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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh my god.
u aroused thousands of questions in my mind..
please cony. soon
waiting for ur next update..
please pm me when u cont. next
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you so much for reading ,commenting nd pressing Like button it means a lot to me😊 I know last part was confusing nd believe me it evn confused me😆 After reading this part im sure a small part of ur confusion will be cleared🤔If not then im sure the 4th part will clear all ur confusion!!!😆 Pls do read this part nd give ur honest feed back evn if its chappals or eggs but pls post ur review=)
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Part 3:

Swamini Singh Vadhera!

Par Dadaji wo kahan gayi hogi 2 mahine hogayi uske yahan se gaye hue aur abhi tak uska kuch ata pata nahi hai aur aap kehrahi hai wo aajayengi!!tho phir aap ne abhi tak apne doosre pote ko pehchana hi nahi hai'Viren shouted which was very unVirenish nd swamini was not going to take it!

Viren abb bass bhi karo'tumhe yaad bhi hai ki nahi kit um kiss se baat kar rahi hai??Swamini asked!

Aur haan Bauji teekh kehrahi hai wo wapas aajayengi jab uske drama aur Cards main paise katam hojayengi tab 'Swamini added at which Viren chuckled and said.

Viren: Wapas aajayengi??Wo khudkhushi kardenge yahan wapas aane se pehle, main jaanti hoon apne bhai ko.

Swamini was nw loosing all her calm nd composed nature. Hw dare he??Mere Viren mujh par hass rahi hai, aur tane maar rahi hai ??Ye main hone nahi doongi!

Agar wo aise bewakoofi karengi tho hum kya kar sakthi hai?Shayad wahi uski galti ki saza ho??wahi uski kismet 'she knows evn while speaking that what she saying was wrong bt She was Swamini Singh vadhera aur wo galti nahi karti she thought proudly and looked at Viren who was looking at me as if he had seen me for the very first time with hurt nd Anger in his eyes nd it somehw pained me to see anger in his eyes that too for me nd then what shocked nd surprised Swamini was when she looked at Manvi who have left her Di's side and taken a step forward her eyes burning with anger nd hatred she looked as if she will explode nw nd it scared Swamini a bit to see that nd it confused her more?Why was she reacting this way??bt was bought back by someone shouting and looked around to see the shock of her life..

BASS DIDI BASSS shouted Vanshika at Swamini who was shocked will be understatement..

Swamini:Vanshika ye tum'

Vanshika : Bass aaj main kahoongi aur aap suno gi..aaj tak maine aapki harr baat mani hai..aapke haar decision par aapke saath diya hai,maine apne bete par apne aap se zyada haq aapko diya tha aur aaj tak meri mooh se aap keliye dua hi nikla hai, harr din jab bhi main Bagwanji ke saamne kade hoti hoon tho maine aap keliye humesha bagwaan se shikayat ki hai ki usne aapse aapki kushiyan cheeni hai,lekin aaj mujhe samajh aaraha hai ki bagwaan ne aisa kyun kiya tha..Shayad Bagwaan jaanthi thi aap kabhi ek ache maa nahi ho payegi..Iss liye shayad usne aap se aapke bete cheenli thi..issliye aap ek maa hote hue bhi kabhi ek maa ka sugh nahi mehsoos kar payi'kyunki aap kabhi Maa shabd ki arth aur takat nahi samajh payi aur aaj ye aap ne saabith kardiya..kyunki mujhe laga aap'samajh payenge kyunki aap se zyada koi nahi samaj sakte ki ek bete ko khone dard kya hoti hai ek maa keliye...lekin aaj aapne apne saare hadh paar kar liya aapko lagta hai ki agar MERE BETE NE KUDKHUSHI KI THO WO USKELIYE SAZA HOGI'.SWAMINI SINGH VADHERA YAHI WAJAH SE AAPNE APNi KUSHI KO DII, YAHI WAJAH SE'

