VirmanSS:My Jealous Partner Part 6 updated page 24 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Will update the next part today guys😊
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Here is the next part of my SS.ENjoy!!😉and plz leave your valuable comments and likes.Makes me happy to see them😃

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Virat-

He raced through the roads at breakneck speed earning him the curses of the people who were unlucky enough to cross his path that night. The sun had already set and the roads were lit only by the street lights and the moon. He couldn't get her words out of his head.

"A boy and his family are coming to see me. Now that im alright Beeji has decided its time for me to get married!"

More than her words it was her tone that had scared him. She actually seemed happy with whatever was happening. Didn't she know anything? He had survived one whole year with only one thought. She was his. He wasn't willing to let her anyone else have any right over her. And here he was with his own right over her in danger of being snatched away from him.

He had to admit it. He was burning with jealousy. The thought of anyone near her other than him was just unacceptable. Did she know this guy before itself? Was he her friend? Then why hadn't she told him about this friend of hers? Suddenly he remembered her words

"I sure hope he's like Ranbir kapoor. Not for me partner.. Badi Beeji always wanted a daamad like that..but I guess I wouldn't mind."

So she hoped that this guy was like Ranbir Kappor. That meant that she didn't know him. In fact she hasn't even seen him. He felt himself calm down. Things were not so bad. But that wasn't enough to tame the worry that was clawing his insides. He continued his journey. His journey to his heart.

Maanvi-

Finally morning came. Maanvi peeped out of the kitchen to see the guests that had arrived. God was truly with her. She was shocked at her own luck when Beeji told her that an old friend of hers was coming there along with her full family. And one look at the family told her that there was a guy who looked perfect to be her future groom. He was handsome but not as handsome as her Chep. But Chep didn't know that did he? She grinned devilishly.

Maanvi had called Virat that morning. She hoped she sounded shocked enough when he told her that he would reach her house within half an hour. He had cut the call hastily when she innocently asked him the reason for coming so early. Maanvi looked at her watch. If her calculations were correct then Virat should reach here within 5-10 minutes. So, nearly giving her Chachi a heart attack, she offered to serve juice to the guests. She moved from one person to another, giving glasses of juice to each of the family members. She saved the boy for last. He looked least interested in her and was continuously talking about some business deal on the phone. She didn't know how it happened but suddenly the tray she was holding flew out of her hands. She twirled around to see Virat holding the tray in his hands and glaring at the guy who was in turn looking at Virat with an expression that said 'what the-'She didn't even have the time to complete that thought.

"Yeh rishtha nahi hoga" Viraat said firmly. He took in everybody's look of shock.

"Par beta.." Beeji started to say something but she was cut off by Maanvi who was looking at Virat with an expectant look on her face.

"Kyun?" She asked simply.

He looked desperate for a second. He closed his eyes for a second and when he opened his eyes she saw a steely determination in them.

"Kyunki..I love you Maanvi!" he said.

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An hour later-

After all was said and done between Virat , the guests and Maanvi's family members Virat and Maanvi were left alone. Suddenly she felt her feet leave the ground. He had lifted her up as if she was as light as a feather. It reminded her of the first time he had picked her up like that but she couldn't really enjoy it this time. One look at his face told her that now was not the time to get romantic. So for the first time in her life she kept quiet. After what seemed like a few seconds she reached her room. He put her down and turned to close the door.

Maanvi stared at the floor scared to face him. It was not easy to scare her but she knew that her partner can get really angry, really fast. She could almost feel her skin burn as he stared at her.

"Was that really necessary?" he whispered. She looked up, startled to hear his tone. His cheeks had turned bright red and he looked.. well.. Mortified.

She couldn't help herself. Grinning, she moved forward and pinched his cheeks.

"Aww.. Chep I never thought you could look soo cute" she squealed.

He could feel a small smile forming on his lips. But he fought it back as a plan suddenly formed in his mind. She could see that he was planning something. But she decided to go along with it. After all he had confessed his love for her in front of her whole family + some other random family.

"Come on Chep..one smile…for me?? Plz…." She said, making a puppy dog face.

"Nope..not until you 'apologise.'." he said, somehow managing to keep a straight face and draw out the word at the same time. She groaned knowing what exactly he meant by 'apology'.

"Ok.. fine ..you are such a Drama king" she said as she moved closer to him.She couldn't ignore the butterflies in her stomach that seemed to multiply with each step she took towards him.

He could feel her breath on his face now.

"Look who is talking" he whispered before bending down to accept her 'apology'.

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So...how is it?😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the pm!!! Lovely update!!!! It Swweeettt Cuuutteeere!!!! :P :P plz continue!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Luv it!!
Continue soon!!
Thanx 4 pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Wowww!!!!!! 👏 No word is enough to say how much I loved dis update!!!!!🤗 Virat's confession of love,VirMan kiss!!!!!😍 m dead!!!!❤️😳

Edited by ANTARA-2244 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Too good yaar.. loved it.. i could easily relate to Virat and Manvi.. Pls continue.. Waiting for next part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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too good yaar pls update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
hey was that random family was raizadas and that guy was asr .well love the concept .update ssoon😃
Edited by 10000wattt - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: 10000wattt

hey was that random family was raizadas and that guy was asr .well love the concept .update ssoon😃


yea i did write it keeping the Raizaadas and Asr in mind😉i was wondering why nobody commented on dat.thanx😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was just awsm luvd it
thnx for the pm
continue soon

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