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HarshIkaZaYaxox thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Part 10:

Manvi: mere liye pyaar (she secretly looks at virat as he replys with a smile)
Hmmm... Mere liye pyaar... Ek ache dost ka Saath hai... Ek insan jo mujhe kisi halat mein akele na chode. Jo mujhe speacial feel karaye, uska dil sone ka ho. Mere liye pyar...(looks at virat) music hai. You know that's all I really wanna do! Virat mera andaaz pesh Karne ke liye mere Saath gao ge.
Kya is mein tum mera Saath do ge?

Virat: sure.


Dekhoon tujhe choo lo tujhe socho tujhe sonu tujhe

Bas dil tujh mein dooba rahoon
Dooba rahoon dooba dooba rahoon
Main tujh mein hi tujh mein dooba rahoon

That's all I really wanna do
That's all I really wanna do
That's all I really wanna do
That's all I really wanna do..

Dekhoon tujhe choo lo tujhe socho tujhe sonu tujhe
Bas dil tujh mein dooba rahe
Dooba rahe dooba dooba rahe
Dil tujh mein hi tujh mein dooba rahe

That's all I really wanna do
That's all I really wanna do
That's all I really wanna do
That's all I really wanna do

That's all I really wanna do (That's all I really wanna do)
That's all I really wanna do (That's all I really wanna do)
That's all I really wanna do (That's all I really wanna do)
That's all I really wanna do (That's all I really wanna do)

Cheers

Pehele mein tujhse milta tha
Ab mujhe khulta jao
Khwbon mein agar haath badao
Haath tera paao

Haan khushboo ke jaise
Mujhe odh le tu
Har khayal mahekta hai
Ehsas leke tere sath kam
Har lamha sarakta hoon

Dooba rahoon dooba dooba rahoon
Main tujh mein hi tujh mein dooba rahoon

That's all I really wanna do
That's all I really wanna do
That's all I really wanna do
That's all I really wanna do

Kya ye chalta kya kua hai
Do kinare mil rahe hai
Sang sang hum paniyon pe chal rahe.. hai..

Neend nahi hai main aa raha hoon
Aane do leharane do
Saanson pe teri main judne laga hoon
Khwahishe ban jaane do

Dooba rahe dooba dooba rahe
Dil dooba dooba rahe

That's all I really wanna do
That's all I really wanna do
That's all I really wanna do
That's all I really wanna do

That's all I really wanna do
That's all I really wanna do
That's all I really wanna do
That's all I really wanna do



Manvi: thats all I really wanna do.

I awake each day with a smile
And greet it with a laugh;
The world is a treasure to me
Because of you.

Every time I think of something sad,
I replace the thought- with you!
My mind is instantly changed
And my heart is filled with gladness.

Every breath I take is meant for you,
I live this life surrounded in joy
And I bathe in the promise of your love,
My soul belongs to you.

Each time I see something beautiful
I want to take it and bring it to you;
My life has so much meaning now
All because of you.


I love you virat.
(viren jumps in fear jeevika shell shocked virat almost fainting thinking about his murder by jeevika)

Manvi smiling at virat.



left u with dun dun dun

Do comment!



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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
SHOCKED!! Manvi's lines wer very pretty bt wat will happen now??
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
Part 11:

Manvi: I love you virat.

Jeevika: mannu ye tu kya keh rahi hai?
Manvi: huh? HUH!? Di jiju aap kab aye... Oh shit!
Virat: Bhabi woh...
Jeevika: virat tum chup raho...mannu idhar dekh.
Manvi raised her head up.
Manvi: di mujhe...neend a rahi hai
Jeevika turns her around quickly which hurts manvis arm.
Manvi: ouch...di!
Virat pulls manvi away.
Virat: Bhabi!
Jeevika: virat tum hum behnon ke mamle mein na paro to woh tumhare liye zyaada Accha ho ga... Yeh Sab waise bhi tumhari waja se hi ho raha hai!
Virat: Aisa kya ho Gaya hai jo aap itna gussa kar rahi ho?
Jeevika: virat chale Jao yahaan se...
Virat: chala jaoon ga Bhabi Lekin manvi ko apne Saath le kar.
Jeevika: mannu Kahin nahi jaay gi.
Virat: manvi mere Saath aye gi.
Jeevika: virat manvi nahi jaaye gi tumhare Saath. Mannu tu Kahin nahi jaaye gi.
Virat: you noe Wat Bhabi aap badi behen hone ka faida Utha rahi ho.
Jeevika looks up at virat shocked.
Manvi: virat... Yeh tumm kya...
Virat: nahi manvi aaj mujhe Bolne do. Bhabi aap manvi ko kabhi uski zindagi mein jaane hi nahi do gi, aapka behen ban ke koi gunah nahi kiya hai usne. Uski apni life hai, chod di Jiye usse akele for god sake get out of her life!!!!
At this point jeevika is crying and manvi slaps virat. Virat is shocked, jeevika runs away and viren Is disappointed and goes too.

Virat was left all alone.

do comment!!! X
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
My goodness...What a turn of events...Eagerly waiting to see what happens next... Please do continue soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
OMG devar-bhabhi mein jagrah and manvi slapped virat uff whats guna happen next
Update soon and pm me please and when u pm me do tell me what page u have updated on please
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Part 12:

Virat goes outside. Its raining heavily, the song tujhe bhula diya starts to play, ( naina lagiyaan barishaan: manvi crying in the room)

Virat drops on his knees and can't believe theat MANVI slapped HIM.

30 mins later.

