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mariarauf48 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
THOUGH THIS WAS SUPPOSED TO BE LAST PART BUT THE IDEA I HAVE IS LENGTHY SO WILL TAKE FEW PARTS . I HOPE U LIKE IT .SARA STOP THREATENING ME HERE IS YOUR UPDATE

PART 14

They finally came back to the hotel .Jeevika was damn happy n was flying from here n there .

jeevika; today was the best day of my life the beach water i loved it .virenji this is all because of u n ur love that i m here other wise i would have missed all of this cz of my cancer

Viren was angry n hold jeevika tightly from her wrist n made he bang on the wall .Anger was fuming in her eyes n told jeevika not to say such thing again .Jeevika has seen viren this anger for the second time nthe reason was the same his love for her .Tears dropped from her eyes n she hugged him tightly .

They remain in the same position for a while until jeevika broke the hug n said
JEEVIKA : my life was so incomplete without u i love you
vien : i love you tooo

viren made the grip a little bit loose n jeevika tried to go away but viren held her back saying not so easy mrs vadhera u made me angry now u ve to change my mood pointing towards his lips .Jeevika slowly n shyly approached to his lips n they had soft kiss until there was a knock on the door .The staff brought the dinner for the two .they both had their dinner n slept in each other arms .

The next dat viren n jeevika went o shopping .Jeevika went to a shope of western dreeses n started trying some dresses .When sh ewent inside to try viren bought a white gown for her (thats a surprise will reveal in next part ) .Jeevika was inside the trial room when she called viren to see how its looking .Before jeevika could come out viren went inside

viren:instead of calling me again n again i thought of coming inside witha smirk

they were to close that their entire body could touch eachother.viren stared jeevika beautiful face n removed hair from her face .Than he moved his cheeks towards her n started rubbing with her cheeks.he kissed her soft chhecks n was about to move further when the manager ask :any problem mam

Jeevika was blushing like anything n went outside the shope .Viren paid the bill n also came outside

DO LIKE N COMMENT

precap :just imagine n think whats the surprise :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg!!such and amazing update!! 😉

woohooo me first one to comment 😃 😃

i love each n every part of this update 😃

the hug...the kisss n jeevika blushing 😳 😳

u r gonna make me crazyy wid ur ss 😆

continue soon and thanks for not endng it 😛
Edited by ashna1406 - 12 years ago
little.angel56 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am one of the first to comment!
Yepiy!!🥳

Thanks for the pm,

I loved it a lot,

Specially when she is trying and he comes instead, loved his line too!

haha, It was nice though short!

What will be the surprise??

Hm,, waiting for moree!
Edited by little.angel56 - 12 years ago
mariarauf48 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: little.angel56

I am one of the first to comment!
Yepiy!!🥳


Thanks for the pm,

I loved it a lot,

Specially when she is trying and he comes instead, loved his line too!

haha, It was nice though short!

What will be the surprise??

Hm,, waiting for moree!


thanx for likinh it i knew it was short but when i write i things its too much but when post its too short thenext update will be long n d surprise
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg maria i just asked u that when u r going to update and u updated yuhooo 🤗
thanx dear
awesome update
and i m bad in thinking so just waiting for the surprise 😉
thanx for the pm...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ahhh Maria finally KT ko chod kar update kiya thanku ji.
Awesome n sweet update.
Viren is so naughty direct trial room k andar lol.
Thanx 4 d pm

Edited by Virika-luv - 12 years ago
HayatM thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Short but sweet and cute!:)
Continue soon!
urmil thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...bt was short...thnks for pm n make it longer nxt time...
avni_19 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww!!!!! sooo beautifulll...me going red while reading this... lol :P jaldi update kijiyeee!!!! do PM me...thnkuuu its going niceee... loving it!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

A.W.E.S.O.M.E😃

Loved it❤️

It was cute

Mood Change😳

White gown

Staff and manager😡 Humes galat time pe ate hai

Surprise? (Kia hai?)😕

But I'm sure it will be something nice😉But I'm sure it will be something nice

Continue soon or I'll...(Sara plz give me some training of threating people :P)😆

Thanks for the pm and the update🤗


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