Something Like Love - Part 16 on Page 90 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry guys I just noticed my mistakes in PART 1. Excuse me for that. :) Hope you'll like this part.

PART 2

Jeevika
- First you wanted to help me and now when I'm asking you your telling no !?
What a crazy guy !!

Viren - I'm crazy or your crazy? When I was trying to help you out.. You give me a long lecture and ..

Jeevika - *Cuts his sentence in between* Fine I'm sorry ! Can we get going coz I'm getting late.

Viren - But where do you wanna go?

Jeevika - Kings college.

Viren - Oh! Even I'm going there.

They sit in the car and are on their way to the college when Jeevika's phone rings.And she see Maanvi's name flashing on the screen.She picked up the call..

Maanvi - What the hell yrr Jeevika! Uthana tha na see ab I'm late for college..

Jeevika - I called you up a million times and sent texts but if you keep your phone on silent mode what can I do?

Maanvi - Sorry,didn't see that.

Jeevika - Stop with the sorry and go get ready soon.

Maanvi - Ya chalo bye. *Cuts the call*

Viren - Whats your name?

Jeevika - Jeevika Sharma. And yours?

Viren - Viren Vadera.

Jeevika - "The Vadera's" ?

Viren - Yes. "The Vadera's" *And gives her a smile*

There was silence in the car but Viren was looking at Jeevika from the corner of his eyes while driving and just had an undefined feeling whenever he looked at her.Suddenly Jeevika didn't notice that as she was busy with her phone.Suddenly her phone rings and it was Maanvi again..

Jeevika - What happened now?

Maanvi - I ain't getting any Auto.

Jeevika - Oh crap! Your already getting late.What do we do now?

Viren - What happened?

Jeevika - Actually my best friend Maanvi is joininh kings college too and she get up late and stuff and now she isn't getting any auto or taxi.

Viren - Where is her house? I'll ask my brother to pick him up if it's on the way.Even he's coming to college.

Jeevika told him the address and it was on the way so he called up Virat and asked him to pick her up at first Virat disagreed but later he agreed. Jeevika told Maanvi that Virat Vadera was gonna come and pick her up in a few.

Maanvi was waiting for Virat and he came after 5 mins.And as soon as Virat came she started off..

Maanvi - Do you have brains? I'm waiting here from 5 mins for YOU and you take your own time? If it were like that main walking hi chali jaati.. Aadhe raste paunch toh jaati.
Atleast itni dhoop main khada toh nai rehna padta.Now why are you staring? Be quick man .. Drive the car I'm getting late!

Pre-cap :
Virat - Get down from the car right now.

I know this part was pretty boring guys. But just wait for the next part. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
It was really good! Loved itt sooo mucchh!

Nahi

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Nahi-

It was really good! Loved itt sooo mucchh!


Nahi

xxx



Thanks a lot Nahi! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
this is realy good.would love to read more virika scenes o in d next part...n pls pm me when u update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: fairyland13

this is realy good.would love to read more virika scenes o in d next part...n pls pm me when u update.


Thanks.. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Actually had to write all this down because I couldn't think of any other way about Virmaan meeting each other.. ๐Ÿ˜†
I'll defo PM you.. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by KT_4eva - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Virat making an entry wow! I could so imagine Manvi blabbering on with her talks! ๐Ÿคฃ Bichaara Virat tumhare dialogue ke saath toh bichara hi banega ๐Ÿ˜†! the awesome four will be together soon can't wait ๐Ÿ˜ƒ And finally coming on to Virika! Viren has already started feeling for Jeevika! ๐Ÿ˜ณ Hayye ise kehte hain love at first sight ๐Ÿ˜. And now coming to the writer which is you! you are a really good writer and I love your story but I hate you timings! ๐Ÿ˜ก Tu kitni bari kamini hai yaar aisi jagah par rukhti hain jahan interest bharta hai! ๐Ÿ˜ญ ( How you noticed we've not used Kamini for a while in our convo's ๐Ÿ˜†) please please update soon yaar ( I'm being nice by saying please warna i always demand ๐Ÿ˜‰)
Jaldi se likh yaar ! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Love you ๐Ÿค—

Tina

Edited by virenjeevika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: virenjeevika

Virat making an entry wow! I could so imagine Manvi blabbering on with her talks! ๐Ÿคฃ Bichaara Virat tumhare dialogue ke saath toh bichara hi banega ๐Ÿ˜†! the awesome four will be together soon can't wait ๐Ÿ˜ƒ And finally coming on to Virika! Viren has already started feeling for Jeevika! ๐Ÿ˜ณ Hayye ise kehte hain love at first sight ๐Ÿ˜. And now coming to the writer which is you! you are a really good writer and I love your story but I hate you timings! ๐Ÿ˜ก Tu kitni bari kamini hai yaar aisi jagah par rukhti hain jahan interest bharta hai! ๐Ÿ˜ญ ( How you noticed we've not used Kamini for a while in our convo's ๐Ÿ˜†) please please update soon yaar ( I'm being nice by saying please warna i always demand ๐Ÿ˜‰)
Jaldi se likh yaar ! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Love you ๐Ÿค—

Tina


Yes,finally!!๐Ÿ˜†
๐Ÿคฃ I also pity him!
Yes,the foursome will be together soon.. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Yes,Viren's fallen for Jeevika at the first sight.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ You should wait for the drama. ๐Ÿ˜†
Thank you.. ๐Ÿ˜† I do have perfect timing's .. ๐Ÿ˜‰ Kamini ki friend hun after all. ๐Ÿคฃ
Chal tu itna hi keh rahi hai toh I'll update on Friday.. Coz I pity myself .it was suppose to be on Sunday.. ๐Ÿ˜† Tu toh mera khoon hi pee jati.
Love you too! ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dat so interesting i really lovd it๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good update๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Thanks for the PM...Continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really nice update...n thnx 4 d pm...

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