Viren: manvi tumhe pata hai virat kahaan hai, Maine socha ki mein usse samjhoon, kahan hai woh.
Manvi: jiju, Maine usse pickle aade ghante se nahi dekha.
Viren: shaayad woh apni Bhabi se sorry keh raha ho ga.
Manvi: (sad) haan shaayad.

They both go to jeevikas room but she's sleeping.

Viren: manvi tum Sab kamron mein check Karo mein bahar check karta hoon.
Manvi goes in virat's room, then hers again then she goes to virens room: VIRAT!!!!

Viren looked in the garden and ran back in

Both: mila
Both: nahi


Viren calls virat.

Viren: virat tu kahaan hai.
Virat: bhai meri fikar na karna, Bhabi ko meri taraf se sorry keh dena theek hai aur... Manvi ko kehna ke uske thapar me mujhe bataa diya ki mein aap Sab ke Like nahi hoon.
Viren: Lekin...
Virat: bhai mein bus station pe kharaa hoon agar ap ko mujhe see off Karne aaja hai to aa Jao
Viren: Lekin tu jaa kahaan raha hai
Virat: pata nahi... Koi manzil hi nahi to kahaan jaoon ga'
And cuts the call
Viren: manvi woh bohot upset hai pata nahi kahaan jaa raha hai!
Manvi: chale
Viren: haan


Jeevika: viren ji abhi abhi nearest bus station mein blast hua hai, riots ho rahi hai na...
Viren: kya?!
Jeevika: haan tv on Karlo
Viren,manvi and jeevika watching the tv.

Reporter: Chandigarh, near the vadhera house bus station pe abhi hi dhamakedaar bomb blast. Riots paagalpan ki had tak chali gai hai almost 95 percent log bohat buri Tara injured hain.


Manvi: VIRAT!!!! And falls on her knees



How was it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Part 12:

Virat goes outside. Its raining heavily, the song tujhe bhula diya starts to play, ( naina lagiyaan barishaan: manvi crying in the room)

Virat drops on his knees and can't believe theat MANVI slapped HIM.

30 mins later.

Viren: manvi tumhe pata hai virat kahaan hai, Maine socha ki mein usse samjhoon, kahan hai woh.
Manvi: jiju, Maine usse pickle aade ghante se nahi dekha.
Viren: shaayad woh apni Bhabi se sorry keh raha ho ga.
Manvi: (sad) haan shaayad.

They both go to jeevikas room but she's sleeping.

Viren: manvi tum Sab kamron mein check Karo mein bahar check karta hoon.
Manvi goes in virat's room, then hers again then she goes to virens room: VIRAT!!!!

Viren looked in the garden and ran back in

Both: mila
Both: nahi


Viren calls virat.

Viren: virat tu kahaan hai.
Virat: bhai meri fikar na karna, Bhabi ko meri taraf se sorry keh dena theek hai aur... Manvi ko kehna ke uske thapar me mujhe bataa diya ki mein aap Sab ke Like nahi hoon.
Viren: Lekin...
Virat: bhai mein bus station pe kharaa hoon agar ap ko mujhe see off Karne aaja hai to aa Jao
Viren: Lekin tu jaa kahaan raha hai
Virat: pata nahi... Koi manzil hi nahi to kahaan jaoon ga'
And cuts the call
Viren: manvi woh bohot upset hai pata nahi kahaan jaa raha hai!
Manvi: chale
Viren: haan


Jeevika: viren ji abhi abhi nearest bus station mein blast hua hai, riots ho rahi hai na...
Viren: kya?!
Jeevika: haan tv on Karlo
Viren,manvi and jeevika watching the tv.

Reporter: Chandigarh, near the vadhera house bus station pe abhi hi dhamakedaar bomb blast. Riots paagalpan ki had tak chali gai hai almost 95 percent log bohat buri Tara injured hain
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
finally found it n read all d parts in a go!!!!n believe me it was really good!well done👍🏼
though d updates r a lil bit short but they continue their own style 👏
thank u so much 4 d pm 🤗 n sorry 4 d late response😳

PS:i just loved d sad version of Hua Kya Hua by you.it suited d situation very well 👍🏼⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
I loved te update but it was so sad hope manvi finds virat hope hes safe he is fine...
Poor virat!!!
Awesome yet emotional dhak dhak update
Continue asap and pm me
But please make the updates longer if u can
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
Part 13:

Manvi: virat!!!!

Everyone is crying.

Manvi: hum ro kyun rahe hain kuch nahi hua virat ko bilkul theek hai woh mein...mein usse wapas le kar aaoon gi...jeeju mein!
Manvi runs towards the door and flings it open, she is shocked nd is smiling.
Virat is standing at the door and is confused manvi hugs him tight saying without words that she would never let him go'

Virat hugs her back and manvi is crying.

Manvi holds virats face: virat tum theek to ho na? Tum...tum
Virat: ek second... Kya hua manvi
Manvi hugs him again: tumme pata nahi hai tumhari aawaz sun kar mujhe kitna sakoon mil raha hai, virat kabhi mujhse door mat jana hamesha mere paas rehna jaise abhi ho plzzz kabhi mujhse Alan mat Hona.

Virat: man...
Manvi keeps hugging him tight.

Viren: virat tu bus stop pe kya kar raha tha?
Virat: mein jaa raha tha Sab chod ke...Lekin jaise hi bus ayi Maine realize kiya ki galat mein tha aur mein aap teenon ke bager nahi Ji sakta!

Manvi: aur hum tumhare bina, I love you virat kabhi mujhse alag mat Hona
Virat: I love you too x

This is the end but soon I'm gonna start a new os called ' 7 din 7 janam'

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