaha rehne wale aur yaha visit karne wale saab log bewakuf kyun lag rahe hai ?

Virat ' yaha rehne wale log bewakuf isi liye kyun ke woh aesi jaga mein rehte hain jaha sirf bade bade pahad [mountains] aur mandir hai aur visit karne wale isi liye kyun ke woh aesi jaga visit karte hai

Viren ' mere bhai tu rehne de tu jab khud apni ankoon [eyes] se dekhe ga naa saab kuch toh tuje khud hi ehsaas ho jaye gaa ke yeh kitna khoobsurat hai

Virat ' bhai jo bi ho muje toh is rishikesh mein kuch khaas nahi laga

Viren ' kassh koi tuje samjapata ke yeh kitna khoobsurat hai anyways chor yeh saab ab hum rishikesh toh a gaye hai par jaye kaha

Virat ' bhai ek kaam karte hai aise hai kisi restarant pe chalte hai what you think

Viren ' god idea mere bhai to driver tarun kisi bi restaurant pe le chalo viren was cut off by

Virat ' to tarun kisi aese wese restaurant pe nahi kisi ache se restaurant like 5 star o something my type

Driver theek hai wese muje yaha zada rasto [ways] ka pata toh nahi hai par mai kisi se puch [ask] luga

Virat ' ok but remember kisi 5 star mein kisi saste [cheap] se restaurant pe nahi

Driover ' ji saab

Viren ' to virat hogayi teri restaurant speach mere bhai

Virat ' bhai u know na mai sirf 5 star italian chines aise restaurant pe jata hoon

Viren ' par mere bhai ek din 5 star chor kar kisi chote [small] restaurant mein jane mein kya burai hai

Virat ' bhai please kisi chote restaurant mein virat singh vadera u r kidding me u know i dont like it its not me u know im cool u undestand naa with a smile

Viren ' with a fake smile yeah yeah i undestand u r the virat the cool boy i undestand

Virat just smile

After a while driving in rishikesh road viren saw a big and beautiful mandir and he ask to stop the car

Virat ' bhai kya hua apne gari [car] rokne ko kyu kaha

Viren ' virat waha dek pointing in the direction of mandir

Virat ' kya hai waha mandir or kya whats so new

Viren ' virat dekna yeh kitana bara [big] aur khoobsurat mandir hai

Virat ' bhai please apko yeh mandir khoobsurat lag raha hai i cant belive it

Viren ' virat tu bi naa

And then driver said

Driver ' saab ap theek kah rahe ho yeh mandir bhot khoobsurat hai aur kahte hai ke is mandir mein daga band kar koi bi dua mango toh woh puri hoti hai

Viren ' really toh phir muje jana hai

Virat ' oh please bhai log bateen banate jayege aur ap mante jana yeh saab jhoot hai so lets go

Viren ' nahi virat muje yeh mandir dekna hai aur dua magni hai

Virat ' par muje nahi jana hai.ek kaam karte hai ap jao aur armaan se dua mango dekho jab ap free ho gaye toh muje call kardena mai a jaugaa

Ok

Viren ' ok wese agar tu bi ata toh acha hota naa

Virat ' bhaii u know me im not gona cum

Viren ' fine mai ja raha hu mai free hokee tuje call karuga theek hai

Virat ' theek hai

Viren ' ok toh bye baad mein milte hai bhai enjoy

Virat ' same to you bye

And with that viren came out of the car and virat car went.

And know viren was climbing the strais of the mandir and looking everywhere and when he reach the mandir he hears a girl singing a bajan clamly and everyone was enjoying that he heard and he was like was she sing so beautifully and he want to talk to that girl and tell her hat she sing very well and most importantlly he wan to se her face he tries his best but no use due to the crowd of the mandir he tries again but failed

Viren was angry and in is mind kya log hai yaar muje rasta hi nahi dete urggg i want see her

And know the bajan was end everyone was taking aarti and viren tries one more time to see the girl but again the same respons

Know he was very angry and he dont know what to do

Pleaseee hatooo viren shouted and with that everyone in the mandir start staring at him and after some seconds he relaised what he did and he saw everyone was staring wierdly and him he was embaresed and then the girl came in a little worried and that girl was our fikar minister jeevika

Jeevika ' kya hua app theek toh hai ,she said and come and stand in front of him

He saw her and was out of his sense lost in her beautiful eyes and jeevika also was lost in his eyes they were like this staring eachother for 5mins but then a voice from behide made them come to sense

They broke the eyelock and jeevika due to her shyness start looking to other direction but viren eyes were on her and then he broke the silent

Viren ' ji mai theek hoon sorry woh mai aese chillaya [scream] woh kya haina mai kitni der se apko dekne ki koshis kar raha tha par yeh log saab samne the toh mai dek nahi paya isiliye mai chillaya

And with that jeevika start staring at him with confused expression

Jeevika ' ji

And hen he realised what he said in his mind beta viren yeh kya kiya tune story shuru hone se phele hi larki ko confused kar diya ab kya karegaa to jeevika