BASS BASSS aur nahi'. swamini shouted closing her ears and her tearful eyes tightly as if blocking all these painful memories nd tightened the grip on the photo frame she had in her hands

Kyun bagwaan kyun ??she cried her heart out in her dark empty room without caring if anyone saw her like this or not for her lost child first time in last 26yrs all the old wounds were opened painfully nd nw she was jus like that young girl who have lost her newborn child crying loudly without a care for the world holding a pendant tightly to her chest and then suddenly felt someone's presence at her baak nd then a hand was there on her shoulder..she dint evn tried to make out who it was in her dark room nd jus hugged the figure who have now knelt down in front of her nd opened her mind nd soul in front of that person!

Hw an train incident shattered the life of Swamini Singh Vadhera the young 22 yr old law student from chandigrah and hw she became lifeless body nd hw that incident gave her a hope in the form of an unborn child nd hw she hated that child first nd wanted to abort it Later on hw that unborn child became a light in her life nd hw she waited for the whole ten months for her baby,her life nd hw the day she felt everything perfect the day her boy was born nd hw faith had taken away her own child from her the third day of his birth 27yrs ago by her own mother which she came to know 7yrs before when her mom was breathing her last breath she confessed her sin that inorder to save the family name, hw her own mother has taken her child away from nd gave her this pendant to her as an identity for her son who has a similar pendant when my mother left him in an orphanage nd hw she has searched for her son in every corner of the country nd dint get him!she blurted out everything to this person who was comforting her and showed her the pendant of Lord shiv nd whom swamini noticed examining it with her hands very gently as if it will break if she touch it.And then suddenly there was light in her room nd swamini blinged her eyes as it was paining her to be in light and turned around to see who it was and saw Vanshika standing there with tearful eyes nd shocked expression at seeing something or someone near me nd I slowly turned to look at the person to whom I have opened my life and was shocked to see a crying Manvi!!

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Ye kaise job kar rahi hai wo Mumbai main jo usse leave hi nahi milte'Virenji mujhe bahut darr lag rahi hai'Swamini heard Jeevika saying this with tearful eyes by hugging Viren or trying to do so bt is nt able to bcoz of her ten month old baby bumb.

Viren: Jeevika wo bahut busy hai issliye wo yahan nahi aarahi hai..he said looking everywhere but at jeevika nd Swamini knows Viren was hiding something!

Jeevika :Busy hai??Wo meri behn hai aur main usse achi tarah se jaanthi hoon'aaj mujhe aisi halat main chodkar wo Mumbai main hai tho kuch problem zaroor hai..mujhe pehle hi shakk tha aisi kaun si job kar rahi hai wahan par ki pichle 8 mahine main usse ek baar bhi chutti nahi mili aur aaj kal jab bhi wo phone karti hai wo weak lagti hai mujhe'usse kuch hua tho nahi hogi na'she asked with tears and concern was evident in her eyes nd more than anything she was scared and evn Swamini wondered abt Manvi as much as she knows abt this girl she will be here by her di..evn is she is in some other country bt nw she is staying away from her di nd that too when she wants her the most that means'.and looked at Viren who was in tears and was hiding it from Jeevika..Kuch hua hai Manvi ko aur ye baat Swamini ko bilkul achi nahi lagi jaise lagna chahiye waise!

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Mannu tum wapas agayi??Jeevika asked running towards her sister and hugging her who was smiling bt something was wrong nd seeing this girl nd thinking abt same girl Swamini has seen 2 nd half year before Manvi Chaudry was different in every aspect nd jeevika too noticed it after some minutes of crying and scolding nd was equally shocked!

She looked thin very unnaturally thin nd there were huge dark circles around her eyes as if she was sleep deprived for yrs nd her eyes which always looked livily looked pained nd evn haunted like a person who have suffered unbarable pain nd what surprised her more was her hair or the lack of it'it looked as if she had shaved her head nw her hair was regrowing..all in all she looked like dead body nd then swamini saw everyone in the chaudry house who was jus know playing with Jeevika's 1 nd a half yr old boy was nw hugging Manvi nd was crying seeing her bt then she noticed Manvi looking at her nd she looked at her as if she wanted to tell me something bt she cant'and we both were staring at each other for what seemed like an eternity nd then was bought back from our peaceful nd painful understanding world by the cry of a lil baby which was not Alok(Viren's baby)bt a small baby in hands of a nurse who was till nw standing behind Manvi unnoticed!

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Swamini saw chaos in chaudhry mansion at the arrival of the small baby one week back nd vadhera's who was staying with them for dabbu's marriage knows abt everything going on in that house, everyone in that house was talking abt the baby who was now peacefully sleeping in Manvi's arms and most importantly everyone wanted to know what happnd to Manvi ??bt no one asked her bcoz she already made it clear that she doesn't want to talk abt it 'BG was furious bt jeevika has sweared bg to not ask mannu anything bt something was wrong and swamini was sure may be not fully bt viren knows something though evn he looked shocked seeing the baby with her the other day!Lekin aaj Swamini ko lagta hai ki kuch hone waale hai'kyunki aaj Viren aur jivika bhi nahi hai yahan par'wo log virat ko doondne gayi hai phir ek baar!

And today is Dabbu's Sangeeth and the ladki's side and ladke's side is going to celebrate it together all the guest has arrived and like fire the news has spread abt manvi's child nd her weak condition'ppl are spreading rumours abt manvi nd her character, this bothered swamini as she has gonne through similar situation may be not similar bt pain is there in both of their eyes bt in two different level.

Main aapke wo lord shiv waale pendant dekh sakthi hai??...i heard someone with a rough nd shaky voice asking me nd I was shocked as to who is it nd turned bt saw Manvi there with a small smile which looked painful'

Hw dare she ask me abt the pendant??She want to see it again!!Did she think that jus bcoz I broke down infront of her, I like her??she wanted to ask all these Question nd more to Manvi like hw she got this baby or whose baby is this?? but What she did surprised Swamini herself bcoz she jus took that pendant from its hiding place nd gave it to her and asked her..

Where were u all these years??What happened to u??I know Viren knows what happnd to u nd he is hiding it from everyone!...after hearing this question she jus looked up and was about to say something probably a lie bt then may b she thought it other way nd looked around,as if to make sure no one was eves dropping them nd then she looked at the pendant and smiled a real smile and said

Main jiju ki madad se meri ilaaj kar rahi thi cancer keliye Mumbai main, aur ye sab ..she said pointing towards her weak body nd her short hair' chemotherapy ke side effects hai lekin ab main teekh hoon,kuch hadd tak I can evn say im free of cancer nw''she chuckled nd said cooly with a smile nd swamini saw pain unbearable pain in her eyes,pain of a fighter who have fought her destiny nd had won the battle. Respect swamini had for this girl only increased nd Swamini wanted to say something to her and was about to when she saw someone arguing with BG nd they were pointing fingers at Manvi nd small baby!

Manvi mujhe lagta hai tumhe bache ko lekar'I was cut down by manvi who looked unaffected by all the negative attention she was getting..

Aur main isi treatment ki dauran apne ek ache dosth ke pass yahi pendant dekhe''For Swamini world stood still there at Manvi's those words,it was like she cant breath,'.Many arguments were going on in Swamini's mind like wo aise dikhne waali koi aur necklace hogi,kisi aur ke paas bhi ho sakthi hai aise hi necklace bt she knows, it was the very same necklace..

Kyunki uski maa ne banwaye thi wo pendant aur Seema Singh Vadhera koi bhi aam cheez nahi kareed thi wo bass unique cheezain lete hai aur aaj tak Swamini ne aise pendant kisi ke pass nahi dekhe hai aur aaj agar Manvi ne dekhe hai tho 'phir..wo..bache.Nw all swamini wanted to know was his name?where he was nd everything about him bt was bought back to the reality by a hand on her shoulder nd Swamini noticed that it was Manvi nd she was hiding behind her holding the small baby protectively in her hands nd there was a sudden urge in Swamini to protect this girl behind her nd she looked up to see whom she was hiding from nd looking up she saw the entire chaudries nd vadhera's and all the other guest looking at Manvi with various expression.