Viren ' woh mera kahne ka matlab tha ki maine apko gaatee hue suna [sing] isi liye apko deknaa chata tha wese ap bhot acha gati [sing] hai

Jeeviak ' ji shukriya [thanku] and with that she walk away from him to go to her school

Viren in his mind ab kya karu woh toh jaa rahi hai ab unse baat kese karu mai toh unka naam bi nahi janta

In ghat

In pantars team there are 10 childrens

Raju,sameer,ayush,pooja,simran,rahul,pari gautam,misha,aryan

Manvi was explaining pantars what they have to do for today and after explaining them clearly she ask

Manvi ' kisi ko kuch puchna hai kuch janna hai toh woh abi puch sakta hai

And then ayush ask pantar team boy 9 years old

Ayush ' par di yeh bhot mushkil hai

Manvi ' she sit beside him and said mushkil toh hai mere superman par namumkin nahi

Pooja ' par di agar kisi ko pata chal gaya toh wese bi hamare kitne sare dushman hai

Manvi ' aree tum log fikar maat karo mai hoon naa aur wese bi aaj tak aesa koi kaam hai jo hum nahi karsakte

The pantars noddes in no

Manvi ' toh phir kyun daar rahe ho

Sameer ' di ap theek kah rahe hoo hum kisi se nahi darege aur wese bi hamara yeh aaj ka mission saab ki khushi ke liye hai

Manvi ' right mere ate ki bori

Manvi say him ate ki bori bcoz his very fat and 10 years old

Manvi ' toh phir hojaye with that she put her hand in middle

The pantars together ho jayeee and they put they hands in her's

Manvi ' toh phir shuru karte hain apna mission

the pantars said ok di

manvi ' toh phir poncho apni apni jaga par jaha tum saab ko bataya hai ok mai bi plan ke hisab se tum logo ko 4 bage wahi milugii samaj gaye tum log

the pantars haan di hum saab samaj gaye

manvi ' ok toh phir ab jao or agar koi bi karbar ki naa toh mai tum logo ko pure 1 hafte [week] tak kahi nahi leke jaugi aur tum log toh muje jante hi honaa ke mai jo kahhti hu wahi karti hu she said with her noty smile

the pantars haah haah di hum koi garbar nahi karegee

manvi ' good chalo ab jao aur kaam pe lagoo

the pantars ok di byee

manvi ' byee byee

and wih that manvi take her cycle and went to the road she was going in her cycle to her destination but suddenly her cycle stop and she said aab kahi phir tuje book toh nahi laggayi she came down a saw that her cycle tayer ki pancher she became very angry and said eh bagwan isko bi abi marna tha ab mai kya karu urgg

then she give her cycle to happy ji he is mecanic and then she come to road

manvi ' to herself ab kya karu yaar cycle toh deti use sai hone mein time lagega ab mai waha kese ponchu [reach] gi auto se ja nahi sakti kyun ke saab muje jante hai toh agar unoo ne muje waha jatee hue dek liye toh unee shak ho jayegaa nahi nahi mai itana bara risk nahi le sakti soch soch manvi kuch soch haaan idea kyun na mai yaha se koi car se lift le lu aise kisi ko kuch pata nahi chale ga aur mera kam bi hojaye gaa haaah waah manvi kya dimak paya hai tu toh kamal hai with this she give her million dollar smile

know manvi is asking for a life 1st she saw a car manvi said lift lift lift but car went then again manvi try but no use then again she tries but the car pass from her know she's angry and shouted jaoo kamino bagwan karegaa tum logo ka kuch acha nahi hogaa muj jessi ek nanni se jaan ko ek lift nahi de sakte lanat hai tum par

then she try once again but failed

manvi ' to hersellf yaaar kya kare koi bi lift nahi de raha in ki toh mai ab mai waha kese pochu gi but then a idea come in her head and she smile chalo yeh shai abi tak toh mai sharafat se lift maag rahi thi par or nahi ab bass ab mai apna tareka azmau gi

then she question herself par agar muje kuch ho gaya toh a little scared but then she answer nahi yaar muje kuch nahi hoga maine phele bi toh yeh kiya haina chill kuch nahi hoga manu tuje

with that she wait for a car and after a while a car came and she run to the middle of the road and lied down like she's dead or something the car immegetly stopped

virat was confused and he asked to driver

virat ' tarun kya hua tumne itani jaldi gari [car] kyun rok di

then driver said

driver ' saab koi hai yaha road par

virat ' road par confused

then our hoty look out from the window

and was shocked to see a girl laying on the road he only can see her figure he cant see her face bcoz the car was in front

virat ' oh god yaha toh koi behosh para hai

driver ' saab kya kare?

Ok guys thats it for know plzz do comment and tell me how was it andi will try to pm u all thank you

Edited by manuvirat - 13 years ago

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