Ye kya ho rahi hai yahan par??Swamini asked with anger!

Bass Hum log ye jaan na chahta hai ki iss bache ki baap kaun hai??Aakhir hum bhi tho jaane iss ne iss pariwaar ko badnaam kis ke saath milkar kiya hai??ya phir ek se zyada log hai kya ki ye naam nahi le pa rahi hai kisike??Said a women from the crowd nd swamini wanted to strangle that female then nd there'

Kya baat kar rahi hai aap??Aisi koi baat nahi hai??Swamini said but was shocked at pinky chachi' words..

Agar aisi baat hai tho isski ye haalat kaise hogayi? aur ye hume batati kyun nahi ki iski bache ki baap kaun hai???Pinky chachi said looking down!

Ye tum'..Swamini was about to argue with Pinky chachi when someone came nd shocked everyone nd gave Swamini the happiest day in her life!

MAIN BATA THI HOON AAP LOGON KO ISS BACHE KE BAAP KA NAAM'ISS BACHE KE BAAP MAIN HOON! AUR MANVI MERI PATNI HAI AUR HUMARI SHAADI KO HUE 2 SAAL HOGAYE HAI!

Swamini jus heard these words and after that it was jus the sound of air arrround her,as her eyes involuntarily moved to see the precious thing she has searched in the past 29years ," Pendant of Lord Shiva" hanging around his neck'

Swamini felt tears forming in her eyes,air taken out of her lungs, her throat became dry,it was like all of a sudden her world has been turned upside down nd gave her the best day of her life!And she looked up to see the face of her son,her own blood and saw an outline of a figure who was hugging someone with a baby through her tears nd as one by one tears fell from her eyes she saw a familiar face nd was shocked,surprised,thrilled and over everything happy to see her Son Manan Singh Vadhera.!!

Dadi Dadi ''a small hand was pulling her salwaar nd Swamini looked up from the photo frame and saw her lil angel Ayush Singh Vadhera looking at her with concern

Ayush..Swamini whispered nd picked up her lil grand child and made him sit on her lap!

Dadi aap cry kyun kar rahi hai??Asked the small boy with concern nd Swamini controlled her tears and hugged the Angel infront of her who is like a light in the dark nd empty room for Swamini nd her daughter Manvi!

Kuch nahi Ayush,wo bass Dadi ki eyes main kuch chali gayi thi...she said!

Kal wo wapas aarahi hai hum sab ki zindagi ki adoora pan ko door karne aur yahi moka hai mujhe apni saari galtiyonki praishchit karne...!!
Thats all for today😊Hope u all will like this part nd some of ur confusions will be cleared😆Please R&R(Read & Review)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Lovely part dear
waiting fr next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Amazing update!!. Noooh she can't be married to someonelse rather than Virat.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Pls in nxt part virat ki entry karao nd manvi ki shadi manan se... Na i can't digest this... pls story change karo pls...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
really nice yaar
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG very shocking update manvi's shadi with dr.manan 😔 but the way u write this part is amazing great work
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oks, first of all well done sweety, ur story is amazing and im sure alot of people agree. n secondly thank u so much 4 da pm, i literally waited 4 it. n thirdly, i dnt think that manan n maanvi are married or that they have a child...maybe the baby is maanvi's and virat's, or manan's n some1else...maybe because maanvi helped manan to find his mom, now he is helping her. i could be totaly wrong,but it could happen. once again thanks 4 d pm n im w8n eagerly 4 d next part 😃 👏 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Agree with thesh, I think the kid is virat and manvi's but to save manvi from being shameless infront of her family he married her.

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